<>*wo unhe saja k laaye hain*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 22, 2010, 07:29:59 AM
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<>*wo unhe saja k laaye hain*<>


Dil  cheer k chhalni kar gaye ehsass unke
Kuch  iss andaaz me wo unhe saja k laaye hain

Dard ki aankhon se bhi ashk beh nikle hain aaj
Kuch iss tarah wo unhe sabse chhupake laye hain

Jo na keh sake hum erubaru kabhi apne dil ki baat
Wo unhe gazlon me geeton  me saja kar laaye hain

Har baat pe bas waahhh hi wahhh niklata hai dil se
Apne dard ko wo aisa dilkash libaas pehna k laaye hain…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 08:22:27 AM »
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end lines are just superb--
Bahut Khubsurat hai aapka ye Nagma--
"Kasak Mam gazab h aapki likhawat
isme hai dard e dil ki milawat
       uss par hai anokhe andaaz ki sajawat
       wah wah to karenge dil se bina kisi dikhawat "
thanx
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2010, 08:31:19 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kasak ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurti Se Aapne Apne Dil Ke ehsaas Ko lafzon mein Zaahir Kiya

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 08:32:01 AM »
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badi achchi lagi ji hume aapki waah waahi
shukriya nirala ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 09:07:37 AM »
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Wah Ji Wah!
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki ANU
Woh aayen hain aur unhe laayen hain
Dono ek saath milne aur milane aayen hain
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2010, 11:31:23 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK....DIL KI JI...

WA JAB BHI HAMARE PAAS AAYE HAIN
WO KUCH BHI HAME NA KAHE PAAYE HAIN
LEKIN APNE EHSAAS APNI AANKHON MEIN
HAMESHA "WO UNHE SAJA KE LAAYE HAIN"..
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2010, 12:27:06 PM »
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Wah wah..Kya baat hai Anu-di...geeton ki barsaat ho rahi hai aaj.....superb.. icon_king icon_queen Clapping Smiley
 
Hosh mere udda deeye unke deedaar nay
Hothon pe aysi muskaan sajja k aaye hain

Wo aaj mujhko dil se manaane aaye hain
Saath me unke wo sajji doli bhi laaye hain

Kya kahu tose o-meri pyaari-pyaari sakhee
Wo aaj geet mere he gungunaate aaye hain


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 22, 2010, 07:29:59 AM
<>*wo unhe saja k laaye hain*<>


Dil  cheer k chhalni kar gaye ehsass unke
Kuch  iss andaaz me wo unhe saja k laaye hain

Dard ki aankhon se bhi ashk beh nikle hain aaj
Kuch iss tarah wo unhe sabse chhupake laye hain

Jo na keh sake hum erubaru kabhi apne dil ki baat
Wo unhe gazlon me geeton  me saja kar laaye hain

Har baat pe bas waahhh hi wahhh niklata hai dil se
Apne dard ko wo aisa dilkash libaas pehna k laaye hain…!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 12:35:58 PM »
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ab me apki aur tarif nahi kar sakta anamika ji........me thaka nahi hu but words khatam ho chuke he so bas meri taraf se bhi kuch lines pesh kar raha hu......god bless u

Kya Kahe Ab Tumse Janam
Hum Tere Hi To Humsaye He

Dikhta He Tere Dil Me Jo He
Tu Sochti He Tu Chupaye He

Shayari To Ek Bahana He Jalim
Yaha Dil Se Dil Hi Takraye He

Mera Kya He Kal Rahu Na Rahu
Rahe Mahfil U Hi Roshna Jo Tu Yaha Sajaye He

Na Bahana Ek Ashq Bhi Khatri Mere
Teri Hasi Ke Liye Ki Humne Bahot Duaye He
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2010, 12:46:01 PM »
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rajaji ye reply mujhe achcha nahinlaga aapka..aur aap jante hain k kyun......
likha bht ahch ahai but........................
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2010, 12:50:24 PM »
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 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 sad11 Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled ! Puzzled !
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2010, 01:02:38 PM »
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O-Rana k vanshaj MG ji...ye kaisi mayusi ki baat...
kaayron wali baat...kyu itne darre darre ho....
Kyu har poem mai tum karte marne ki he baat.... sad7 sad5
Arre jeevan ka har pal jiyo tum khushi-khushi....
Aur na kaho koi aysi baat jis-se dil dukhe tere apno ka...
Jo mila uss me santosh karna seekho...gila nahi shikva nahi...

Sorry chhote muh badi baat keh di ho tou....
Rishtedaar ho naa mere so itna keh diya...


Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 22, 2010, 12:35:58 PM
ab me apki aur tarif nahi kar sakta anamika ji........me thaka nahi hu but words khatam ho chuke he so bas meri taraf se bhi kuch lines pesh kar raha hu......god bless u

Kya Kahe Ab Tumse Janam
Hum Tere Hi To Humsaye He

Dikhta He Tere Dil Me Jo He
Tu Sochti He Tu Chupaye He

Shayari To Ek Bahana He Jalim
Yaha Dil Se Dil Hi Takraye He

Mera Kya He Kal Rahu Na Rahu
Rahe Mahfil U Hi Roshna Jo Tu Yaha Sajaye He

Na Bahana Ek Ashq Bhi Khatri Mere
Teri Hasi Ke Liye Ki Humne Bahot Duaye He
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2010, 01:07:55 PM »
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rishtedar....hmmmmm........haq banta he........

mera bhi haq he ye lo  violent1 violent1 violent1 violent1 violent1 violent1 pain10 pain10 pain10 pain10 pain10 pain10 violent5 violent5 violent5 violent5 violent5 violent5 dontknow dontknow dontknow dontknow dontknow
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2010, 01:13:18 PM »
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ye kya hai ji mein nahi samjhi...
kya khud ki peetaayi kar rahe ho...
ess kaam k liya mujhe aur Anu-di ko he bulaa lete....
khamkha kast diya khud ko.....he he he he he he he he ...

ye emoticons kahaan se laaye bataana chahiye mujhe bhi.....?
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2010, 01:23:58 PM »
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pitayi khakar bhi shetani kam nahi hui he apki....well u r so swet.....ye emotion jab preview karte he tab jo emotion aate he unki niche hi more emotion likha ata he us pe clik kijiye waha apko mil jayenge ......aur fir bhi na mile to anamika ji se jakar bolna wo sachmuch ka hammer aur pitayi ka sab saman de dengi........  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2010, 01:30:06 PM »
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Dekho sakhee ye Rana humko samjhaane aaye hain
Peetayi ka saara saamaan tum se mangwaaye hain
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