wo sab likhna hai mujhe

by bekarar on July 14, 2008, 09:20:18 AM
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«Reply #60 on: July 25, 2008, 04:47:21 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Prateek ji and Bhawna !!
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«Reply #61 on: July 27, 2008, 07:10:38 AM »
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Bhawna ji,

bahut meethi shikaayat likhi hein apni.

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«Reply #62 on: July 27, 2008, 07:11:52 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 25, 2008, 04:47:21 PM
wah bahoot khoob Prateek ji and Bhawna !!

shukriya pooja ji aapka-sada hausla afzahi ke liye.
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«Reply #63 on: July 27, 2008, 07:28:01 AM »
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abhi woh shatranj ki baazi
ki jismey main thaa ek mohra

woh adhoori dastaan bhee hein
ki tera vyaktitv thaa dohra!

abhi kahaani poori likhni hein
jhoot se chutt jayega kohra!

likhna hein abhi kitna
yeh mein tay kar nhai paaya
meri tahreer ki zad mein
abhi to kuch nahi aaya!

Prateek

(aakhri do panktiyaan is thread ki pehli prernadaayak kavita se fir se judne ke liye wahaan se li hui he)
 
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«Reply #64 on: July 30, 2008, 02:17:35 PM »
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Wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji!! Is thread mai hamesha apki nai rachna ka intzaar rahta hai!! Ajj kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..

Abhi wo dard likhna hai
Jo tujhko mere sung rula de

Abhi wo ansoo likhna hai
jo tujhe mera dard samjha de

Abhi wo nigah likhni hai
jo tera dil dhardka de

Abhi wo line likhni hai
jo tere lub gunguna de

abhi wo gazal likhni hai
jo meri maout ka sabab tujhe samjha de

abhi wo sab likhna hai mujhe
jo tujhe meri zindagi ka saar samjha de!!
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«Reply #65 on: July 30, 2008, 02:22:22 PM »
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Pooja di, Prateek ji and Bhavna ji sabne bahut accha likha hai. Bahut accha laga padkar.

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Abhi wo nigah likhni hai
jo tera dil dhardka de

Abhi wo line likhni hai
jo tere lub gunguna de

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«Reply #66 on: July 30, 2008, 02:52:33 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 27, 2008, 07:28:01 AM
abhi woh shatranj ki baazi
ki jismey main thaa ek mohra

woh adhoori dastaan bhee hein
ki tera vyaktitv thaa dohra!

abhi kahaani poori likhni hein
jhoot se chutt jayega kohra!

likhna hein abhi kitna
yeh mein tay kar nhai paaya
meri tahreer ki zad mein
abhi to kuch nahi aaya!

Prateek

(aakhri do panktiyaan is thread ki pehli prernadaayak kavita se fir se judne ke liye wahaan se li hui he)
 

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prateek ji
aap to chaa gaye is thread me.....kya baat hai janab...bahoot khoob unchaai par liye jaa rahe hain aap ise...likhte rahiye...aur hum gungunate rehe...

Quote from: Pooja on July 30, 2008, 02:17:35 PM
Wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji!! Is thread mai hamesha apki nai rachna ka intzaar rahta hai!! Ajj kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..

Abhi wo dard likhna hai
Jo tujhko mere sung rula de

Abhi wo ansoo likhna hai
jo tujhe mera dard samjha de

Abhi wo nigah likhni hai
jo tera dil dhardka de

Abhi wo line likhni hai
jo tere lub gunguna de

abhi wo gazal likhni hai
jo meri maout ka sabab tujhe samjha de

abhi wo sab likhna hai mujhe
jo tujhe meri zindagi ka saar samjha de!!

han ji to aakhir uthani hi padi na kalam aapko bhi...mai bas dekh hi raha tha ki kab aap apne aapko rok paati hain...likhne se...
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bahoot achcha likha pooja ji.....
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«Reply #67 on: July 30, 2008, 02:56:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 30, 2008, 02:22:22 PM
Pooja di, Prateek ji and Bhavna ji sabne bahut accha likha hai. Bahut accha laga padkar.

Pooja di..
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Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #68 on: July 30, 2008, 02:58:09 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 30, 2008, 02:52:33 PM
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han ji to aakhir uthani hi padi na kalam aapko bhi...mai bas dekh hi raha tha ki kab aap apne aapko rok paati hain...likhne se...
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bahoot achcha likha pooja ji.....

Shukaria Bekarar ji.. maafi chahti hu apki itna intzaar karwaya.. magar ajkal kalam such main kuch likh hi nahi pa rahi!! sad5
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«Reply #69 on: August 04, 2008, 07:12:33 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 30, 2008, 02:17:35 PM
Wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji!! Is thread mai hamesha apki nai rachna ka intzaar rahta hai!! Ajj kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..

Abhi wo dard likhna hai
Jo tujhko mere sung rula de

Abhi wo ansoo likhna hai
jo tujhe mera dard samjha de

Abhi wo nigah likhni hai
jo tera dil dhardka de

Abhi wo line likhni hai
jo tere lub gunguna de

abhi wo gazal likhni hai
jo meri maout ka sabab tujhe samjha de

abhi wo sab likhna hai mujhe
jo tujhe meri zindagi ka saar samjha de!!


aapki kalam ka vaakai intzaar thaa yahaan...aapka prayas saraahniye he.shukriya.
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«Reply #70 on: August 04, 2008, 07:15:49 PM »
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prateek ji
aap to chaa gaye is thread me.....kya baat hai janab...bahoot khoob unchaai par liye jaa rahe hain aap ise...likhte rahiye...aur hum gungunate rehe...


sub aapka kiya dhara hein hazoor..ub aap jheltey rahiyega...

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«Reply #71 on: August 04, 2008, 07:16:35 PM »
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Yoindia per kuch bhi likhati hu to uske baad kai mitro ke comments ka intzaar rahta hai, jin main se ek app bhi hai Prateek ji, shukaria apne waqat diya, parra aor comments likhe. Kuch khas sahyog nahi de saki, magar list main naam jaroor likhwa liya ki kuch likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #72 on: August 04, 2008, 07:20:31 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 30, 2008, 02:22:22 PM
Pooja di, Prateek ji and Bhavna ji sabne bahut accha likha hai. Bahut accha laga padkar.

shukriya roja ji--aapki saraahna ka.

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«Reply #73 on: December 19, 2008, 07:42:51 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai, ajj phir ek baar yah thread parra, dil khush ho gaya... her ek ne ek se bad kar ek kavita likhi hai yaha per!! Good work Team!!
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«Reply #74 on: December 19, 2008, 07:49:35 PM »
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yeh thread mera bhee bhee bahut favourite raha hein,iski yaad taaza karaane ke liye,shukriya pooja ji.vaakai khoobsurat hein.
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