ye wo silsila nahi

by bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:14:30 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 03, 2008, 01:07:39 PM »
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Jo karte hain dikhava Zindadili ke apni, suna hai
Wo bhi marne ke intzaar me bas jiye jaate hain

Falak pe ja ke bhi unhe, zameen ki chah hai,
Tamanna azib hai par, log kiye jaate hain

Matalab to dekho inka, fakeeron ke bhes me,
Patthar ke har boot ko bhagwan kiye jaate hain

Havas ki aag me jo muhabbat ko kho chuke
wahi log bewafai ki duhaai diye jaate hain

Paida abhi hua mazhab nahi hai koi, kyun ise bhi log
kabhi hindu to kabhi musalmaan kiye jaate hain

Madhosh ho gaye pee pee ke “bekarar”
Poocha to ise dard ka naam diye jaate hain
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«Reply #31 on: August 04, 2008, 07:05:39 PM »
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bekrar ji,

jitne shabd humaare paas taaref ke nahi utni to aapke paas rachnaaye he...aapki shaayri behtareen he janaab.

Prateek
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«Reply #32 on: August 04, 2008, 07:12:57 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 03, 2008, 01:07:39 PM
Jo karte hain dikhava Zindadili ke apni, suna hai
Wo bhi marne ke intzaar me bas jiye jaate hain

Falak pe ja ke bhi unhe, zameen ki chah hai,
Tamanna azib hai par, log kiye jaate hain

Matalab to dekho inka, fakeeron ke bhes me,
Patthar ke har boot ko bhagwan kiye jaate hain

Havas ki aag me jo muhabbat ko kho chuke
wahi log bewafai ki duhaai diye jaate hain

Paida abhi hua mazhab nahi hai koi, kyun ise bhi log
kabhi hindu to kabhi musalmaan kiye jaate hain

Madhosh ho gaye pee pee ke “bekarar”
Poocha to ise dard ka naam diye jaate hain


Applause Applause Applause

BAHOOT KHOOB BEKARAR JI!! WAH KAYA BAAT HAI... EK EK LINE KAMAL KI LIKHI HAIAPNE... MAGAR IN DO LINE PER NIGAH ATTAKI AOR DOBARA PADNE PER MAN MAJBOOR HUA!!

Havas ki aag me jo muhabbat ko kho chuke
wahi log bewafai ki duhaai diye jaate hain
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«Reply #33 on: August 05, 2008, 04:06:35 AM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya ...parteek ji sach me aap logon ke comments padhkar kuch achcha apne aap likha jaata hai...fir se shukriya,

pooja ji,
aapne itni taareef kee hai..ki bas sarthak ho gaya humara likhna...dhanywad ji
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«Reply #34 on: August 05, 2008, 06:29:52 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:14:30 PM
ruke kabhi, ye wo silsila nahi....
ye baat aur hai, mere sath koi chala nahi,

kuch logon ke bharose ne, meri achchai ko bachaya hai
warna log kahte hain, aadmi mai bhala nahi,

balatkaar, jhagde, dange aur bhrshtachaar,
jab tak mere saath na hue, mujhe kabhi khala nahi

tujhe toot-kar chaha, tujhe paane ki tamnnana nahi kee
ye khwab meri aankhon me, yun bhi kabhi pala nahi

sar jhooka liya hai, har sitamgar ke saamne
muqabala karun, ragon me ab wo zalzala nahi

kaise bachengi us ghar kee deewaren "bekarar"
jis ghar ke logon me, sach sahne ka housala nahi
Very well bekarar ji.... I liked specially these lines....

kuch logon ke bharose ne, meri achchai ko bachaya hai
warna log kahte hain, aadmi mai bhala nahi.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: August 05, 2008, 01:07:27 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 03, 2008, 01:07:39 PM
Jo karte hain dikhava Zindadili ke apni, suna hai
Wo bhi marne ke intzaar me bas jiye jaate hain

Falak pe ja ke bhi unhe, zameen ki chah hai,
Tamanna azib hai par, log kiye jaate hain

Matalab to dekho inka, fakeeron ke bhes me,
Patthar ke har boot ko bhagwan kiye jaate hain

Havas ki aag me jo muhabbat ko kho chuke
wahi log bewafai ki duhaai diye jaate hain

Paida abhi hua mazhab nahi hai koi, kyun ise bhi log
kabhi hindu to kabhi musalmaan kiye jaate hain

Madhosh ho gaye pee pee ke “bekarar”
Poocha to ise dard ka naam diye jaate hain

Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Sach likha hai aapne.. Sanjeev... Har sher sachhaai bayaan kar raha hai...
Jitni baar bhi padha utni baar aur bhi achha laga.. Usual Smile

Likhte Rahiyega...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #36 on: August 05, 2008, 02:27:27 PM »
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Sanjeev bro,

Wah ! wah ! wah ! Applause Applause Applause

Fantastic piece of work Thumbs UP
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«Reply #37 on: August 05, 2008, 02:42:13 PM »
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Quote from: natural on August 05, 2008, 06:29:52 AM
Very well bekarar ji.... I liked specially these lines....

kuch logon ke bharose ne, meri achchai ko bachaya hai
warna log kahte hain, aadmi mai bhala nahi.... Usual Smile

welcome ji kamskam aapne padhato sahi.....warna chit chat ke alawa aapko kahin aur padh pana in dino ..kam hi ho pata hai tongue3 tongue3
waise mujhe bhi ye lines bahoot pasand hai...aur mere liye haqikat bhi hai

shukriya...natural

Quote from: Mahiya on August 05, 2008, 01:07:27 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Sach likha hai aapne.. Sanjeev... Har sher sachhaai bayaan kar raha hai...
Jitni baar bhi padha utni baar aur bhi achha laga.. Usual Smile

Likhte Rahiyega...  Thumbs UP

ji bilkul likhte rahunga....shukriya aapne ise samjha.....mahiya

Quote from: Rajbir on August 05, 2008, 02:27:27 PM
Sanjeev bro,

Wah ! wah ! wah ! Applause Applause Applause

Fantastic piece of work Thumbs UP

shukriya raj bhai......aapne comment kiya "bole to khallas"
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«Reply #38 on: August 05, 2008, 02:57:21 PM »
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Matalab to dekho inka, fakeeron ke bhes me,
Patthar ke har boot ko bhagwan kiye jaate hain

Havas ki aag me jo muhabbat ko kho chuke
wahi log bewafai ki duhaai diye jaate hain

Paida abhi hua mazhab nahi hai koi, kyun ise bhi log
kabhi hindu to kabhi musalmaan kiye jaate hain

Bahut khoob..Bahut bahut accha laga padkar. esp the above lines
superb.. Applause  Applause
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«Reply #39 on: August 05, 2008, 03:20:45 PM »
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shukriya roja,

mujhe achcha laga tumne ye padha...aur saraha Usual Smile
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«Reply #40 on: August 09, 2008, 03:53:47 AM »
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fake me din gujare, raisee bhi dekhi,
mahfilen jamai, tanhaiyan bhi dekhi,
kuch is kadar badhi, wakifiyat hummari,
ki jindagi ki har chees lagati hai dekhi dekhi....

dekh kar kisi ko undekha sa karana,
waqt ke sath sath nazar badalte dekhi,

jee na sakunga tum bin, hazzaron dafa kaha tha,
jane ke baad unke, jeene ki chah dekhi.

tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi
 
kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
ke jindagi ki har chese lagati hai dekhi dekhi..
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«Reply #41 on: August 09, 2008, 01:54:46 PM »
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Aapki last ki teen poems padhi.....aur mere paas words ki ek baar phir kami hai inhe sarahne ke liye........Wonderful Sanjeev Applause Applause  Keep writing
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«Reply #42 on: August 12, 2008, 02:24:11 PM »
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bahoot bahoot abhar aapka talat,
aapne humesha ki tarah is baar bhi nayab tareeke se humara housala badhaya,
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«Reply #43 on: August 30, 2008, 04:35:41 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 03:53:47 AM
fake me din gujare, raisee bhi dekhi,
mahfilen jamai, tanhaiyan bhi dekhi,
kuch is kadar badhi, wakifiyat hummari,
ki jindagi ki har chees lagati hai dekhi dekhi....

dekh kar kisi ko undekha sa karana,
waqt ke sath sath nazar badalte dekhi,

jee na sakunga tum bin, hazzaron dafa kaha tha,
jane ke baad unke, jeene ki chah dekhi.

tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi
 
kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
ke jindagi ki har chese lagati hai dekhi dekhi..

isi ghazal ko kuch aur aage badhate hue ....pesh hai...


sach pe humesha rahna, sachche ka saath dena,
baari jo khud ki aai, seekhen badlate dekhi,
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«Reply #44 on: August 30, 2008, 06:56:28 PM »
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Bohot khoob !!


Insaan ke kya honge, Khuda ke ho na paaye jo
Har mod pe yahan humne bandagi badalti dekhi !!
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