-----/// Woh musaafir thaa ///----- Hriday

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aasaan   nahi   milan   fir  se, ek   baar  bichhad   jaane  ke  baad
musaafir   waapas  nahi aataa, ek  baar  guzar  jaane   ke  baad


woh  musaafir  thaa,  use  kuch  pal  hi  saath   nibhaanaa  thaa
raat  ke  khatam  hote  hi  use  bahut  duur  chale  jaanaa  thaa

aayaa  thaa  kuch  pal, woh  thakaan  duur  karne  apni yahaan
kab  kahaa  thaa  usne,  ki  yeh  uskaa   aakhri  thikaanaa  thaa

waaqif   thaa   taaqat  se  samundar   ki  lehron  ke  main,  lekin
meri naasamjhi  mujhe  ret  se hi  apnaa   ghar  banaanaa thaa

usne  to  kahaa  bhi  nahi  kabhi, 'Mujhe  tumse  mohabbat  hai'
magar  kyun  main samajh baithaa, kyaa main deewaanaa thaa

jab  bhi   kabhi   likhi    jaayegi    kahaani  meri,  log  kahenge  ki
mohabbat mein shamaa ke  jalne waalaa, woh parwaanaa thaa

kismat ne  mere hi, thaa  mazaakh  achchaa   mere saath kiyaa
use  dil   tod  jaanaa thaa, dekh  kar  mujhe  muskuraanaa thaa





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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2014, 08:30:05 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2014, 03:34:36 AM »
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Excellent writing wow.. bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2014, 05:12:11 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2014, 04:43:01 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2014, 08:02:14 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब.....
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2014, 07:02:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji....!!!

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 25, 2014, 08:30:05 PM
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Mujhe Thi har lamha mohabbat unse bepanaah ,
Suna hai....Aadhe lamhe k liye,  usne bhi mujhe chaha tha.....

bahut hi khoob likha hai Hriday ji....dil mein utar gayi aapki ye poem.....aur padhkar do lines likh gayi....likhte rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2014, 03:33:52 AM »
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बहुत खूब...............................
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thank u sooo much Kumaar ji...!!!


Quote from: kumaar on October 26, 2014, 03:34:36 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Jeet ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Amit....!!!

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Mujhe Thi har lamha mohabbat unse bepanaah ,
Suna hai....Aadhe lamhe k liye,  usne bhi mujhe chaha tha.....

bahut hi khoob likha hai Hriday ji....dil mein utar gayi aapki ye poem.....aur padhkar do lines likh gayi....likhte rahiye


bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pooja ji jo aapne ise waqt diyaa aur pasand kiyaa...!!!


humein to dard is baat kaa thaa ki woh humein chhod gaye bich raah mein hi
chalo yeh sochkar hi khush ho lenge ki shayad kuch pal ke liye mohabbat rahaa hogaa...
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2015, 06:31:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Harash ji....!!!


Quote from: Harash Mahajan on November 02, 2014, 03:33:52 AM
बहुत खूब...............................
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