-----/// Wo yaad aataa rahaa /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 27, 2012, 01:22:22 PM
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naa  mere  din  ka  thikaanaa  rahaa  naa  hi  mere raaton ka rahaa
kisi  cheez  ka  apni  jagah  rehna  huwa  to  uski  yaadon ka rahaa

subah  se  lekar  har  shaam  tak  bas   usi  kaa chehraa yaad rahaa
aabaad  huwaa  har  kisi  ka  jahaan ,  bas  ek  mera barbaad rahaa

suraj  ki  roshni  me  dekhaa , chaand   ki  chaandni  me bhi dekhaa
ek  mera  yaar hai jo meri  nazron se  hameshaa  gumshudaa rahaa

use galiyon me, chaubaaron me paagalon  ki tarha  dhundta rahaa
naa milaa mujhe kahin , jaane  kahaan  chhiptaa chhipaataa  rahaa

main deewaanaa usko yaad karke ,  usse duur bas tadaptaa  rahaa
wo duur kahin baith ke meraa  dard  dekh bas  muskuraataa rahaa

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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2012, 05:29:19 PM »
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Usual Smile waahhhh wahhhhh wahhhhhh kp kya khub kaha hai tumne... mastam mast hai yaar
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2012, 07:28:33 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 27, 2012, 01:22:22 PM
naa  mere  din  ka  thikaanaa  rahaa  naa  hi  mere raaton ka rahaa
kisi  cheez  ka  apni  jagah  rehna  huwa  to  uski  yaadon ka rahaa

thank u ki mujhe itni shiddat se yaad karte ho. per kyon bhalaa. icon_geek icon_geek
subah  se  lekar  har  shaam  tak  bas   usi  kaa chehraa yaad rahaa
aabaad  huwaa  har  kisi  ka  jahaan ,  bas  ek  mera barbaad rahaa
acha. tum ek jagah tikk kar kabhi rahte ho aaj ye pasand aayi kal wo pasand aayi.
mere devta apne iss behis dil ko sambhalowarna aaj yahaah kah rahe ho kal pura shahr tumhaari haalat se vakif hoga. majnu kahin ke Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
suraj  ki  roshni  me  dekhaa , chaand   ki  chaandni  me bhi dekhaa
ek  mera  yaar hai jo meri  nazron se  hameshaa  gumshudaa rahaa
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa    dekhaaaaaa     aur kise dekhaaaaaaa...! waise mujhe dil ki aankho.n se dekhne ki kabhi koshish ki zara bataanaa to Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
use galiyon me, chaubaaron me paagalon  ki tarha  dhundta rahaa
naa milaa mujhe kahin , jaane  kahaan  chhiptaa chhipaataa  rahaa
oye zayada pee rakhi hai kyaa. haan peene ke baad to tumhaari aisi haalat ho hi jati hai.phirghar waale pakad kar laate hain.mujhekhabar mili hai.thik hai intezaar karo kaam khatm kar ke aati hoon.lekin tumhara kya bharo saa aise hi chalta rahaa to meri zindagi jahannum ho jaaye gi drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
main deewaanaa usko yaad karke ,  usse duur bas tadaptaa  rahaa
wo duur kahin baith ke meraa  dard  dekh bas  muskuraataa rahaa

haan haan ab to mera bussssss yehi      kaam   rah gyaa hai  naa. seducive  nature tumhaaraa hai mera nahin BangHead BangHead

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bahut khoob hriday......!
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2012, 02:44:09 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero dad hriday ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2012, 02:56:51 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee
discipilined kalaam..structure wise too..aankho ko shaanti dene vaala hara rang..waah
Sheba jee ne comment kar diya..samajhiye laakho ke baraabar
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 03:39:48 AM »
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bahut khoob kapilji achhaa nazm kiyaa hai lafzon ko
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 03:44:27 AM »
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Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley bahut bahut khoob hriday ji behtrein peshkas ke liye dheron daad qabool kijiye...
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 05:41:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Kasak ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 27, 2012, 05:29:19 PM
Usual Smile waahhhh wahhhhh wahhhhhh kp kya khub kaha hai tumne... mastam mast hai yaar
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2012, 07:39:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sheba ji for the sweet comments in the sweetest way... thank you soooo much....!!!

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bahut khoob hriday......!
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 11:11:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on August 28, 2012, 02:44:09 AM
bahut umda, dhero dad hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2012, 10:53:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji....!!!

Quote from: mkv on August 28, 2012, 02:56:51 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil jee
discipilined kalaam..structure wise too..aankho ko shaanti dene vaala hara rang..waah
Sheba jee ne comment kar diya..samajhiye laakho ke baraabar
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 28, 2012, 03:39:48 AM
bahut khoob kapilji achhaa nazm kiyaa hai lafzon ko
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Pankaj ji....!!!

Quote from: pankajwfs on August 28, 2012, 03:44:27 AM
Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley bahut bahut khoob hriday ji behtrein peshkas ke liye dheron daad qabool kijiye...
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