-----/// Yaadein ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 31, 2012, 07:53:41 PM
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tanhaa si is raat me, main aaj tanhaa baithaa hoon
dhundli si kisi tasveer ko yaad karne baithaa hoon

aaj firse un puraane dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo yaad, jo kai barso se bhulaaye baitha thaa
aaj jaane kahaan se un dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo milna usse chori chupke
wo baatein karna ghanto tak
leke uska haath apne haathon me
kehna dil ki baat usse
wo din bhi kitne khaas the
jab wo mere paas the
aaj un dino ki fir se yaad aa gayi....

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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 08:42:58 PM »
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tanhaa si is raat me, main aaj tanhaa baithaa hoon
dhundli si kisi tasveer ko yaad karne baithaa hoon

aaj firse un puraane dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo yaad, jo kai barso se bhulaaye baitha thaa
aaj jaane kahaan se un dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo milna usse chori chupke
wo baatein karna ghanto tak
leke uska haath apne haathon me
kehna dil ki baat usse
wo din bhi kitne khaas the
jab wo mere paas the
aaj un dino ki fir se yaad aa gayi....




wah wah bahut khoob hriday jee  Thumbs UP

purani yaadon ko hum ne dil mein chupa liya hai
kabhi hum bi the tere khaas 
ab to apna bi saya kho gaya andheron mein
kya bataye, tum se dhur hokar hum kis kadar akele hai




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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 11:21:59 PM »
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nice, bahut mast likha hriday ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 02:34:44 AM »
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v nice.... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 03:25:07 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 04:32:23 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2012, 01:48:31 PM »
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tanhaa si is raat me, main aaj tanhaa baithaa hoon
dhundli si kisi tasveer ko yaad karne baithaa hoon

aaj firse un puraane dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo yaad, jo kai barso se bhulaaye baitha thaa
aaj jaane kahaan se un dino ki yaad aa gayi
wo milna usse chori chupke
wo baatein karna ghanto tak
leke uska haath apne haathon me
kehna dil ki baat usse
wo din bhi kitne khaas the
jab wo mere paas the
aaj un dino ki fir se yaad aa gayi....


Bahut khoob Hriday jee
tanhaaiyon ne hame bhi khoob rulaaya hai
aansu na ruk sake jab yaad vo aaya hai

aise palon kee yaad bhulaai nahee jaatee
dil bhar aata hai labon se sunaai nahee jaatee
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2012, 10:02:32 PM »
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bahot khoob Hriday ji, aapki poems ki har line jaise jivit ho jaati hai...jaise jaise padhte hai , poori aankho ke saamne kisi drishya si ubhar aati hai, bahot khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2012, 02:44:05 AM »
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bahut khubbahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 04:32:25 AM »
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 :clap:nice
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2012, 07:11:01 AM »
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ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2012, 12:11:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!!


wah wah bahut khoob hriday jee  Thumbs UP

purani yaadon ko hum ne dil mein chupa liya hai
kabhi hum bi the tere khaas 
ab to apna bi saya kho gaya andheron mein
kya bataye, tum se dhur hokar hum kis kadar akele hai





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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 10:55:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji...!!!

nice, bahut mast likha hriday ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2012, 10:16:42 AM »
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thank you sooo much Gaytri ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: September 30, 2012, 09:10:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sanjeev ji....!!!

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