wo sab likhna hai mujhe

by bekarar on July 14, 2008, 09:20:18 AM

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«Reply #45 on: July 22, 2008, 06:49:30 AM »

wah wah..bhawna ji....behad umda..


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #46 on: July 22, 2008, 07:06:46 AM »

thnx sanjeev ji


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #47 on: July 22, 2008, 06:33:06 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 22, 2008, 06:14:37 AM

kya likhu kya na likhu
abhi har baat baaki hai

tufaano mei jab ghir gaye the ham
wo majhdaar mei abhi tak naav baaki hai

fulo ki khwaahish me jo chubhe the kaante
unhi kaanto se daaman chudana baaqi hai

likhte likhte shabd bhi khatm ho chale hain ab
par kyu reh gayi hamari mohbat adhuri wo dastan baaqi hai

bundon ki rimjhim se bhujti hai jameen ki pyaas saari
abhi mere dil ki pyaas ka bhujna baaqi hai

sochti hoon mein ab kaise jiyongi tanha
abhi zindgi ko shayd samjhna baaqi hai

bahoot khoob bhawna... good lines


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #48 on: July 22, 2008, 06:39:16 PM »

abhi woh aah hey baaki
halak me jo kub se thee atkaayi!

abhi woh chaah he baaki
jo charche bun nahi paayi!

abhi woh raah bhee to hey
roshan jo na ho paayi!

abhi woh 'waah' likhni he
jisey tu sun ke itraayi!

likhtey rahe itna to
jaane kya-kya na kehdenge
mujhe dur he bus zara itna
sach ki ho jaaye na ruswaai!

Prateek


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #49 on: July 22, 2008, 06:41:36 PM »

Waj ji wah Prateek ji kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob

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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #50 on: July 22, 2008, 06:48:44 PM »


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #51 on: July 22, 2008, 07:11:18 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 22, 2008, 06:41:36 PM

Waj ji wah Prateek ji kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob

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shukriya ji pooja ji.aapki kalam ko yeh thread nahi bhaa rahi he kya...kuch shabd aap bhee loota de...

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«Reply #52 on: July 22, 2008, 07:16:56 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 22, 2008, 06:48:44 PM

bekarar bhai-adhar itne vyast ki koi alfaaz nahi...aur haath khule ki taali baja rahe he....
confusion yehi he --ki pyaala aapka kisne pakda hain?


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #53 on: July 25, 2008, 03:17:58 AM »

abhi woh karm hein baaki
jo karna hum nahi chahe!

abhi woh dharm hein baaki
jo hum karke pachtaaye!

abhi woh marm bhee likhney
jo dil mein they ubhar aaye!

abhi woh charm bhee baaki
ki sub ehsaas mur jaaye!

Prateek


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #54 on: July 25, 2008, 03:32:17 AM »

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Prateek ji


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«Reply #55 on: July 25, 2008, 03:36:37 AM »

Quote from: sarthika on July 25, 2008, 03:32:17 AM

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Prateek ji

shukriya sarthika ji-aapne prashansa ki is kalam se nikle hue shabdon ki.


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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #56 on: July 25, 2008, 05:57:31 AM »

bohut khoob prateek ji nice lines


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«Reply #57 on: July 25, 2008, 08:28:07 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 25, 2008, 05:57:31 AM

bohut khoob prateek ji nice lines

taaref ka atyant shurguzaar,bhawna ji.


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe

«Reply #58 on: July 25, 2008, 08:37:21 AM »

u r welcome ji

karlo kuch aur baatein k
abhi shaam baaqi hai

adhure chaand k saath
hasin raat abhi baaqi hai

kyu keh nahi dete jo tere dil mei hai chupa
aankhein kar rahi hain bayan bas alfaz baaqi hai

yu hi sabra mei kat na jaaye zindgi tanha
k tum kehte rahoge k kehne k liye abhi umra baaqi hai

na tod e-hamdam k khushiyon se dil hai jara bhara
k dhadkan mei mere tera samaa jaana baaqi hai

tere honto se kuch shabnami oos hai girti k
mere aachal ko abhi tera sparsh karna baaqi hai