-----/// Ye kahaani uski hai ///----- Hriday

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likhne   baithaa    hoon   aaj   main ,  yeh kahaani uski hai
laal   yeh   gulaab  ,   kitaab  me ,   yeh   nishaani  uski hai

mehekti  hawaa   jo    chalti  hai ,  wo   deewaani  uski hai
taazgi  hai   phoolon   me   ab  bhi ,   meherbaani  uski hai

dene  ko   kyaa  dun  main  kisi  ko, hai hi kyaa paas mere
seene  se   lagaa    rakhaa  hai ,  yeh yaad puraani uski hai

umra  to  kat  chuki  meri, ab kaise mohabbat karun main
mili  thi  tohfe  me    mujhe  kabhi ,  yeh  jawaani uski hai

mere  geeton  me kahaan  dum hai, unse sab duur hi rahe
gaa  rahaa  hoon  geet   jo  bhi main, yeh zubaani uski hai

main tanhaa, zindagi kaa kuch  bhi mere maksad na rahaa
jee  rahaa  hoon  aaj   bhi ,  magar  ye  zindagaani uski hai

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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2012, 07:57:13 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2012, 07:35:30 PM
likhne   baithaa   hoon   aaj   main ,  yeh kahaani uski hai
laal   yeh   gulaab  ,   kitaab  me ,  yeh   nishaani  uski hai

mehekti  hawaa   jo    chalti  hai ,  wo  deewaani  uski hai
taazgi  hai   phoolon   me   ab  bhi ,  meherbaani  uski hai

dene  ko   kyaa  dun  main  kisi  ko, hai hi kyaa paas mere
seene  se   lagaa    rakhaa  hai ,  yeh yaad puraani uski hai

umra  to  kat  chuki  meri, ab kaise mohabbat karun main
mili  thi  tohfe  me    mujhe  kabhi ,  yeh  jawaani uski hai

mere  geeton  me kahaan  dum hai, unse sab duur hi rahe
gaa  rahaa  hoon  geet   jo  bhi main, yeh zubaani uski hai

main tanhaa, zindagi kaa kuch  bhi mere maksad na rahaa
jee  rahaa  hoon  aaj   bhi ,  magar  ye  zindagaani uski hai

*****HRIDAY*****


bahut bahut bahut khoob hriday ek ek sher behtreen--aaj kal chaaye hue ho muaaaf karo waqt ki kami se comments mnahin kar pa rahi hoon .....!
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2012, 08:01:40 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji.... koi baat nahi, kabhi fursat me aake comment kar dijiyegaa... abhi aapne padh liya mere liye yahi bahut hai... thank you sooooooooooo much... par intezaar rahegaa aapke khoobsurat comment kaa.....!!!

Quote from: Sheba on October 17, 2012, 07:57:13 PM

bahut bahut bahut khoob hriday ek ek sher behtreen--aaj kal chaaye hue ho muaaaf karo waqt ki kami se comments mnahin kar pa rahi hoon .....!
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2012, 12:24:37 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 12:28:42 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 06:30:47 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2012, 07:35:30 PM
likhne   baithaa    hoon   aaj   main ,  yeh kahaani uski hai
laal   yeh   gulaab  ,   kitaab  me ,   yeh   nishaani  uski hai  love9 love9 love9

mehekti  hawaa   jo    chalti  hai ,  wo   deewaani  uski hai
taazgi  hai   phoolon   me   ab  bhi ,   meherbaani  uski hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dene  ko   kyaa  dun  main  kisi  ko, hai hi kyaa paas mere
seene  se   lagaa    rakhaa  hai ,  yeh yaad puraani uski hai

umra  to  kat  chuki  meri, ab kaise mohabbat karun main
mili  thi  tohfe  me    mujhe  kabhi ,  yeh  jawaani uski hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mere  geeton  me kahaan  dum hai, unse sab duur hi rahe
gaa  rahaa  hoon  geet   jo  bhi main, yeh zubaani uski hai  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

main tanhaa, zindagi kaa kuch  bhi mere maksad na rahaa
jee  rahaa  hoon  aaj   bhi ,  magar  ye  zindagaani uski hai  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

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Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal!!!! Aaj kal aap ki kalam kamaal kar rahi hai. Very Very Romantic. Saare Ashaar beautiful hai... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 08:18:10 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2012, 07:35:30 PM
likhne   baithaa    hoon   aaj   main ,  yeh kahaani uski hai
To use hi sunaane dete mere bhaai.
laal   yeh   gulaab  ,   kitaab  me ,   yeh   nishaani  uski hai
Uski hai, uski hai, uski hai...
Kah kah kar sar me dard kar diya ek baar ye nahii bataa sakte ki kiski hai
mehekti  hawaa   jo    chalti  hai ,  wo   deewaani  uski hai
Jhot hawa kisi ki diiwani nahee hai, wo to mere paas baithi hai.
taazgi  hai   phoolon   me   ab  bhi ,   meherbaani  uski hai
Allaah taubaa wo larki hai ya, koi gulshan, meri mano to bachke raho usse, phool hai to kaante bhii honge... KaheeN....
dene  ko   kyaa  dun  main  kisi  ko, hai hi kyaa paas mere
seene  se   lagaa    rakhaa  hai ,  yeh yaad puraani uski hai
Purana saamaan hameN chahiye bhii nahee, bas aap hi rakhhe,
umra  to  kat  chuki  meri, ab kaise mohabbat karun main
To janaab budde ho chuke hai. Aur budhaape me bhii larkiyoN pe line maar raheN hai, kuch to saram kareN..
Eska ham par bhii bura asar par sakta hai
mili  thi  tohfe  me    mujhe  kabhi ,  yeh  jawaani uski hai
Udhaar ki jawaani se kaam chalaa rahe ho
mere  geeton  me kahaan  dum hai, unse sab duur hi rahe
gaa  rahaa  hoon  geet   jo  bhi main, yeh zubaani uski hai
Kaun sa gana gaa rahe ho....
Shayad ye ..
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Gaa rahaa hoN es mahfil me..
Hai naa?
main tanhaa, zindagi kaa kuch  bhi mere maksad na rahaa
jee  rahaa  hoon  aaj   bhi ,  magar  ye  zindagaani uski hai

Aapke paas kuch apnaa bhi hai yaa nahi,
jis cheej ko bhi dekho uski hai, uski hai... To aapka apna kyaa hai

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Apon ko aapka style bahut pasand aa rela hai.
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2012, 08:34:32 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2012, 07:35:30 PM
likhne   baithaa    hoon   aaj   main ,  yeh kahaani uski hai
laal   yeh   gulaab  ,   kitaab  me ,   yeh   nishaani  uski hai

mehekti  hawaa   jo    chalti  hai ,  wo   deewaani  uski hai
taazgi  hai   phoolon   me   ab  bhi ,   meherbaani  uski hai

dene  ko   kyaa  dun  main  kisi  ko, hai hi kyaa paas mere
seene  se   lagaa    rakhaa  hai ,  yeh yaad puraani uski hai

umra  to  kat  chuki  meri, ab kaise mohabbat karun main
mili  thi  tohfe  me    mujhe  kabhi ,  yeh  jawaani uski hai

mere  geeton  me kahaan  dum hai, unse sab duur hi rahe
gaa  rahaa  hoon  geet   jo  bhi main, yeh zubaani uski hai

main tanhaa, zindagi kaa kuch  bhi mere maksad na rahaa
jee  rahaa  hoon  aaj   bhi ,  magar  ye  zindagaani uski hai

*****HRIDAY*****
waah waah waah waah waah waaaaaaaah
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob Hriday ji.............
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 11:11:26 AM »
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achaji ab ye uski kaun hai kp...... mastam poetry kp
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 11:18:52 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH janab Kia kahne aapke ... badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai
aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab....Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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Wah kya baat hai Hirday ji.very touching n lovely cration. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2012, 11:08:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on October 18, 2012, 12:24:37 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on October 18, 2012, 12:28:42 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shireen ji....!!!

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Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal!!!! Aaj kal aap ki kalam kamaal kar rahi hai. Very Very Romantic. Saare Ashaar beautiful hai... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2012, 10:58:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa bhaai...!!!

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 18, 2012, 08:18:10 AM

Kapil bhaai ki mast kalaam.
Har line jabardast.
Dil khush ho gaya.
Apon ko aapka style bahut pasand aa rela hai.
Par abhii apon aapko rau nahi de sakta hai.
Aage milna aage apon RaU ke saath aapka intizaar karega.
Intizaar bole to wait karega.
.
Aoye serkit chal ab dosri post pe apon ke jaane ka time ho rela hai.
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