ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya (by vb)

by vb on October 06, 2011, 02:47:08 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 965 times)
vb
Guest
Reply with quote


Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya

............................................
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
2004 , GUZAR GAYA ! KISI KA KIA GAYA , OR KISI KA KIA GAYA ? by SADIQA JAWED in Shairi - E - Zindagi
Guzar Gaya by Fawad in Shayri-E-Dard
wo lumha guzar gaya by friendsforever in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
Jo Guzar Gaya Wo Guzar Gaya...n.m by suman59 in Share Poetry You Like
ZAMANA GUZAR GAYA .............................. HASAN by F.H.SIDDIQUI in Ghazals « 1 2 3  All »
MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 31
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 19 hours and 59 minutes.

Astrologer & Shayer

Posts: 12017
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2011, 02:54:41 PM »
Reply with quote
khub
Quote from: vb on October 06, 2011, 02:47:08 PM


Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya

............................................
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2011, 06:30:31 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanx...
Logged
sarfira
Guest
«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2011, 09:42:18 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah VB sir--

bahot umda post ek bar fir aapki kalam se--

daad aur mubarakbaad kubool karen mujh nachij ki taraf se.

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
Usual Smile
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2011, 11:19:26 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khooooooooob vb ji
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 06:00:02 AM »
Reply with quote
sarfira jee! shukriya aap ka..
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2011, 06:00:59 AM »
Reply with quote
SURESH SANGWAN jee! buhat shukriya...
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2011, 06:04:43 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: vb on October 06, 2011, 02:47:08 PM


Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par icon_flower
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi sad5
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili   sad10
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya    crybaby2
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya icon_flower icon_flower

............................................


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2011, 06:07:15 AM »
Reply with quote
:]
Logged
Shaifali
Guest
«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2011, 07:02:38 AM »
Reply with quote
wow kitni khoobsurti se aapne ehsaasaat ko
Lafzon mein piroya hai.very nice vb ji good job
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2011, 10:50:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Shaifali jee! shukriya aap ka..
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya (by vb)
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 04:27:52 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.094 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer