Ye bazm aapki hai yahaan aaiye huzoor !

by shara63 on December 08, 2012, 04:10:04 AM
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      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor
   
      Is bazm ki adaa hai ke haNste haiN sab yahaaN
      apna bhulaa kar gham, sabko haNsaaiye zuroor

      Voh raat din ke marhale, vo zindagi ke gham
      ghar rakh ke aaiyega yahaan na laaiye huzoor

      Kya de sakaa hai insaaN duniyan ko, sochiye zara
      Kuchh na sahi to thodi khushi udhaar de jaaiye huzoor

      Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi
      toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor

      Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten
      bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor !!  ...........'ainy'


Note :  Ye kalaam kuchh saal pehle maine ek Mazahiya mehfil ke liye likha tha..HalaNki isme kuchh sanjeeda baaten kahi gain hain..phir bhi logon ne isko kaafi pasand kiya...muhjhe ummeed hai ke yahaan aap sab shayaree ke qadradan isko zaroor pasan karenge...Shukria!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 04:12:37 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2012, 05:00:45 AM »
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kya baat hai shara jee
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2012, 05:39:09 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2012, 06:05:29 AM »
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Bahut  khubsurat  kalaam  hai .  Bahr o qawafi  ke  lihaaz  se
nazar e saani   kar  lein  to  behad  haseen  ghazal  ho  sakti hai.
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2012, 06:36:48 AM »
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Ye taaliyaan bahut kuchh bol rahi hain
dil me ubhre hue ehsaas toal rahi hain !!

Behad shukria Masoom saab !
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2012, 06:38:38 AM »
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aqsh saheba, aapka bahut bahut shukria !
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2012, 06:46:33 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on December 08, 2012, 04:10:04 AM
      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor
   
      Is bazm ki adaa hai ke haNste haiN sab yahaaN
      apna bhulaa kar gham, sabko haNsaaiye zuroor

      Voh raat din ke marhale, vo zindagi ke gham
      ghar rakh ke aaiyega yahaan na laaiye huzoor

      Kya de sakaa hai insaaN duniyan ko, sochiye zara
      Kuchh na sahi to thodi khushi udhaar de jaaiye huzoor

      Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi
      toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor

      Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten
      bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor !!  ...........'ainy'


Note :  Ye kalaam kuchh saal pehle maine ek Mazahiya mehfil ke liye likha tha..HalaNki isme kuchh sanjeeda baaten kahi gain hain..phir bhi logon ne isko kaafi pasand kiya...muhjhe ummeed hai ke yahaan aap sab shayaree ke qadradan isko zaroor pasan karenge...Shukria!!
WAH WAH BOHUT HI KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2012, 06:47:11 AM »
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Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2012, 06:54:18 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on December 08, 2012, 04:10:04 AM
      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor
   
      Is bazm ki adaa hai ke haNste haiN sab yahaaN
      apna bhulaa kar gham, sabko haNsaaiye zuroor

      Voh raat din ke marhale, vo zindagi ke gham
      ghar rakh ke aaiyega yahaan na laaiye huzoor

      Kya de sakaa hai insaaN duniyan ko, sochiye zara
      Kuchh na sahi to thodi khushi udhaar de jaaiye huzoor

      Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi
      toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor

      Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten
      bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor !!  ...........'ainy'


Note :  Ye kalaam kuchh saal pehle maine ek Mazahiya mehfil ke liye likha tha..HalaNki isme kuchh sanjeeda baaten kahi gain hain..phir bhi logon ne isko kaafi pasand kiya...muhjhe ummeed hai ke yahaan aap sab shayaree ke qadradan isko zaroor pasan karenge...Shukria!!
bohut khoob shara jee bohut khoob , umda, but i do agree with hasan sir, if u dont mind.
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2012, 07:59:07 AM »
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shara ji ek umdaa kosish, do qaafiye nibhana mushkil ho jaata hai, ye dekh kar behad khushi hui ki aapne ek aisi hi kosish ko anzaam diya, darkhwast rahegi, ki aap aage v bazm ko yuNhi roshan karti raheN...
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2012, 09:16:51 AM »
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Sharaa Jee Aadaab!



Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai aapne... badi achchi fikr kasi hai mehfil ke liye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Quote from: shara63 on December 08, 2012, 04:10:04 AM
      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor
   
Bahut khoobsurat matla kaha hai jee bahut umdaa daad daad daad....

      Is bazm ki adaa hai ke haNste haiN sab yahaaN
      apna bhulaa kar gham, sabko haNsaaiye zuroor

Achcha sher hai daad ...

      Voh raat din ke marhale, vo zindagi ke gham
      ghar rakh ke aaiyega yahaan na laaiye huzoor

hahahaha Bahut khoob jee ...

      Kya de sakaa hai insaaN duniyan ko, sochiye zara
      Kuchh na sahi to thodi khushi udhaar de jaaiye huzoor

Hmmm yeH bhi khoob raha ....

      Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi
      toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor

Kia dekar bhool jayeN jee.... ? tongue3 sher khulaa nahi..

      Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten
      bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

WaaH waaH kia kahne behhad khoob kaha hai jee...

      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor !!  ...........'ainy'


Note :  Ye kalaam kuchh saal pehle maine ek Mazahiya mehfil ke liye likha tha..HalaNki isme kuchh sanjeeda baaten kahi gain hain..phir bhi logon ne isko kaafi pasand kiya...muhjhe ummeed hai ke yahaan aap sab shayaree ke qadradan isko zaroor pasan karenge...Shukria!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2012, 09:55:44 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on December 08, 2012, 04:10:04 AM
      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor
   
      Is bazm ki adaa hai ke haNste haiN sab yahaaN
      apna bhulaa kar gham, sabko haNsaaiye zuroor

      Voh raat din ke marhale, vo zindagi ke gham
      ghar rakh ke aaiyega yahaan na laaiye huzoor

      Kya de sakaa hai insaaN duniyan ko, sochiye zara
      Kuchh na sahi to thodi khushi udhaar de jaaiye huzoor

      Phir dekhiye, gar voh chain se rahtaa jo do ghadi
      toh de kar bhool jaaiye, matt maaNgiye huzoor

      Dene may paaiyega jahaaN bhar ki lazzaten
      bas ek baar hi sahi, isay paaiye zuroor !

      Ye bazm aapki hai yahaaN aaiye huzoor
      lekin ye shart hai ke muskuraaiye zuroor !!  ...........'ainy'


Note :  Ye kalaam kuchh saal pehle maine ek Mazahiya mehfil ke liye likha tha..HalaNki isme kuchh sanjeeda baaten kahi gain hain..phir bhi logon ne isko kaafi pasand kiya...muhjhe ummeed hai ke yahaan aap sab shayaree ke qadradan isko zaroor pasan karenge...Shukria!!


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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2012, 11:35:35 AM »
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wah behad lajawab...very very nice....
afsoos ke mere pass dene ko rau nahi kyun ki abhi kisi ko diya hai....nahi toh rau toh banta hai ispe....wah
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2012, 02:14:55 PM »
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waah waah
aapki ye kalam pad k humare chehre pe muskan ayii hai
iss liye deni chahi humne aapko badahyi hai .

aapki har ek pankhtiyoon ki hum qadar dikhayenge zaroor ,
bus aap yun he likhte rehna huzoor ...
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