Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 25, 2011, 10:25:18 AM
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Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2011, 11:05:26 AM »
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bahut khub khwaishji.... ek dam sach baat jo bahut sundar tarike se pesh ki hai aapne....

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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2011, 11:10:44 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Kya baat hai Khwaish dost..
Woh aena wala ashaar, behad khubsoorat hai..
Wakei sochta raha kay woh mere sabse kareeeb hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2011, 12:09:37 PM »
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Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Khwaish Ji .. aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2011, 12:45:48 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2011, 12:48:28 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...


Priya Ji, Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya

Par Aapne Bataya Nahi Kaunsa Ashaar AapkO Sabse acha laga?? icon_flower

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bahut khub khwaishji.... ek dam sach baat jo bahut sundar tarike se pesh ki hai aapne....

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Aapka Tehh Dill Se Shukriya Anju Ji..

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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2011, 12:58:36 PM »
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sry ji...
is baar likhna hi bhul gayi...
3rd one... is very very nice...


Priya Ji, Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya

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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2011, 01:21:39 PM »
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sry ji...
is baar likhna hi bhul gayi...
3rd one... is very very nice...



Thankyou Sooooooooo Much Priya Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2011, 01:23:57 PM »
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Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



Waah waah Waah,,, Kya khoob likha hai Khwaish ji aapne.. bahoot bahoot Khoob !!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2011, 01:30:52 PM »
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Waah waah Waah,,, Kya khoob likha hai Khwaish ji aapne.. bahoot bahoot Khoob !!!!!


Thankyou Sooooooo Much Sophi aur Aapne jo pic lagayi hai Bahut Khoobsurat Hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2011, 02:17:44 PM »
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Your Most Welcome .. and thank you so much... I did with Firworks..
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2011, 03:11:32 PM »
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Hume Aapki Yeh Baat Bilkul Achhi Nahi Lagi Khwaish Bhai
Ki Aapne Dusron Ke Comments Ko Nazar Andaz Kiya...
Baari Baar Line Mein Rep Karte To Aur Bhi Achha Hota
Kyon Ki Har Koi Comments Tabhi Karta Hai Jab Usse Pansad
Aata Hai...Khair Aap Jyada Samajhdaar Hain Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


Majid Bhai, Main Humesha Jaisa Aapne kaha waise hi karta aaya hoon..main 1rst reply se hi jawaab deta hoon par aaj maine waisa nahi kiya,Yakeen maniye mere mann Mein aisi Koi Galat Intention nahi thi , mujhe bhi aisa laga ke jinhone pehle comments diye hai, unhe yeh baat galat naa lage, lekin aap yakeen maniye main waha par ek-ek sab ko Acknowledge karna chaahta tha par kuch mashrufiyat kaaran kar nahi paaya..main Aapse Aur Sabse Muafi maangta Hoon..Mujhe Muaaf Kar dijiyega..
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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2011, 03:24:24 PM »
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khwaish ji ek aur behtareen peshkash apki kalam se.........jo likha wo lagbhag kafi sach hi he........umda imagination se likhi hui poetry he.....fir dil ko thandak mili ye padkar........keep it up
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«Reply #14 on: March 25, 2011, 03:54:05 PM »
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wah wah khwaish ji second last lines are really fantastic and superb lines.
zindagi ki raahon mein girte hue ko koi thamne wala ho .
khwaish ki nazar mein wo shakhs sabse khushnaseeb hai.
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Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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