Yet another comeback

by thycreator on September 06, 2009, 07:13:15 AM
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Hello friends,

Aaj jaane kyun yoindia wapis aane ka dil hua....Usual Smile


Ek din ye galiyan chod main aage badh gaya,
Naye mayane samajhne ka waqt aaya tha jaise.

Naye sapno ko sakar karne ki tamanna si thi,
Naye rahon ko apnane ki justju thi dil mein.

Naye anjaam tai kiye, naye aayam sanjoye gaye,
Chand armaano ko iss jeewan ka aadhar bana liya.

Par ab ehsaas hota hai, parinda kab talak ude,
Ab waqt aagaya hai apne ghar laut jaane ka.

Jahan se shuru hui thi kahani mere jeewan ki,
Uss needh ko hi apni karma bhumi banane ka.

Aaj phir se iss dar pe, ek dastak  hai di humne,
Mere apno se iltejha hai mujhe apna banane ka.

Ek bhule hue panchi ko uska thikana nazar aaya,
Iss gharaode mein ab chain se rehne ka sabab hai.
 


Thanks a lot to all of you Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2009, 08:27:32 AM »
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its really good to see such a good eriter and one of the senior member of yoinda coming back to us
u r welcome sir ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2009, 08:39:51 AM »
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Wah wah Creator ji bahut khoob ,mindblowing creation.excellent Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_thumleft
Welcome back to yo.
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2009, 09:40:20 AM »
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Thanks a lot Saahil, bahut dino se soch raha tha, aaj amal karne ka man ho gaya  Usual Smile Koshish karunga ki main aap logon ki ummeed pe khara utar sakun

Thanks a lot madhuwesh ji......accha laga wapis aakar.

Apni dunia ko chod kar hum jayenge bhi kahan,
Sikandar sa hashra ho apni aisi aarzoo nahi... Giggle
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2009, 11:15:32 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Amit Bhai....Apne Jazbaaton ko Aapne bakhoobi Lafzon mein Bayaan Kiya..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko phir Likhte Dekh kar Acha Laga.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2009, 11:19:03 AM »
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Welcome back Thycreator Ji  icon_thumleft

Bohot Khoob...achcha laga dekh ke aapko !
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2009, 01:10:04 PM »
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Really nice one ThyCreator Ji...

Welcome Back Usual Smile

Its realy nice to see you here. . . again....
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2009, 01:40:56 PM »
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Nice... Welcome Back Amit ji
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thycreator
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2009, 03:28:12 AM »
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Thanks a lot sabhi logon.......mujhe khud bhi accha lag raha hai wapis aakar.....hope to read much more from you all...Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2009, 04:04:58 AM »
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Welcome back Amit ji!!!   Applause Applause Applause 
janati hu apki life busy hai.. magar kabhi kabhar aa hi jaaya kare...
acha lagta hai... NaNaNa
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2009, 09:43:21 AM »
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woh aaye iss mehfil mein khuda ki kudrat hai
kabhi hum unki shayri kabhi Yoindia ko dekhte hai

accha lga aap ko dekh kar yahan .... umeed hai aap ke darshaan hote rhenge ....  humne toh socha tha ke kissi blonde ke sath rafu-chakkar ho gaye ... waseey Canada ki wadiyon mein aisa kya khas hai ke insaan wha jakar sab ko bhul jata hai?

bahrhaal ... khushamdeed.
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2009, 01:41:17 PM »
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Welcome back !

Waah Waah Kya baat hai Amit ji urf Dr. Amit ji.. aate hi damaal kar diya.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai !
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2010, 07:38:39 AM »
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Thanks a lot Sophi Ji.....ek aur return ki koshish kar raha hun....kya karun....zaalim dunia mein uljha hua shakhs hun....Usual Smile
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