Yah Khwahish Meri.......

by Pooja on November 23, 2006, 01:39:36 AM
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Ek murjhaye phool ko apna banaya hai,
zindagi meri ko apne payar se sajaya hai

rangat payar ki dikhane mai, shayad muje waqat lag jaye
kuch jakham hai aise, jo shayad kabhi na bhar paye

Ankh jo bhar jaaye to bahon ka haar pahna dena
bin puche koi sawal, seene se apne, Mujhe laga lena

kar ke payar ki barsaat, har beeti baat bhoolava dena
bhari mang main uthe arthi meri, yah khawahish meri nibha dena
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2006, 11:02:53 AM »
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Ek murjhaye phool ko apna banaya hai,
zindagi meri ko apne payar se sajaya hai

rangat payar ki dikhane mai, shayad muje waqat lag jaye
kuch jakham hai aise, jo shayad kabhi na bhar paye

Ankh jo bhar jaaye to bahon ka haar pahna dena
bin puche koi sawal, seene se apne, Mujhe laga lena

kar ke payar ki barsaat, har beeti baat bhoolava dena
bhari mang main uthe arthi meri, yah khawahish meri nibha dena


Pooja ji.. bahoot emotions se bhar ke likha hai aapne.... just a try to answer ur beautiful creation.....

Ankhein band karne se raat nahi hoti
Heere ki chamak kabhi khak nahi hoti

gulab ko kabhi khushbu ki kami nahi hoti
kabhi Sagar ko paani ki payaas nahi hoti

samjha hai khudko tujhse milne ke baad
warna meri zindagi bhi koi khaas nahi hoti

jab do dilon mein khichan ho roohani
tab shayad sirf ek janam ke pyaar ki baat nahi hoti
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2006, 10:59:48 AM »
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Shukaria Jeet..   bahoot hi acha jawab likha hai apne.,... pad kar acha laga...
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2006, 05:04:50 PM »
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Wah pooja ji n jeet,itne din baad itni achi poetry padhke mazzaa aa gaya :D .
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2006, 03:07:37 PM »
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thanks pooja n nidhi

shabdon ke war se,pyaar ki takraar mein
tum kahin mujhe khudse alag na kar jana

khamosh yeh nighaein, aor silye hue honth
apni berukhi se tum kahi mujhe chorr na jana
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2006, 03:18:14 AM »
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Berukhi khud se hai, tuje to jee-jaan se chaha hai
bharosa khud per nahi, tere yakin per, sir jhukaya hai


nigahein kahe kuch bhi, juban chahe kahe kuch,
Bhoolna ab bas mai nahi, rooh mai bhi tu hi samaya hai
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2006, 03:29:43 AM »
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Applause.

Really padh kar aaisa laga ki Bhout Dil se Likhein hain Pooja Jee & Jeet Jee..
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2006, 04:08:34 AM »
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Shukaria Aaditya ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2006, 11:09:01 AM »
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Very Nice Pooja and Jeet !!
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2006, 11:25:25 AM »
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Nice ones... Pooja di.. & Jeet
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«Reply #10 on: December 16, 2006, 12:59:37 PM »
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very nice ... ji !!

pooja ji n jeet ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2006, 07:41:12 AM »
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Ek murjhaye phool ko apna banaya hai,
zindagi meri ko apne payar se sajaya hai

rangat payar ki dikhane mai, shayad muje waqat lag jaye
kuch jakham hai aise, jo shayad kabhi na bhar paye

Ankh jo bhar jaaye to bahon ka haar pahna dena
bin puche koi sawal, seene se apne, Mujhe laga lena

kar ke payar ki barsaat, har beeti baat bhoolava dena
bhari mang main uthe arthi meri, yah khawahish meri nibha dena


good words!!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2006, 07:44:04 AM »
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Thanks Tosha and Niraj!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2006, 09:50:59 AM »
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wah bahut khoob likha hai sabhi ne
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2006, 05:15:56 AM »
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Thanks Tosha
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