**Woh kya jane**

by dead heart on May 13, 2009, 05:19:11 PM
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Bahaut purani ghazal hai yeh meri..shayad pehli ghazal hai...Umeed hai pasand ayegi...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

dil tuta hai unke judai  ke ehsaas se,
dil ruta hai unke paas na hone ke ehsaas se,
hum toh akele the aur akele hi rehgaye hai,
yeh baat unka nadan dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ek kabrastan ban gayi hai,
jisme pyar dafnaya jata hai,
judaai ka fateha padaya jata hai,
yeh baat unka magroor dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

rooh behchan hai unke dhoor jane se,
log behchan hai unke paas ane se,
kitni takleef hui hai hume unki bewaffai se,
yeh baat unka nafrat bhara dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ashkon ki tarha bikhar gayi,
rooh judai ki aag main jhal gayi,
dil aansuon ke dariya man dhoob gaya,
yeh saab unka adhura dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

maut bhi nahin ati hai ab,
ansuon ne bhi saath chorr dia hai,
adhure hi reh gaye hai hum unke siva,
yeh baat unka bika hua dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2009, 05:21:53 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Rahim.
Really well done Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2009, 05:23:45 PM »
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Bahaut purani ghazal hai yeh meri..shayad pehli ghazal hai...Umeed hai pasand ayegi...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

dil tuta hai unke judai  ke ehsaas se,
dil ruta hai unke paas na hone ke ehsaas se,
hum toh akele the aur akele hi rehgaye hai,
yeh baat unka nadan dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ek kabrastan ban gayi hai,
jisme pyar dafnaya jata hai,
judaai ka fateha padaya jata hai,
yeh baat unka magroor dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

rooh behchan hai unke dhoor jane se,
log behchan hai unke paas ane se,
kitni takleef hui hai hume unki bewaffai se,
yeh baat unka nafrat bhara dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ashkon ki tarha bikhar gayi,
rooh judai ki aag main jhal gayi,
dil aansuon ke dariya man dhoob gaya,
yeh saab unka adhura dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

maut bhi nahin ati hai ab,
ansuon ne bhi saath chorr dia hai,
adhure hi reh gaye hai hum unke siva,
yeh baat unka bika hua dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...





 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob Rahim Nice lines... Thumbs UP
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2009, 05:26:24 PM »
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Shukriya Angel di aur Jaya di...
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2009, 05:57:27 PM »
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Yeah....read it before also...

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/woh-kya-jane-t39245.0.html

It was good to read it again  Winking

Bohot Khoob Rahim
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 06:04:58 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di...
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2009, 01:31:01 AM »
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mujhe toh bahut pasand aaya dead heart ji,beautiful,
aap ne bahut khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2009, 03:57:17 AM »
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Zindagi Kabaristan ban gayee hain....Wah kya lafz jode hain Bohat Khoob DH..
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 05:43:40 AM »
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Mindblowing.. bahoot bahoot pyara likha hai.. aur bahoot sweet hai yea .. thank u dobara se post karne k liye...

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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2009, 05:59:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob dh ji !                 wo kya jane pyar kya hota hai,kyon ye dil tanhai main rota hai,lekin wo samajhte nahin,unke bina jeena kitna dushwar hota hai.
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2009, 07:15:17 AM »
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Bahaut purani ghazal hai yeh meri..shayad pehli ghazal hai...Umeed hai pasand ayegi...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

dil tuta hai unke judai  ke ehsaas se,
dil ruta hai unke paas na hone ke ehsaas se,
hum toh akele the aur akele hi rehgaye hai,
yeh baat unka nadan dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ek kabrastan ban gayi hai,
jisme pyar dafnaya jata hai,
judaai ka fateha padaya jata hai,
yeh baat unka magroor dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

rooh behchan hai unke dhoor jane se,
log behchan hai unke paas ane se,
kitni takleef hui hai hume unki bewaffai se,
yeh baat unka nafrat bhara dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

zindagi ashkon ki tarha bikhar gayi,
rooh judai ki aag main jhal gayi,
dil aansuon ke dariya man dhoob gaya,
yeh saab unka adhura dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...

maut bhi nahin ati hai ab,
ansuon ne bhi saath chorr dia hai,
adhure hi reh gaye hai hum unke siva,
yeh baat unka bika hua dil kya jane...

hum unse kitna pyar karte hai yeh woh kya jane,
pyar ka sahi matlab ek dil ka katil kya jane...




AANSUON NE BHI SAATH CHOAD DIYA HAI......BAHAT ACHCHEY....DH
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2009, 07:15:20 PM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh jee, Ghayel Saheb, Sophi di, KA jee aur Sager jee..

Bahaut achi addition ki hai apne Sager jee... Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2009, 03:31:15 PM »
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BOhat Achche Rahim Bhai,.
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2009, 10:02:48 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2009, 11:34:02 AM »
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Rahim ... Applause
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