yahaan bahaar thahari hai.................ss

by SURESH SANGWAN on April 21, 2011, 12:04:17 PM
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Shokh nigahen,shokh adaayen,gazab ke andaaz tere
Meri nigahen shauk kuch ghadi ke liye jahaan thahari hai.
Jaate jaate dam bhar ko yahaan bahaar thahari hai.

Khuda ka shukra hai mere ilm ke liye hi sahi
Jaate jaate dam bhar ko yahaan bahaar thahari hai.

Hazaar batein thi tujhse kehne ko magar
Dil se nakalkar jaane kyun labon pe thahari hai.

Jab kaha usne bolne ko mujhe zabaan kholne ko mujhe
Bolte bolte meri zabaan ladkhada ke thahari hai.

Mein khushboo hun,tu hawa,mujhme mehak tujhmein rawani.
Dono jab chal nikli hain kahaan ye thahari hai........
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2011, 12:33:25 PM »
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bahut khub likha aapne. kya aap muje kuch tips de sakte hai. plzzzz aapka bahut ahsaan hoga. maine 3 poem likhi hai siaaaaaaa naam se aap pade aur bataye kio kya kami hai plz aap bahut acche shayar hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2011, 12:37:47 PM »
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thanks a lot.
 sher singh ji,aapki poem par hum zaroor respond karenge
aap yun hi likhte rahiye,

bahut khub likha aapne. kya aap muje kuch tips de sakte hai. plzzzz aapka bahut ahsaan hoga. maine 3 poem likhi hai siaaaaaaa naam se aap pade aur bataye kio kya kami hai plz aap bahut acche shayar hai

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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2011, 03:24:42 PM »
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haye suresh ji kya mst isqiyana andaaz me likha hai aapne…
apni haalat kuch esi hi hai aajkal to iska maza kuch jada hi aaya……
daad bht saari…
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lab tak aati hui jaam hatho me thahri hai
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khus rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2011, 05:40:38 AM »
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very nice sureshji

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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2011, 04:10:46 PM »
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shukriya ji killbill jihausla afzahi karte rahen.

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haye suresh ji kya mst isqiyana andaaz me likha hai aapne…
apni haalat kuch esi hi hai aajkal to iska maza kuch jada hi aaya……
daad bht saari…
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lab tak aati hui jaam hatho me thahri hai
…………………………:)Usual Smile
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khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2011, 04:11:19 PM »
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bahut sara shukriya tamanna ji.
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