-----/// Woh apni kahaani dhundtaa hai ///----- Hriday

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woh  pyaasaa  hai, bas  thodaa  saa paani  dhundtaa hai
bheed  mein  woh  cheez  koi  apni  puraani dhundtaa hai

gum   hai  kuch  is  tarhaa  woh  apni  hi  zindagi  mein  ki
kitaab  ke  panno mein  woh  apni kahaani  dhundtaa hai

paagal kahun, deewaanaa kahun yaa aashiq kahun usko
woh  har  jagah  bas  mohabbat ki nishaani dhundtaa hai

kehte  hain  ki  naam  badnaam  hai  bahut  uskaa,  isliye
ghum ghum ke galiyon mein woh badnaami dhundtaa hai

aksar  kinaare  baith ke  baatein  kartaa   hai  lehron  se
woh  samundar ki  gehraaiyon  mein  paani dhundtaa hai

ek   ajeeb   saa   hi  shaqs  hai  woh,  aisi  aadat  hai uski
anjaano  mein, tasveer  jaani  pehchaani  dhundtaa   hai

sab  kuch hai magar  shaayad kuch kho gayaa hai uskaa
woh apnaa  woh bachpan, apni hi jawaani  dhundtaa hai




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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2015, 02:55:37 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2015, 04:27:02 AM »
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hridayji….. Iss ghazal ke lie…. Kya kahen samjh nahin pa rahe…. Bas itna kahenge….. Ki agar har sher par ek rau den to bhi hame kam lagega…. Bahut bahut khub…..
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2015, 03:54:56 PM »
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woh  pyaasaa  hai, bas  thodaa  saa paani  dhundtaa hai
bheed  mein  woh  cheez  koi  apni  puraani dhundtaa hai

gum   hai  kuch  is  tarhaa  woh  apni  hi  zindagi  mein  ki
kitaab  ke  panno mein  woh  apni kahaani  dhundtaa hai

paagal kahun, deewaanaa kahun yaa aashiq kahun usko
woh  har  jagah  bas  mohabbat ki nishaani dhundtaa hai

kehte  hain  ki  naam  badnaam  hai  bahut  uskaa,  isliye
ghum ghum ke galiyon mein woh badnaami dhundtaa hai

aksar  kinaare  baith ke  baatein  kartaa   hai  lehron  se
woh  samundar ki  gehraaiyon  mein  paani dhundtaa hai

ek   ajeeb   saa   hi  shaqs  hai  woh,  aisi  aadat  hai uski
anjaano  mein, tasveer  jaani  pehchaani  dhundtaa   hai

sab  kuch hai magar  shaayad kuch kho gayaa hai uskaa
woh apnaa  woh bachpan, apni hi jawaani  dhundtaa hai




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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2015, 05:28:03 PM »
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Wah sir ji behtareen

rau qabool kare
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2015, 11:53:24 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2015, 02:30:20 PM »
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woh  pyaasaa  hai, bas  thodaa  saa paani  dhundtaa hai
bheed  mein  woh  cheez  koi  apni  puraani dhundtaa hai[/i][/color] Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

gum   hai  kuch  is  tarhaa  woh  apni  hi  zindagi  mein  ki
kitaab  ke  panno mein  woh  apni kahaani  dhundtaa hai

paagal kahun, deewaanaa kahun yaa aashiq kahun usko
woh  har  jagah  bas  mohabbat ki nishaani dhundtaa hai

kehte  hain  ki  naam  badnaam  hai  bahut  uskaa,  isliye
ghum ghum ke galiyon mein woh badnaami dhundtaa hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aksar  kinaare  baith ke  baatein  kartaa   hai  lehron  se
woh  samundar ki  gehraaiyon  mein  paani dhundtaa hai

ek   ajeeb   saa   hi  shaqs  hai  woh,  aisi  aadat  hai uski
anjaano  mein, tasveer  jaani  pehchaani  dhundtaa   hai

sab  kuch hai magar  shaayad kuch kho gayaa hai uskaa
woh apnaa  woh bachpan, apni hi jawaani  dhundtaa hai[/color][/b]




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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2015, 06:39:10 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

hridayji….. Iss ghazal ke lie…. Kya kahen samjh nahin pa rahe…. Bas itna kahenge….. Ki agar har sher par ek rau den to bhi hame kam lagega…. Bahut bahut khub…..
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Raji ji....!!!

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Thank you sooo much M_B ji.....!!!

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