wo sab likhna hai mujhe

by bekarar on July 14, 2008, 09:20:18 AM
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«Reply #30 on: July 20, 2008, 07:51:28 AM »
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sub kuch likha sabne yahan
pur nahi un shaam ke kisse

kyon kuch nahi aata kabhi
meri jaam ke hisse....

abhi woh saaki he baaki
jo seene se lipat jaaye

abhi woh pyaala bhee to he
jo adhron se na hut paaye

abhi woh madira ki boondein
jinhe pee ke pyaas budh jaaye

madhushaala ke woh naaz aur nakhre
rindo ko jo behlaaye......

abhi woh sekadon raaten
ke jub hum ghur nahi aaye....

woh hur subah ko roothna tera...
hum kis -kis ko samjhaaye!

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«Reply #31 on: July 21, 2008, 03:45:50 AM »
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mera woh ladhkhaadana he baaki
jo tujhko fir se pighlaaye...

tera woh sehlaana he baaki
ke hum fir se hosh mein aaye...

teri aagaossh ka sirhaana bhee to thaa
hum duniya bhooltey jaaye...

abhi woh lori bhee sun-ni he
jise sun ke Khwaab suj jaaye...

 woh tera aarti gaana....
aur meri bhor ho jaaye.....

fir tera vayda lena baaki he
jo nibha hum nahi paaye.....

madira ho ya ho mehboob
vafa hum kur nahi paaye.....

kadam mere ye kaise he...
behakte chale jaaye....

abhi woh sekadon raate..
ke jub hum ghar nahi aaye...

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«Reply #32 on: July 21, 2008, 07:25:25 PM »
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pata nahi kyon pur yeh dhun hothon se juda hi nahi ho rahi...kya jaado he aapke thread mein...bekararji.

abhi woh farz likhna hain
nibha jo main nahi paaya!

abhi woh karz likhna hain
jo chuka main nahi paaya!

abhi woh tarz bhee to hain
geet jispe bun nahi paaya!

abhi woh marz bhee baaki
jisko dawa ne nahi khaaya!

abhi to aur bhee kitna
main kuch bhee de nahi paaya!

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«Reply #33 on: July 21, 2008, 07:31:41 PM »
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wah Prateek ji, bahoot khoob...ek se bad kar ek rachnaye rach rahe hai app..  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #34 on: July 21, 2008, 07:40:30 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 21, 2008, 07:31:41 PM
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wah Prateek ji, bahoot khoob...ek se bad kar ek rachnaye rach rahe hai app..  Applause Applause Applause


shukriya pooja ji,aapne yeh panktiyaan padhi --mein dhoond hi raha thaa..ki koi shrota mil jaaye...aapne padhi-meri khushkismati he.dhnyawaad.
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«Reply #35 on: July 21, 2008, 08:38:14 PM »
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prateek ji.....
kamal kar rahe hain aap to janab.......likhate rahiye ...
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«Reply #36 on: July 21, 2008, 08:54:42 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 21, 2008, 08:38:14 PM
prateek ji.....
kamal kar rahe hain aap to janab.......likhate rahiye ...

Aapne dhun hi aisi chedi he....ki geet khud gunguna rahe he.sub aapka kiya dhara he...jhaltey rahiyega.....


abhi woh aas hey likhni
jo kabhi tumne thee baandhi

abhi woh saans hey likhni
ho jismey poori azaadi

abhi woh raaz likhne he
jo laaye they kabhi aandhi

abhi woh gaaz he likhni
jinsey aayi thee barbaadi!

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«Reply #37 on: July 21, 2008, 08:58:21 PM »
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WAH KAY ABAAT HAI.. Parteek ji.. bahot acha lag raha hai apko parr kar..
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«Reply #38 on: July 21, 2008, 09:06:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 21, 2008, 08:58:21 PM
WAH KAY ABAAT HAI.. Parteek ji.. bahot acha lag raha hai apko parr kar..



shukriya pooja ji.aap ne manobal badhaaya he...tabhi kuch bun paaya he..

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«Reply #39 on: July 22, 2008, 04:02:24 AM »
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likh paya hai kon dil ke dard ko
likh paya hai kon khushi ke ahsaas ko
shabd hai yah, arth jo kabhi samjha nahi paaate
likh paaya hain kon, dil-e-zazbaat ko
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«Reply #40 on: July 22, 2008, 04:08:53 AM »
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bahoot khoob sarthika ji.......nice lines

wah prateek ji....sama bhandh diya aapne to ...........

abhi wo ghav baaqi hai,
jo bus riste hi jaaye,

abhi wo daav baaqi hai,
jise hum jeet na paaye,

abhi wo naav baaqi hai,
jo majhdaare ki ho jaaye,
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«Reply #41 on: July 22, 2008, 04:34:49 AM »
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wah prateek ji....sama bhandh diya aapne to ...........

abhi wo ghav baaqi hai,
jo bus riste hi jaaye,

abhi wo daav baaqi hai,
jise hum jeet na paaye,

abhi wo naav baaqi hai,
jo majhdaare ki ho jaaye,

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bekarar ji,
sama t aap hi ne baandha thaa,hum to matr shareek ho gaye...

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«Reply #42 on: July 22, 2008, 05:46:22 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2008, 07:38:16 PM
Yahan sab ki post padhi..sab ne ek se badh ke ek likha hai.....Bohot khoob Sanjeev, Mahiya, K. Shael and Bhawna Applause Applause Applause

shukriya celmira....aapki housla afzai....ke liye...
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«Reply #43 on: July 22, 2008, 05:49:44 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 14, 2008, 01:43:51 PM
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wah bahoot khoob Sanjeev, MAhiya and Shally!!

shukriya pooja ji...hamesha ki tarah aapne khule dil se taareef kee
aapne kuch likha nahi......?
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«Reply #44 on: July 22, 2008, 06:14:37 AM »
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kya likhu kya na likhu
abhi har baat baaki hai

tufaano mei jab ghir gaye the ham
wo majhdaar mei abhi tak naav baaki hai

fulo ki khwaahish me jo chubhe the kaante
unhi kaanto se daaman chudana baaqi hai

likhte likhte shabd bhi khatm ho chale hain ab
par kyu reh gayi hamari mohbat adhuri wo dastan baaqi hai

bundon ki rimjhim se bhujti hai jameen ki pyaas saari
abhi mere dil ki pyaas ka bhujna baaqi hai

sochti hoon mein ab kaise jiyongi tanha
abhi zindgi ko shayd samjhna baaqi hai
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