woh siyahi se bana samander mera,

by jeet jainam on March 11, 2014, 09:20:57 AM
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hath jodke sabhi yo india member se maafi chahunga,march chal raha hai isliye job ka presher kafi hai,isliye ap sab ki poetry ko woqt nhi de pa raha hu,fir bhi jaldi main ye likha hai,,umeed hai apko pasand aayegi



jo bhi akser hua hai bura mare sath,
wohi hoga jo likha hai mukkder  mera,

main hu kagaz ki kashti pani main dub jau,
woh siyahi se bana  samander mera,

khoya rehta hu akser kisi ki yaado main,
ye aankhe barse, tadpe hai mun mera,

in mosami chehro se kiya puche [jeet],
khud se hi kho gaya hai manzer mera,

pather ki duniya se bachke chalte hai,
kahi tut na jaye kaanch ka dil ye mera,
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nice one bohut khub likha hai,kaam ke woqt dil ke alfaaz nhi bante par apne banye wah wah ek rau
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bahut khub.....
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Bahut khooooooooooob...
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