ye wo silsila nahi -Panna 4:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #45 on: September 04, 2008, 02:18:22 PM »

nice lines talat.......superb


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Re: ye wo silsila nahi

«Reply #46 on: September 05, 2008, 03:22:59 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 03:53:47 AM

fake me din gujare, raisee bhi dekhi,
mahfilen jamai, tanhaiyan bhi dekhi,
kuch is kadar badhi, wakifiyat hummari,
ki jindagi ki har chees lagati hai dekhi dekhi....

dekh kar kisi ko undekha sa karana,
waqt ke sath sath nazar badalte dekhi,

jee na sakunga tum bin, hazzaron dafa kaha tha,
jane ke baad unke, jeene ki chah dekhi.

tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi

kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
ke jindagi ki har chese lagati hai dekhi dekhi..

WAH KAY ABAAT HAI.. ek baar phir se kamal ki kavita likhi hai apne... Good job!!

Bahoot door kahin piche rah gai kuch sochein
ajj unhi baaton ko teri soch main dekha....


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Re: ye wo silsila nahi

«Reply #47 on: October 05, 2008, 08:04:43 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 31, 2008, 03:45:30 AM

bahoot kar chuke labo-rukhsaar ki baaten,
palkon ki chilman ki, tere deedar ki baaten,
teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
teri aankhon me doobe kat gai, shaam ki baaten

chalo aaj karte hain kuch kaam ki baaten,
boodhe baap ki charcha, us beemar ki baaten,
maa ki mamata ka bhi zikr, uski sewa ki baaten
un bahno ki yaaden, unke dulaar ki baaten,

tumhaare rukhsaar se jaate gulabi khumar ki baaten,
haqikat se muhn churate tumhare pyaar ki baaten,
chalo mai band karta hun fir ye bekaar si baaten,
lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhote pyaar ki baaten,

Wah Wah..Bahut khoob Sanjeevji..bahut hi khoobsurat panktiyan likhi hai aapne..


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Re: ye wo silsila nahi

«Reply #48 on: October 05, 2008, 08:08:59 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 03:53:47 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeevji..
Wah Kya likhte hai aap!! bahut ache


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Re: ye wo silsila nahi

«Reply #49 on: October 05, 2008, 08:26:19 AM »

khwaish ji,
aapne samay nikala aur padha.....shukgujar hun aapka....housala dete rahiye hum bhi kuch seekhne ki koshish karenge.
sanjeev


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