Yeh do-gazee zameen, meyrey naam darj hai!

by abdbundeli on July 04, 2008, 08:10:09 AM
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 Aadam parast hoon, ki, mahaz aadmee hoon mein:
 Mujh ko bataaiye to sahee, koun hai najeeb?
 
 Yeh do-gazee zameen, meyrey naam darj hai:
 Shak hai, to naap leejiye, ley aaiye jareeb!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2008, 11:42:47 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2008, 01:14:24 AM »
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bahut khoob Abd sahab
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2008, 03:06:24 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 04, 2008, 08:10:09 AM
'Aadam parast hoon, ki, mahaz aadmee hoon mein:
 Mujhko bataaiye to sahee, koun hai najeeb?
 
 Yeh do-gazee zameen, meyrey naam darj hai:
 Shak hai, to naap leejiye, ley aaiye jareeb!!'

                            - abd bundeli

Bahut khoob ABD jee
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2008, 04:40:00 AM »
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Quote:
'PATHAR MUJHE KEHTA HAI MERA CHAHNE WALA
 MAIN MOOM HOON ...
 USNE MUJHE CHU KAR NAHIN DEKHA'

Diya786 ji,

 Isey parh kar mujhey apni eik bahut puraanee gazal kaa matlaa yaad aayaa hai, mulahizaa ho:

 'Moum hoon, par karhaa iraadaa hoon!
  Aur ab, ishq pai aamaadaa hoon!!'

'Celmira ji / Sonia01 ji / Diya786 ji,

  Musthaq do gazee zameen ka hoon mein, bey shak!
 (Kaash, yeh bhi patah hota woh zameen koun see hai?)
  Na jaaney kitney musthaq hain, jinhain, is par bhi,
  Baad marney key, 'do gazee' bhi naheen miltee hai!!

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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2008, 04:43:27 AM »
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nice lines Abd ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 03:37:10 PM »
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Quote from: sarthika on July 06, 2008, 04:43:27 AM
nice lines Abd ji!!
Thanks sarthika ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 03:49:45 PM »
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Wah ABD Ji Bahoot bahoot khoob. Lafse nahi hai mere pass itna umda likha hai.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2009, 12:39:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 17, 2009, 03:49:45 PM
Wah ABD Ji Bahoot bahoot khoob. Lafse nahi hai mere pass itna umda likha hai.. bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot, Sophi ji!
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2009, 12:45:49 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI,KAAFI PURANI QALAAM HAI PAR ABHI BHI DIL KO CHHUTI HAI.
kaun jaane kab maut ka paigam aajaye
bas zindagi ki aakhri shaam aajaye
hamto dhundte hai waqt aisa ki
kab hamari zindagi aapke kaam aajaye   
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2009, 01:11:53 PM »
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Quote from: shab on June 18, 2009, 12:45:49 PM
BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI,KAAFI PURANI QALAAM HAI PAR ABHI BHI DIL KO CHHUTI HAI.

kaun jaane kab maut ka paigam aajaye
bas zindagi ki aakhri shaam aajaye
hamto dhundte hai waqt aisa ki
kab hamari zindagi aapke kaam aajaye  
                                           (NM)

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Shabana ji! Bahut hee oonchee baat kahee hai shayar-e-a'alaa ney!

Doosroun key liye jeetey jo, farishtey hain wo!
Sirf apney liye jeetaa jo: aadmee hai wo!
Jiye jo khud key liye, saath doosroun key liye:
Wo hai insaan;'abd', fakhra-e-aadmee hai wo!!

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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2009, 01:37:01 PM »
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  WAAH BAHUT KHOOB,ISKA TO JAWAAB NAHI HAMARE PAAS
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2009, 01:53:53 PM »
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  WAAH BAHUT KHOOB,ISKA TO JAWAAB NAHI HAMARE PAAS
Shukriyah Shabana ji!
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2010, 04:47:02 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 04, 2008, 08:10:09 AM

 Aadam parast hoon, ki, mahaz aadmee hoon mein:
 Mujh ko bataaiye to sahee, koun hai najeeb?
 
 Yeh do-gazee zameen, meyrey naam darj hai:
 Shak hai, to naap leejiye, ley aaiye jareeb!!

                            - abd bundeli

Wah kya baat hai...
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2010, 06:26:22 AM »
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Quote from: malli on February 17, 2010, 04:47:02 PM
Wah kya baat hai...


Shukriyah, 'malli' ji!

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