ye kya gazabb hua hai !!!

by sarfira on April 10, 2012, 04:18:29 PM
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ye kya gazabb hua hai aur--ye kaisa baadal chaane laga hai
ke har ek shakhs aakar aaj--mujhe hi samjhane laga hai?

kabhi paas to koi kabhi duur--mujhse jaane laga hai
ke shikayat unki dekhie--maatamm mere khayaalon me aane laga hai?

hui hai, haasil-e-jannat kab yahaan--kis khusnaseeb ko
ke baathar shakhs aaj--mujh hi se chupaane laga hai!!!

khaalee jholee aur--failaaye hai wo haath khadaa
ke Khudaa ke DUR par aa sarfira bhi--sar apna jhukaane lagaa hai!!!
!!
!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2012, 04:24:53 PM »
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nice congts &daad daad
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2012, 04:45:53 PM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2012, 05:49:28 PM »
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ye kya gazabb hua hai aur--ye kaisa baadal chaane laga hai
ke har ek shakhs aakar aaj--mujhe hi samjhane laga hai?
harkatein hi aisi paall rakhi hai to kya kare koi. naa khud chain se sotey ho na hamein soney detey ho icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
kabhi paas to koi kabhi duur--mujhse jaane laga hai
ke shikayat unki dekhie--maatamm mere khayaalon me aane laga hai?
ye baat to hai thik paas door ki per maatamm chhaane wali baat samajh na aayi mujhe tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
hui hai, haasil-e-jannat kab yahaan--kis khusnaseeb ko
ke baathar shakhs aaj--mujh hi se chupaane laga hai!!!
bilkul hi sher palley na padaa. mera dimaag kamzor hai aisi oonchi oonchi baatein samjh taa hi nahin. kambakht dimaag sarfira ji ki sidhi baat nahin samjhta...! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
khaalee jholee aur--failaaye hai wo haath khadaa
ke Khudaa ke DUR par aa sarfira bhi--sar apna jhukaane lagaa hai!!!
!!achi baat hai...........! Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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zarur kuch jazbaati khayaal hain.per aadhey to palle hi na padey...!khair good one
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2012, 06:43:36 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob sarfira ji... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2012, 05:59:45 AM »
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waaah waah shishyajiii...sar dar par jhukaane lage hain...bahut khoob....Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2012, 10:15:26 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2012, 10:17:52 AM »
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very good
ye kya gazabb hua hai aur--ye kaisa baadal chaane laga hai
ke har ek shakhs aakar aaj--mujhe hi samjhane laga hai?

kabhi paas to koi kabhi duur--mujhse jaane laga hai
ke shikayat unki dekhie--maatamm mere khayaalon me aane laga hai?

hui hai, haasil-e-jannat kab yahaan--kis khusnaseeb ko
ke baathar shakhs aaj--mujh hi se chupaane laga hai!!!

khaalee jholee aur--failaaye hai wo haath khadaa
ke Khudaa ke DUR par aa sarfira bhi--sar apna jhukaane lagaa hai!!!
!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2013, 08:13:51 AM »
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nice congts &daad daad
sukriya Saini Sir
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