Woh Shayar Bhi Kya Shayar "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 07, 2010, 11:47:30 AM
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Jis Halaat Se Hum Guzarte Hai
Unhe Qaid Kar Lete Hai Apni Tehreer mein

Zubaan Ki Zaroorat Nahi Humein!!!
Apni Baat Keh Dete Hai Hum Lafzon ki Tasveer Mein

Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein

Acha Hoon Yaa Bura Hoon!!! Bas Yehi Hoon!!!!!
"Khwaish" Likhta Nahi kabhi Kisi bandi Hui Lakeer Mein

Shukriya Ada Zaroor Karta Hoon unka Jo Kuch Mashwara Dete Hai!!!
Kuch To Dum Hoga Unki Di Hui Tadbeer mein

"Khwaish" Likhta Rahega Humesha Dil Ke Kalam Se
Sukh-Dukh Ka Kya Hai Woh To Likha Hai Har Ek Ki Taqdeer Mein

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2010, 01:10:51 PM »
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VERY NICE  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
KHWAISH JI.
AAP SACHMUCH KAID NAHIN HAIN.
UUDNE KE LIYE PANKHON KE MOHTAZ NAHIN HAIN.
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2010, 06:23:14 PM »
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Haan likte rehna Khwahish jee... Bahaut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2010, 06:49:28 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji.ek se badke ek kavita likhte ho aap.bahut bahut khoob.marvelous creation.aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2010, 07:13:13 PM »
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AAPNEY BAHUT GAHRI BAAT KAHI HAI BAHUT ACHCHA LIKHA HAI KHAWAISH JI...KUCH LOGON KO MASHWERA DENEY KI BURI AADAT HAI........AAP JIS TARAH SEY CHAHAIN APNI BAAT RAKH SAKTEY HAIN.....AUR MAIN IMPROVISATION PER BELIEVE RAKHTI HOON........AUR UNN LOGON SEY GUZARISH HAI...... PLZ BINA MANGEY MASHWARA NAA DAIN AUR (P.M) NA BHEJAIN.....!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2010, 09:09:47 PM »
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bahut hi badhiya likha hai khwaish ji...sach mein bahut hi umda...
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«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2010, 09:31:22 AM »
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बहुत अच्छा लिखा है बॉस
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2010, 11:02:23 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish ji. Bahut achha likha hai. Shandaar.
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2010, 11:03:35 PM »
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Mashallah Khwaish Bhai Aapki Har Shayari Mein Koi Na Koi Paighaam Rehta Hai,.

Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke Is Kalaam Ko,.

Ek Choti Koshish Apni Bhi,.

Main Shayar Hoon Khulke Apne Jazbaat Likhoonga,.
Din Ko Din Raat Ko Raat Likhoonga,.

Tum Koshish Na Karo Kabhi Kaid Karne Ki Mujhe,.
Main To Bas Awaam Ke Dil Ki Baat Likhoonga,.

"Azeem" Hai Shayari Doston, Jo Dil Rakhe Wohi Samjhe Ise,.
Mujhe Jo Mila Hai Shayari Se, Main Bas Wo Tajurbaat Likhoonga,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2010, 03:06:53 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2010, 11:47:30 AM
Jis Halaat Se Hum Guzarte Hai
Unhe Qaid Kar Lete Hai Apni Tehreer mein

Zubaan Ki Zaroorat Nahi Humein!!!
Apni Baat Keh Dete Hai Hum Lafzon ki Tasveer Mein

Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein

Acha Hoon Yaa Bura Hoon!!! Bas Yehi Hoon!!!!!
"Khwaish" Likhta Nahi kabhi Kisi bandi Hui Lakeer Mein

Shukriya Ada Zaroor Karta Hoon unka Jo Kuch Mashwara Dete Hai!!!
Kuch To Dum Hoga Unki Di Hui Tadbeer mein

"Khwaish" Likhta Rahega Humesha Dil Ke Kalam Se
Sukh-Dukh Ka Kya Hai Woh To Likha Hai Har Ek Ki Taqdeer Mein

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Wonderful... Applause Applause Esp...the following lines...  Thumbs UP
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Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2010, 03:10:38 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on March 09, 2010, 11:03:35 PM
Mashallah Khwaish Bhai Aapki Har Shayari Mein Koi Na Koi Paighaam Rehta Hai,.

Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke Is Kalaam Ko,.

Ek Choti Koshish Apni Bhi,.

Main Shayar Hoon Khulke Apne Jazbaat Likhoonga,.
Din Ko Din Raat Ko Raat Likhoonga,.

Tum Koshish Na Karo Kabhi Kaid Karne Ki Mujhe,.
Main To Bas Awaam Ke Dil Ki Baat Likhoonga,.

"Azeem" Hai Shayari Doston, Jo Dil Rakhe Wohi Samjhe Ise,.
Mujhe Jo Mila Hai Shayari Se, Main Bas Wo Tajurbaat Likhoonga,.

-Azeem-
ahaa.... kya baat hai brother bahut bahut acche  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2010, 07:35:09 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2010, 11:47:30 AM
Jis Halaat Se Hum Guzarte Hai
Unhe Qaid Kar Lete Hai Apni Tehreer mein

Zubaan Ki Zaroorat Nahi Humein!!!
Apni Baat Keh Dete Hai Hum Lafzon ki Tasveer Mein

Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein

Acha Hoon Yaa Bura Hoon!!! Bas Yehi Hoon!!!!!
"Khwaish" Likhta Nahi kabhi Kisi bandi Hui Lakeer Mein

Shukriya Ada Zaroor Karta Hoon unka Jo Kuch Mashwara Dete Hai!!!
Kuch To Dum Hoga Unki Di Hui Tadbeer mein

"Khwaish" Likhta Rahega Humesha Dil Ke Kalam Se
Sukh-Dukh Ka Kya Hai Woh To Likha Hai Har Ek Ki Taqdeer Mein

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 10, 2010, 12:26:53 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2010, 11:47:30 AM
Jis Halaat Se Hum Guzarte Hai
Unhe Qaid Kar Lete Hai Apni Tehreer mein

Zubaan Ki Zaroorat Nahi Humein!!!
Apni Baat Keh Dete Hai Hum Lafzon ki Tasveer Mein

Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein

Acha Hoon Yaa Bura Hoon!!! Bas Yehi Hoon!!!!!
"Khwaish" Likhta Nahi kabhi Kisi bandi Hui Lakeer Mein

Shukriya Ada Zaroor Karta Hoon unka Jo Kuch Mashwara Dete Hai!!!
Kuch To Dum Hoga Unki Di Hui Tadbeer mein

"Khwaish" Likhta Rahega Humesha Dil Ke Kalam Se
Sukh-Dukh Ka Kya Hai Woh To Likha Hai Har Ek Ki Taqdeer Mein

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Kuch alag, kuch naya...bohot bohot khoob Dost  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 10, 2010, 12:27:57 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on March 09, 2010, 11:03:35 PM
Mashallah Khwaish Bhai Aapki Har Shayari Mein Koi Na Koi Paighaam Rehta Hai,.

Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke Is Kalaam Ko,.

Ek Choti Koshish Apni Bhi,.

Main Shayar Hoon Khulke Apne Jazbaat Likhoonga,.
Din Ko Din Raat Ko Raat Likhoonga,.

Tum Koshish Na Karo Kabhi Kaid Karne Ki Mujhe,.
Main To Bas Awaam Ke Dil Ki Baat Likhoonga,.

"Azeem" Hai Shayari Doston, Jo Dil Rakhe Wohi Samjhe Ise,.
Mujhe Jo Mila Hai Shayari Se, Main Bas Wo Tajurbaat Likhoonga,.

-Azeem-

Bohot Khoob Bhai Azeem
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 07, 2010, 06:23:14 PM
Haan likte rehna Khwahish jee... Bahaut khoob! Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Usual Smile
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