Woh

by vicharika on November 12, 2010, 02:33:22 PM

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vicharika

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kya koi awaz de raha hai?
Kya kisi ne dastak di hai?
kya koi aaya hai?
Kuchh aise hi sawal budbudati rahti hai
WOH
jo samajh nahin payi
waqt ki nazaqat
aur de baithi dil ek
ajnabi ko


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Re: Woh

«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 06:34:58 PM »

.......woh.......
na samjhee waqt ki nazakat ko..woh!!
na samjhee dil ki shafaqat ko..woh!!
dil se kab koi jeeta hai jo jeetti..woh!!
dil uska sheeshe sa tha samjh na pai..woh!!
dil lenewala patthar sa tha bhool kar bethi..woh!!
dosto isme kusoorwar na uska dil hai or na hi..woh!!
kusurwaar to hai Fitrat-e-dil or fitrat-e-mohabbat isme kya kar sakti thi..woh!!!!


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Re: Woh

«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2010, 07:13:00 PM »

Wah kya baat hai Kb ji bahut khoob,great creation,hats off icon_thumleft


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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2010, 08:02:03 AM »

thanx Madhuwesh ji.
mene to bas aise hi kuch lines add kar diya Vicharika ji ke poem me..
aakhir ye creations to unka hi hai ... so hats off to Vicharika:)


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Re: Woh

«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2010, 11:32:07 AM »

hmm vicharika mujhe laga iske aage or likhte to or bhi achha lagta....

keep it on..

very nice Kb ji...yunhi likhte rahiye...~


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Re: Woh

«Reply #5 on: November 15, 2010, 02:40:13 PM »

aapne bhut khub kaha Abhi ji..
kuch lines or hote vicharika ji ke to or b achha lagta.
Apka shukriya dil se ada krta hu Abhi ji..aapne iss naacheej KB ki bhi tareef kari:)