~*~ Woh shayar hi kya jo dil se na likhe ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on February 02, 2011, 03:38:19 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 03, 2011, 07:45:37 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 03, 2011, 03:18:20 AM
wah bahut umda Rahim ji.
kisne kaha aapko ye chota hai.
janaab kam wo hota hai jisme kuch seekhne ko aur jaane ko na mile.
poora complete hai aur bahut khub hai.
2 line ke sher bhi poori Kitaab hoti hai na Rahim jee.
aapki sachhi baate bhi bahut kamaal hai.
daal hai ji
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thanx
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Main jab bhi Yo par koi nazm post karta hoon,
toh expect karta hoon hamesha kay Nirala jee saath
zarur denge..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya mere dost..
Khush rahiye sada..dua hai meri..!
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«Reply #16 on: February 03, 2011, 07:47:41 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on February 03, 2011, 07:22:56 AM
wahhhhhhhhhh last lines ke liye

hatsoff
Shukriya shukriya Rishi jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: manjum on February 03, 2011, 08:03:27 AM
bahut khub rahimji......

umda

 Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Manjum jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Sheba on February 03, 2011, 08:50:16 AM
good one
Teh teh dil se shukriya Sheba jee..
khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #17 on: February 05, 2011, 04:29:00 AM »
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Rahim jee --- aap ka har post mai padhta hun kuki aapka ek alag Alfaz o Andaaz hai sachai ko pesh karne ka.
bas wo chijen aapke kalaam me milti hain. aur wese bhi mai khud aisa-wesa likh ke time pass krta hun lekin Achhe shayars ka kalaam kabhi nahi Chorta Usual Smile
khus rahen yahi to meri dua hai aapke liye.
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«Reply #18 on: February 05, 2011, 06:20:46 AM »
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bahut khoob dher saari daad rahim bhai~

hmm bahut pehle likha tha aaj ye padhke yad a agaya..

kehene ko to dil bejuban seene me dhadakta he yaron,
shayar wo he jo mehfil me dil ko jubaan deta hai~
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«Reply #19 on: February 05, 2011, 03:33:41 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 05, 2011, 04:29:00 AM
Rahim jee --- aap ka har post mai padhta hun kuki aapka ek alag Alfaz o Andaaz hai sachai ko pesh karne ka.
bas wo chijen aapke kalaam me milti hain. aur wese bhi mai khud aisa-wesa likh ke time pass krta hun lekin Achhe shayars ka kalaam kabhi nahi Chorta Usual Smile
khus rahen yahi to meri dua hai aapke liye.
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thanx
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Nahin dost apke kalam bhi bahaut ache hote hai..
itni izzat kay liye main apka teh dil se shukriya
ada karta hoon..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #20 on: February 05, 2011, 03:36:47 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on February 05, 2011, 06:20:46 AM
bahut khoob dher saari daad rahim bhai~

hmm bahut pehle likha tha aaj ye padhke yad a agaya..

kehene ko to dil bejuban seene me dhadakta he yaron,
shayar wo he jo mehfil me dil ko jubaan deta hai~
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Bhai Abhi..
Aur bahaut bahaut achi lines hai bhai..
khoob kaha apne..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #21 on: February 06, 2011, 12:11:24 PM »
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BAhut Khub Rahim Ji Applause
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«Reply #22 on: February 06, 2011, 03:24:51 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 06, 2011, 12:11:24 PM
BAhut Khub Rahim Ji Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rishi jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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