ye wo silsila nahi

by bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:14:30 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 07, 2008, 04:01:44 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 04, 2008, 03:48:35 PM
Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,

pooja ji upar likhi gai ye line un mardon ke liye hai..jo apni biwiyon ko bewazah bina kisi baat ke apmanit karte hain...kai baar to sirf mardangi dikhane ke liye.....lekin wo bhool jaate hain ki jin bachchon ke wo pita hain unki biwi unhi bachchon ki maa bhi hai....aur bachche apni maa ki bhi utani hi ijjat karte hain jitani ki pita ki...aur kai baar apni maa ko bewazah apmaanit hota dekh ke.....man hi man apne pita se nafrat karne lagte hain....
 ab aap in lines ko padhen


Thanks for explaining me this. maine yah arth nahi samjha tha.. yaani apki kavita main teen hise hai, do nahi.. Doosra hisse main.. ma-baap ke budhape baare aor phir wife ke baare.. bahoot khoob Sanjeev jee...

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«Reply #16 on: July 13, 2008, 04:12:27 AM »
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youe welcome pooja ji
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«Reply #17 on: July 13, 2008, 04:39:15 AM »
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bekarar ji,

bahut hi shaktishaali kavitaayen,aapne rachi aur prastut ki.nirantar isi tarah sikhaate rahiye,shhayad aapka shataansh(1/100th) hum paa sake aur koi ordinary rachna hum bhee kar paaye.
bohut behtareen likha he aapne,badhai.

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«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2008, 06:59:50 AM »
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prateek ji,
ab itna bhi kisi ko na chadaya jaye ki neeche gire to haddi-pasli jodne layak bhi na rahe
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«Reply #19 on: July 20, 2008, 07:14:25 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:14:30 PM
ruke kabhi, ye wo silsila nahi....
ye baat aur hai, mere sath koi chala nahi,

kuch logon ke bharose ne, meri achchai ko bachaya hai
warna log kahte hain, aadmi mai bhala nahi,

balatkaar, jhagde, dange aur bhrshtachaar,
jab tak mere saath na hue, mujhe kabhi khala nahi

tujhe toot-kar chaha, tujhe paane ki tamnnana nahi kee
ye khwab meri aankhon me, yun bhi kabhi pala nahi

sar jhooka liya hai, har sitamgar ke saamne
muqabala karun, ragon me ab wo zalzala nahi

kaise bachengi us ghar kee deewaren "bekarar"
jis ghar ke logon me, sach sahne ka housala nahi

Quote from: bekarar on July 03, 2008, 01:34:36 PM
ye pyar mohabbat, ye ishqon ke kisse,
Ye jhoothi kahani, wafaon ke kisse,

Bina dil ko samajhe, dil kee ye baaten,
Bina dard ko jaane, ye dardon ke kisse,

Khud hi kee bewafai, aur tohmat kisi pe,
Ye firkaparasti ke bojhil se kisse,

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Khayalon kee duniya me jo tumane basaye,
Un veeran makano, ke toote ye hisse,

Khule dil se mano, ke tum bhi galat ho,
Bichade hue dil, milenge to firse,

Thama hai mujhko tumne, to kah do sabhi ko
Kyun chipate ho sach ko, duniya ke dar se,

Karo badzabani, magar soch lena,
Kabhi tum bhi hoge, “budhape” ke hisse

Badi mushkilon se, padhaya hai tumko,
Ab bano tum bhi unki, khushiyon ke kisse

Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!dono kavitaye ek se ek likhi hai..gehri aur jazbaaton se bharpoor rachnaye hai..bahut ache bekararji Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #20 on: July 20, 2008, 07:27:24 AM »
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shukriya khwahish ji....
aapne pasand kiya....dil ko sukun mil gaya........
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2008, 03:45:30 AM »
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bahoot kar chuke labo-rukhsaar ki baaten,
palkon ki chilman ki, tere deedar ki baaten,
teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
teri aankhon me doobe kat gai, shaam ki baaten

chalo aaj karte hain kuch kaam ki baaten,
boodhe baap ki charcha, us beemar ki baaten,
maa ki mamata ka bhi zikr, uski sewa ki baaten
un bahno ki yaaden, unke dulaar ki baaten,

tumhaare rukhsaar se jaate gulabi khumar ki baaten,
haqikat se muhn churate tumhare pyaar ki baaten,
chalo mai band karta hun fir ye bekaar si baaten,
lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhote pyaar ki baaten,
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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2008, 04:06:20 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sanjeev bhaiya ..ek se badh ke ek kalam hai...
bahut khoob Pooja di...
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«Reply #23 on: July 31, 2008, 07:07:07 AM »
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shkriya punam sis..housla afzai ke liye...
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«Reply #24 on: July 31, 2008, 10:39:14 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 31, 2008, 03:45:30 AM
bahoot kar chuke labo-rukhsaar ki baaten,
palkon ki chilman ki, tere deedar ki baaten,
teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
teri aankhon me doobe kat gai, shaam ki baaten

chalo aaj karte hain kuch kaam ki baaten,
boodhe baap ki charcha, us beemar ki baaten,
maa ki mamata ka bhi zikr, uski sewa ki baaten
un bahno ki yaaden, unke dulaar ki baaten,

tumhaare rukhsaar se jaate gulabi khumar ki baaten,
haqikat se muhn churate tumhare pyaar ki baaten,
chalo mai band karta hun fir ye bekaar si baaten,
lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhote pyaar ki baaten,


So Wonderful...  and Very Very Meaningful.. Applause
Bahut hi pyaara likha hai Sanjeev Ji..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #25 on: July 31, 2008, 11:05:48 AM »
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bohut khoob sanjeev ji ek k baad ek kya khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #26 on: July 31, 2008, 12:12:21 PM »
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 Thankyou !
mahiya....aapke comment ka intzaar tha...
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«Reply #27 on: July 31, 2008, 12:15:52 PM »
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shukriya bhawna ji aapne meri bhawnaon ko samjha aur saraha bhi
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«Reply #28 on: July 31, 2008, 02:36:19 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 31, 2008, 03:45:30 AM
bahoot kar chuke labo-rukhsaar ki baaten,
palkon ki chilman ki, tere deedar ki baaten,
teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
teri aankhon me doobe kat gai, shaam ki baaten

chalo aaj karte hain kuch kaam ki baaten,
boodhe baap ki charcha, us beemar ki baaten,
maa ki mamata ka bhi zikr, uski sewa ki baaten
un bahno ki yaaden, unke dulaar ki baaten,

tumhaare rukhsaar se jaate gulabi khumar ki baaten,
haqikat se muhn churate tumhare pyaar ki baaten,
chalo mai band karta hun fir ye bekaar si baaten,
lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhote pyaar ki baaten,


Wah kay abaat hai Bekarar je.. bahoot khoob!!! Na jaane apki yah sari posts mujhe itani deri se najar atti hai... sad5

Good creation!!

lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhote pyaar ki baaten   

wah kaya baat hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: July 31, 2008, 04:11:09 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya pooja ji.......aapki nazr to gai is fasane par ..aur aapne padha...aur hamesha ki tarah housla badhaya....fir se aapka shukriya
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