Ye kya ke aap kareN Sirf apni chaah ki baat.

by Ghulam Haider on June 18, 2014, 12:19:46 AM
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Mera tazah kalaam aHbaab ki khidmat meN...


Ye kya ke aap kareN Sirf apni chaah ki baat.
KreN jo aur to bas aap se nibaah ki baat.

Mile jo aap se koie to munkasir ho kar,
ZubaaN pe aap ki rehti hai apni jaah ki baat.

Khuda ko apne takbbur meN bhool jaate haiN,
NaZar meN aap ki kuchh bhi nahiN gunaah ki baat.

WahaN pe kaise koie apne Haq ki baat kare,
JahaN samajhte hoN sab aap ki nigaah ki baat.

Chalan ye hai ke chaleN Sirf aise log ke jo,
Banaa ke aap se chlte haiN rasm o raah ki baat.

Bahaaduri ka koie aap ki jawaab nahiN.
Akele aap hi karte haiN ek sipaah ki baat.

Lo baargaah meN Allaah k,i amaaN Haider,
Wo khoob sunta hai shaiTaan se panaah ki baat
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2014, 03:23:28 AM »
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Mera tazah kalaam aHbaab ki khidmat meN...


Ye kya ke aap kareN Sirf apni chaah ki baat.
KreN jo aur to bas aap se nibaah ki baat.

Mile jo aap se koie to munkasir ho kar,
ZubaaN pe aap ki rehti hai apni jaah ki baat.

Khuda ko apne takbbur meN bhool jaate haiN,
NaZar meN aap ki kuchh bhi nahiN gunaah ki baat.

WahaN pe kaise koie apne Haq ki baat kare,
JahaN samajhte hoN sab aap ki nigaah ki baat.

Chalan ye hai ke chaleN Sirf aise log ke jo,
Banaa ke aap se chlte haiN rasm o raah ki baat.

Bahaaduri ka koie aap ki jawaab nahiN.
Akele aap hi karte haiN ek sipaah ki baat.

Lo baargaah meN Allaah k,i amaaN Haider,
Wo khoob sunta hai shaiTaan se panaah ki baat

her sher lajawaab mujhe her sher pe comments karne ka mann kar raha tha per chunke main aap ke mizaaj se wauaqif nahin hoon kahin aap bura na maan jaaye.n isliye nahin kiya meri taraf se rau icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2014, 04:02:30 AM »
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Ye kya ke aap kareN Sirf apni chaah ki baat.
KreN jo aur to bas aap se nibaah ki baat.

Mile jo aap se koie to munkasir ho kar,
ZubaaN pe aap ki rehti hai apni jaah ki baat.

Khuda ko apne takbbur meN bhool jaate haiN,
NaZar meN aap ki kuchh bhi nahiN gunaah ki baat.

WahaN pe kaise koie apne Haq ki baat kare,
JahaN samajhte hoN sab aap ki nigaah ki baat.

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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2014, 04:45:31 AM »
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WaaaaaaaH kyaa baat hai ,bahut umdah peshkash, dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2014, 05:06:59 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 18, 2014, 03:23:28 AM

her sher lajawaab mujhe her sher pe comments karne ka mann kar raha tha per chunke main aap ke mizaaj se wauaqif nahin hoon kahin aap bura na maan jaaye.n isliye nahin kiya meri taraf se rau icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Sheba ji ye aap ki moHabbat hai ke na cheez se kalaam ko pasand kiya. Apne khayaalaat ka az raah e iHtiyaaT, iZhaar bhi farmaya. Mazeed ye ke rau se bhi Haqeer ko nawaaza. Aap ka tashakkur aur adaa karne ke liye alfaaZ na kaafi haiN. MaiN nahiN jaanta ke yahaN ka ma Haul kaisa hai. YahaN kalaam par kis TarH iZhaar e khayaal kiya jata hai, lekin mere liye ye baRi khushnaseebi ki baat hogi ke koie mere kalaam par khul ke iZhaar e khayaal farmaye, taaki us ke maHaasin aur o'yoob sab Zaahir aur waaZ'eH ho jayeN aur koie ishkaal ki Soorat baaqi na rahe. Is se mujhe aur bhi seekhne ko milega. Agar aap ki nigaah meN koie bhi qaabil e ishkaal baat ho to us ki Taraf mujhe Zaroot mutavajjeh farmaayeN. Mujhe be Had khushi hogi
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2014, 05:22:49 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 18, 2014, 04:02:30 AM
Ye kya ke aap kareN Sirf apni chaah ki baat.
KreN jo aur to bas aap se nibaah ki baat.

Mile jo aap se koie to munkasir ho kar,
ZubaaN pe aap ki rehti hai apni jaah ki baat.

Khuda ko apne takbbur meN bhool jaate haiN,
NaZar meN aap ki kuchh bhi nahiN gunaah ki baat.

WahaN pe kaise koie apne Haq ki baat kare,
JahaN samajhte hoN sab aap ki nigaah ki baat.

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MoHtaram shihab tasleemaat!
Mujhe khushi hai ke aap ko kalaam pasand aaya. Aap ne daad o taHseen ke saath 2 rau se bhi himmat afzaayi farmayi. Apni nek dua'aoN se bhi nawaza. Ye Haqeer par aap ka intihaayi karam hai. Tah e dil se aap ka shukr guzaar hooN .
Allah aap ko seHhat o salaamati ke saath lambi umr aTaa farmaye aur sadaa khush rakhe..
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Quote from: surindarn on June 18, 2014, 04:45:31 AM
WaaaaaaaH kyaa baat hai ,bahut umdah peshkash, dheron daad.
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Surindar.N ji aap ka intihaayi mamnoon hooN ke is Taraf naZar e karam farmaayi.
Apne jazbaat se aagaah kiya. Daad e taHseen se nawaza. Umeed hai ke yuoN hi himmat afzaayi se kaam lete raheNge. MaiN bhi yehi koshish karta hooN ki kalaam aap ke mizaaj ke muTaabiq ho. Kisi TarH bhi wo baat ho jaaye jis se mujhe  aap ki dili daad aur duaayeN mil jaayeN. Ba har Haal maiN aap ka shukr guzaar hooN khush rahiye salaamat rahiye.
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2014, 08:00:59 AM »
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ek rau ke saath dher saaree daad
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2014, 03:58:12 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2014, 08:14:43 PM »
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Sheba ji ye aap ki moHabbat hai ke na cheez se kalaam ko pasand kiya. Apne khayaalaat ka az raah e iHtiyaaT, iZhaar bhi farmaya. Mazeed ye ke rau se bhi Haqeer ko nawaaza. Aap ka tashakkur aur adaa karne ke liye alfaaZ na kaafi haiN. MaiN nahiN jaanta ke yahaN ka ma Haul kaisa hai. YahaN kalaam par kis TarH iZhaar e khayaal kiya jata hai, lekin mere liye ye baRi khushnaseebi ki baat hogi ke koie mere kalaam par khul ke iZhaar e khayaal farmaye, taaki us ke maHaasin aur o'yoob sab Zaahir aur waaZ'eH ho jayeN aur koie ishkaal ki Soorat baaqi na rahe. Is se mujhe aur bhi seekhne ko milega. Agar aap ki nigaah meN koie bhi qaabil e ishkaal baat ho to us ki Taraf mujhe Zaroot mutavajjeh farmaayeN. Mujhe be Had khushi hogi

haidar sahab

salaam amsnoo.n

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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2014, 11:30:10 AM »
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Waah bahut khoob...
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