Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 25, 2011, 10:25:18 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 25, 2011, 03:57:55 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 25, 2011, 11:10:44 AM
Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Kya baat hai Khwaish dost..
Woh aena wala ashaar, behad khubsoorat hai..
Wakei sochta raha kay woh mere sabse kareeeb hai..
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Khush rahiye..!


Humesha Ki Tarah Aapka Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim..Aapne humesha itni Izzat bakhsi hai ke kya kahoon..bas yuhi saath dete rahiyega..shukriya icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: March 25, 2011, 04:05:26 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 25, 2011, 12:09:37 PM
Khwaish Ji .. aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya nareshji..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: March 25, 2011, 06:25:45 PM »
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mere kahne ke lie ab kuch bacha hi nahi ji khtwaish ji.
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shihab ji mai aapke reply se bahut hurt hua really dukhi kiya aapne.
hum yaha islie comnt nhi karte ki author uss cmnt ko highlight kare. mene kai aise behtareen post dekhe he jispar author apne post par jawaab b nhi dete lekin hum waha b cmnt karte hai.
muje dukh iss bat se hua ki aap jese umda shayr ne aisi bachkaani complain ki.
shayd me aaj ke bad cmnt karna hi chor dunga ab.
meri baate buri lagi ho to muaf kariyega. pr me khud ko rok nhi paya.
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«Reply #18 on: March 25, 2011, 06:38:48 PM »
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khuwaish ji aapne b galt kiya.
jab highlight karna ho tab 1st preference 1st cmnt ko hi diya kare. aap jante hi hai shayar dhl nazuk hota hai choti si bat se b thes pahuchti hai unko.
aapka ye kahna ki waqt ki kami ki wajah se aisa hua ...hume hazam nhi hoti.
aapko bhi bura lagega shayd ..
so teh dil se maafi mangta hu jo mene chota muh aur badi baat kahi.
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«Reply #19 on: March 26, 2011, 09:35:49 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 25, 2011, 03:24:24 PM
khwaish ji ek aur behtareen peshkash apki kalam se.........jo likha wo lagbhag kafi sach hi he........umda imagination se likhi hui poetry he.....fir dil ko thandak mili ye padkar........keep it up

Tehhhh dilll se shukriya Uthkarshji..

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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2011, 09:47:25 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 25, 2011, 03:11:32 PM

Majid Bhai, Main Humesha Jaisa Aapne kaha waise hi karta aaya hoon..main 1rst reply se hi jawaab deta hoon par aaj maine waisa nahi kiya,Yakeen maniye mere mann Mein aisi Koi Galat Intention nahi thi , mujhe bhi aisa laga ke jinhone pehle comments diye hai, unhe yeh baat galat naa lage, lekin aap yakeen maniye main waha par ek-ek sab ko Acknowledge karna chaahta tha par kuch mashrufiyat kaaran kar nahi paaya..main Aapse Aur Sabse Muafi maangta Hoon..Mujhe Muaaf Kar dijiyega...
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Quote from: nirala on March 25, 2011, 06:38:48 PM
khuwaish ji aapne b galt kiya.
jab highlight karna ho tab 1st preference 1st cmnt ko hi diya kare. aap jante hi hai shayar dhl nazuk hota hai choti si bat se b thes pahuchti hai unko.
aapka ye kahna ki waqt ki kami ki wajah se aisa hua ...hume hazam nhi hoti.
aapko bhi bura lagega shayd ..
so teh dil se maafi mangta hu jo mene chota muh aur badi baat kahi.
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Niralaji, Aapne mera reply bhi padha tha ke waqt ki mashurifiyat ke kaaran aisa hua hai ke Har Ek Comment Ko Acknowledge Naa Kar Saka..Aur Jaise aapne Kaha Hai" Ke Aapko Yeh Baat Hajam Nahi Hui!!!" Theek Hai Maanta Hoon Par Uss Line ke Aage Majid Bhai Aur Sab Se Musaafi Bhi Maangi Thi,shayad aap woh line padhna bhool gaye kyonki agar aap woh line padh lete to Samajdaari isme rehti ke aap baat ko khatam kar dete,Naa ke aap apni explanation lekar iss baat ko aur aage le jaate..Main koi bhi nahi kisi ko seekh dene wala par ek baat kehta chaloon..Jab Koi Insaan Apni Galti Maanta Hai Usse Ussi waqt Muaaf kar dena hi Insaaniyat Hai Naa Ki uss Baat Par Charcha Karna..Shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: March 26, 2011, 09:54:52 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 25, 2011, 03:54:05 PM
wah wah khwaish ji second last lines are really fantastic and superb lines.
zindagi ki raahon mein girte hue ko koi thamne wala ho .
khwaish ki nazar mein wo shakhs sabse khushnaseeb hai.
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Huemsha Ki Tarah Aapka Bahut bahut Aur Bahut shukriya Sureshji..

Aapne Pasand farmaya Yeh jaankar Bahut Khushi hui hai.

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«Reply #22 on: March 28, 2011, 05:41:01 PM »
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Yeh kahaan aa gaye  hum....ye kaun si jagaah hai doston....
Yeh kaisa shehar hai bhai,yahaan har Khwaish reh gayi adhuri....
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«Reply #23 on: April 04, 2011, 01:04:09 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on March 28, 2011, 05:41:01 PM
Yeh kahaan aa gaye  hum....ye kaun si jagaah hai doston....
Yeh kaisa shehar hai bhai,yahaan har Khwaish reh gayi adhuri....


Hmm..Bahut AChe Khayal Anaam ji
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«Reply #24 on: April 04, 2011, 01:26:24 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 25, 2011, 10:25:18 AM
Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


UMDA KALAAM AUR SACHCHI BAAT ....!! BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #25 on: May 14, 2011, 08:52:59 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 04, 2011, 01:26:24 PM

UMDA KALAAM AUR SACHCHI BAAT ....!! BAHUT KHOOB

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«Reply #26 on: May 14, 2011, 11:02:32 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 25, 2011, 10:25:18 AM
Jo Jitna Door Hai Woh Utna kareeb Hai
 Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Naseeb Hai!!!

Naam Waffa ka Iss Shehar Mein Badnaam Hai!!!!
Yeh Kaisa Shehar Hai Har cheez yahan Ajeeb hai

Suna Hai Yahan Rishto Ka Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Apno Ke Bhes mein Rehte Yahan Raqeeb hai

Nazar-Andaaz Karta Raha Apna Hi Aaena Mujhe!!
Main Sochta Raha Umarbhar Wohi Mere Sabse kareeb Hai

Zindagi ki Raahon mein Girte Hue Ko Koi Thaamne wala Ho!!
"Khwaish" Ki Nazar mein Shaks Sabse Khus-Naseeb hai

 "Khwaish" Insaan ka Nek Dil Hi uski Pehchaan hai!!
Dil Ka Woh Sabse Amir ho Chaahe Halaat Ka Woh Gareeb Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

bahut khoob khawaish ji. sahi baato.N ka mozhaira karaya hai apne kalaam mein. jo ki abb shayad khawab sa ho chala haihaqiqat mein
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«Reply #27 on: August 10, 2011, 05:27:56 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 14, 2011, 11:02:32 AM
bahut khoob khawaish ji. sahi baato.N ka mozhaira karaya hai apne kalaam mein. jo ki abb shayad khawab sa ho chala haihaqiqat mein

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«Reply #28 on: April 24, 2013, 04:49:12 AM »
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