~*~ Woh shayar hi kya jo dil se na likhe ~*~ by Rahim

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Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 03:41:59 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Achi Soch Aur AChi Leh Par Likha Hai Aapne Par Haan Sach Mein Kam Likha Hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 03:45:00 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2011, 03:41:59 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Achi Soch Aur AChi Leh Par Likha Hai Aapne Par Haan Sach Mein Kam Likha Hai


Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish Dost..
Haan kam likh paya..beeke, deekhe, likhe, seekhe..bas itne hi
rhymes mile the..
lavz ki kami rehgayi..soch ki nahin..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 03:46:58 PM »
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rahim ji......bahot kam likha he magar jo lkiha he wo bahot aacha likha he......bahot kam me bahot kuch kah gaye aap...bahot khoob sahab
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 03:48:11 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 02, 2011, 03:46:58 PM
rahim ji......bahot kam likha he magar jo lkiha he wo bahot aacha likha he......bahot kam me bahot kuch kah gaye aap...bahot khoob sahab
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Utkars jee..
Dil se..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 03:57:32 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut acha likha hai rahim..
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 03:59:44 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 02, 2011, 03:57:32 PM
Bahut acha likha hai rahim..
Shukriya Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 06:21:32 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut acche aur sacche khayaaloN ko pesh kiya hai aapne .. Rahim Ji ! bahut khoob ...dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 07:20:32 PM »
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Khoob Rahim Ji...
Zara Sa Sochte To
Shayad Aur Bhi Lfaz Mil Jaate
Jaise Ki...

Thikhe.

Phinke.

Chikhen

Bhikhen

Khair

Khush Rahen
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 07:57:32 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 02, 2011, 06:21:32 PM
Bahut acche aur sacche khayaaloN ko pesh kiya hai aapne .. Rahim Ji ! bahut khoob ...dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Naresh jee..
yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 08:01:10 PM »
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Quote from: HUM_DUM on February 02, 2011, 07:20:32 PM
Khoob Rahim Ji...
Zara Sa Sochte To
Shayad Aur Bhi Lfaz Mil Jaate
Jaise Ki...

Thikhe.

Phinke.

Chikhen

Bhikhen

Khair

Khush Rahen
Shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 03:18:20 AM »
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wah bahut umda Rahim ji.
kisne kaha aapko ye chota hai.
janaab kam wo hota hai jisme kuch seekhne ko aur jaane ko na mile.
poora complete hai aur bahut khub hai.
2 line ke sher bhi poori Kitaab hoti hai na Rahim jee.
aapki sachhi baate bhi bahut kamaal hai.
daal hai ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 07:22:56 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
wahhhhhhhhhh last lines ke liye

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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 08:03:27 AM »
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bahut khub rahimji......

umda

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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 08:50:16 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
Sorry bahaut kam lines likh paya hoon..

Khusiyon kay saath ghum hai zindagi main isiliye,
Insaan inse jo chahe woh seekhe..

Do logon ko saath dekh itna socha na karo,
Har baar yahan waisa nahin hota jaisa deekhe..

Insaanon ki bheed main woh momin hi hai,
Halaaton se harkar jo rupiyon kay liye na beekhe..

Jazbaat chahe be-jan ho; likh diya karo ‘Khamosh’,
Woh shayar hi kya; jo dil ki baat; dil se na leekhe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

good one
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