ye geet parho gee ro ro kar (NM)

by vb on September 14, 2010, 04:00:39 PM
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 11:22:42 PM »
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Haan! Theek he kehti ho tum bhe
Pal-do-pal bhe kya jeena hay
Jo zakhm maseehaa day daalay
Un zakhmon ko kya seena hay

Bus ik chhoti see aashaa thee
Kuch aur agar hum jee paatay
Ye husn tumhaari chaahat ka
Is baab main bhe kuch farmaatay

In aankhon par nazmen kehtay
In honton k naghmay gaatay
Is aariz main hum kho jaatay
In zulfon ko hum sehlaatay

Par kya keejay kay vb ka
Ye pyaar tumhen manzoor nahi
Tum jo chaho kar saktee ho
Aazaad ho tum, majboor nahi

Jaanay ku aisa lagta hay
Ab aur nahi jee paain gay
Wo din ab hum say door nahi
Jub duniya say uth jaain gay

Jab aankhen chham chham barsen ge
Jab ghum k baadal chhaain gay
Ye geet parho gee ro ro kar
Tab yaad tumhen hum aain gay



Very Nice Poetry......Vb Ji ! Bahut Khoob ! dil se daad hazir hai..aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 07:41:43 AM »
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Wah!!Wah!! bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 07:51:25 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob V.B ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 07:52:28 AM »
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vb jee ....wah jiii wah


adbhaut mishran he apke shabdo me bhavnaon or vicharon ka ...bahut khoob jiii ...
likhte rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 08:08:32 AM »
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bhttttt khubbb likha hai VB ji aapne ...
Applause Applause Applause Applause

jab hum bhi na honge
hamari baatein hongi
kuch geet adhure tum gaoge

akele baith k yaadon me
jab paltoge tum dairy apni
kuch sukhe gulaab tum paoge

un sukhe gulabon k surkh patton pe
likha hoga kahin hamara naam
dekh k tum aankhein jhukaoge

bhar ek lambi si aah sanam
rakh k dil pe  hath sanam
tum naam hamara gungunaoge....!!!

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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 09:44:53 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

VB ji ab apki taarif kaise karen kin shabdon me karein.. har baar ek naya jadu,... aapne jaadu ka pitaara churaana padega jisme hum dekhna chahte hain ki aapne kaun kaun se jaadu bhar rahkhen hain.. aisa jaadu jo bas madhosh kar de jhumne ke liye aur hum nashe me jhoomte hi rahen... aapki ye rachna bhi khoob rahi,... bahut bahut pyari kavita likhi hai aapne Vb ji... dil khush ho jaata hai aapko padh ke... sach bahut pyaara likha hai.. mann kar raha hai bas gungunaata hi rahun...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 02:26:06 PM »
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...Hamein yaQeen hay k udaas nazmon mein apki kalamdani lajawab hay, aik darkhwast ke wastay, kuch khushnuma bhi arz kijiye...
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 02:52:58 PM »
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hamara maslan ghalat andaz mein samjha gaya shayad, isay uktana nahin kehtay...

suna hay, insan jaisa likhta hay, waisa mehsoos bhi karta hay, tu udasi se nikalnay ka ek mashwara samajh lijiye...udaas nazmein mann ko udaas banati hain

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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 03:19:38 PM »
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khoob likha hay...

hamara wajood hee kya ke itni umda nazmein parhne ko milen or uktana ho...this site is lucky to have such poets from all over to share their emotions, words, expressions and so on...

apna mashwara wapis lete hain, ham kabhi na poem ke zariye na words ke zariye, kuch sahi keh paayenge...
aap likhtay rahiye, apki tarah apki kalam bhi shadaab aur abaad rahay!

'yaad-e-maazi aizaab hai ya- rabb, cheen le mujh se hafza mera!!'
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 03:38:14 PM »
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I forgot to mention that was NM
and the following too is NM...

'unki har mushkil mein mushkil asaan hoti hay,
jinkay dil mein khalkat aur lab pe dua hoti hay...
naik amaal tu ranj-o-gham karna chorh de,
khushi ghami tu aey dost, rab ki raza hoti hay...
raah-e-'HAQ' pe chalta ja musafir
raat ke baad fir aik nayee subah hoti hay...'
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 04:03:57 PM »
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...jaisey pehlay farmaya, words bahut nahin hotay paas hamare...tu zahir hay jhinjhilaahat ke roop ban jatay hon jitnay bhi hotay hain...

kaash hamare comments compliments hone, par kisi wajah say, ghamgeen nazmon pe wah wah karne mein mushkil hoti hay hamein
aisa khushtabiyat poems pe mumkin hay tu mashwara diya gaya, wapis bhi le liya...

rahi subah kee baat, jab tak jahan hay, subah tu hoti rahegi, aapne aankhein moondh ke rakhni hay ya, us chamak kee kirnein dekhni hain, aap pe nirbhar hay...sab kuch tu hay
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2010, 02:39:38 PM »
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That's the way to look @ life!


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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2010, 02:57:04 PM »
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Accept what life has given you and cherish it for the rest of your life...sab kuch aasaan ho jayega...

thnx for meanings
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«Reply #14 on: September 16, 2010, 03:12:22 PM »
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jismein rabb kee raza, usmein insan ki bhi...and yehi life ki expectation bhi...<ds>
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