!!!..Yado.N ka gharonda..!!!

by nashwani on August 29, 2013, 01:06:07 AM
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Soona soona saa meraa wo makaan hai,,
Yaado.N ka gharonda mera alishan hai..

Dil jalaa rahe ho, jiss mitti ki murat ka,,
Mara nahi hai wo, jeeta jagta insaan hai..

Ab kaise wapas laun, teer to nikal chuka,,
Haatho.N me mere, bas khali kamaan hai..

Haal-e-dil bayan kar bhi sakta tha vo par,,
Teri hi khushi ki liye, bana bezubaan hai..

Yun to bhool jayenge ham unn palo.N ko,,
Par bhoole.N kyu, pucche dil naadan hai..

Dard seene me liye ghumta hai wo aur,,
Itna hansta kyu hai, soch duniya hairan hai..

Sar pe na hai chhat, to kyu pareshan hai,,
Dekh, tujhe aasra diye poora aasman hai..!!! Ñ  
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 01:18:22 AM »
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Wah ji wah! Aaj to bhut dedicated lag rahe ho, yun hi likhte rahen,dheron daad!
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 01:21:12 AM »
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Wah ji wah! Aaj to bhut dedicated lag rahe ho, yun hi likhte rahen,dheron daad!

Bahut shukriya kaash jee pasand karne ka aur hausla afzai ka..happy9

Waise main to hamesha hi dedicated rehta hun..bas likh nahi pata shyad utni dedication se..Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 01:29:05 AM »
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bahot badya bhaiya ...vry nicely expressed
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 01:30:16 AM »
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bahot badya bhaiya ...vry nicely expressed
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Thankyou ! shads 4 praisin n likin..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2013, 03:56:47 AM »
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Kya Khoob Likha hai Nashwani Ji.Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2013, 08:36:33 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peskash
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 09:50:47 AM »
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good one............. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2013, 07:37:22 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Ashwani ji kyaa kehne is rachnaa ke, ek ek shabd mein jaadu bharaa hai, dil khush ho gayaa padh ke...!!!
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Kya Khoob Likha hai Nashwani Ji.Bahut Khoob.

Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2013, 10:22:28 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peskash

Bahut shukriya sirjee..happy9
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