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Doston--mujhe yakeen ho gaya ki mai kuch jhakash sa likh nai sakta--isslie ab mai yahan par Har woh reply,comnt aur short shayries share karunga jo mujhe YO par kisi post me YoIndians dwara likha gaya ho Usual Smile
aur bhi log aisa kar sakte hain--
Parwaaz ji ka ek reply-
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mujhko dekha na to mujhse kuch kaha
unke dil me hai kya mai sochta rah gaya

saamne hi mere kah gaye jhuth woh
unki aankho me main jhankta rah gaya

aarzoo dil ki dil me hi dabee rah gayee
usse kya puchhta, puchhna rah gaya
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2011, 05:16:36 PM »
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Gyan Prakash ::
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waqt ki aandhi aisi chali ki woh kisi aur ki baanho me hai

      aur mai unki yaadon ke murjhaaye phool dekhta rah gaya
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2011, 05:22:05 PM »
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ek Nakaam si kosis mujh Sarfire ki--
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Jaanewalon ko kaun roak paya hai
Sitamgar unhe bhi waqt ne banaya hai

kahan rah pata tha woh ik pal bhi mere bin
sadiyon ka ashq jamakar shayad usne, dil apna patthar banaya hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2011, 07:12:08 PM »
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S Fira jee Aadaab!

Janab aapko kisne kah diyaa ke aap achcha nahi likhate..
khud ki achchaiyoN ka aur buraaiyoN ka andaaza khud insaan kabhi sahiN nahi lagaa pata hai janab ...  ??

Aur aap behad achcha likh raheN hai aapki last kalaam bahut khub
thi.. jis par shayad hum dil se tareef nahi kar paaye par..
yakeen janiye behad gehre aur achche khayaal likhate hai aap
aur kafi members se jyadaa achcha likhate haiN Usual Smile


And thanks for this .. ke aapko humari yeH chaNd line pasaNd
aayi aur aapne inhe is kabil samjha ... Dar asal yeH kalaam humne bahut pahele likhi hai jab hum bher meiN likhana sikh rahe
the aur yehi humari bher meiN likhane ki paheli aur aakhri koshish thi jo nakaam rahi sad5 so uske bad humne bher meiN dimaag karaab karne ka khayaal dil se nikaal diya Usual Smile

 

... puri kalaam bhi pesh kar dete haiN Usual Smile

Lijiye puri kalaam ka lutf lijiye Usual Smile         



WoH kareeb aaye magar faslaa reh gaya
Jaane shikwa bhala kounsaa reh gaya

Ruberu hii maiN uske khada tha magar
Maire saaye ko wo dekhtaa reh gaya

Mujhko dekha na to mujhse kuch kahaa
Uske dil mein hia kya sochtaa reh gaya

Samne hii maire kahe gaye jhuth woH
Unki ankhoN mein main jhaktaa reh gaya

Aarzoo dil ki dil mein dabi reh gayee
Usse kya puchta, puchnaa reh gaya

Koi Kwahish poorii huyii naa kabhi
sirf gardishoN ka hi samnaa reh gaya         

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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2011, 07:14:01 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 16, 2011, 07:12:08 PM
S Fira jee Aadaab!

Janab aapko kisne kah diyaa ke aap achcha nahi likhate..
khud ki achchaiyoN ka aur buraaiyoN ka andaaza khud insaan kabhi sahiN nahi lagaa pata hai janab ...  ??

Aur aap behad achcha likh raheN hai aapki last kalaam bahut khub
thi.. jis par shayad hum dil se tareef nahi kar paaye par..
yakeen janiye behad gehre aur achche khayaal likhate hai aap
aur kafi members se jyadaa achcha likhate haiN Usual Smile


And thanks for this .. ke aapko humari yeH chaNd line pasaNd
aayi aur aapne inhe is kabil samjha ... Dar asal yeH kalaam humne bahut pahele likhi hai jab hum bher meiN likhana sikh rahe
the aur yehi humari bher meiN likhane ki paheli aur aakhri koshish thi jo nakaam rahi sad5 so uske bad humne bher meiN dimaag karaab karne ka khayaal dil se nikaal diya Usual Smile

 

... puri kalaam bhi pesh kar dete haiN Usual Smile

Lijiye puri kalaam ka lutf lijiye Usual Smile         



WoH kareeb aaye magar faslaa reh gaya
Jaane shikwa bhala kounsaa reh gaya

Ruberu hii maiN uske khada tha magar
Maire saaye ko wo dekhtaa reh gaya

Mujhko dekha na to mujhse kuch kahaa
Uske dil mein hia kya sochtaa reh gaya

Samne hii maire kahe gaye jhuth woH
Unki ankhoN mein main jhaktaa reh gaya

Aarzoo dil ki dil mein dabi reh gayee
Usse kya puchta, puchnaa reh gaya

Koi Kwahish poorii huyii naa kabhi
sirf gardishoN ka hi samnaa reh gaya         



Waah waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khooob Parwaaz Ji..Kya Kehne Saheb Aapke...

Har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2011, 07:15:50 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 16, 2011, 07:12:08 PM
S Fira jee Aadaab!

Janab aapko kisne kah diyaa ke aap achcha nahi likhate..
khud ki achchaiyoN ka aur buraaiyoN ka andaaza khud insaan kabhi sahiN nahi lagaa pata hai janab ...  ??

Aur aap behad achcha likh raheN hai aapki last kalaam bahut khub
thi.. jis par shayad hum dil se tareef nahi kar paaye par..
yakeen janiye behad gehre aur achche khayaal likhate hai aap
aur kafi members se jyadaa achcha likhate haiN Usual Smile


And thanks for this .. ke aapko humari yeH chaNd line pasaNd
aayi aur aapne inhe is kabil samjha ... Dar asal yeH kalaam humne bahut pahele likhi hai jab hum bher meiN likhana sikh rahe
the aur yehi humari bher meiN likhane ki paheli aur aakhri koshish thi jo nakaam rahi sad5 so uske bad humne bher meiN dimaag karaab karne ka khayaal dil se nikaal diya Usual Smile

 

... puri kalaam bhi pesh kar dete haiN Usual Smile

Lijiye puri kalaam ka lutf lijiye Usual Smile        



WoH kareeb aaye magar faslaa reh gaya
Jaane shikwa bhala kounsaa reh gaya

Ruberu hii maiN uske khada tha magar
Maire saaye ko wo dekhtaa reh gaya

Mujhko dekha na to mujhse kuch kahaa
Uske dil mein hia kya sochtaa reh gaya

Samne hii maire kahe gaye jhuth woH
Unki ankhoN mein main jhaktaa reh gaya

Aarzoo dil ki dil mein dabi reh gayee
Usse kya puchta, puchnaa reh gaya

Koi Kwahish poorii huyii naa kabhi
sirf gardishoN ka hi samnaa reh gaya          




BAHUT KHOOB...SHAYAD MAINE BHI PADHA HAI PAHLE


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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2011, 07:16:57 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 16, 2011, 05:13:42 PM
Doston--mujhe yakeen ho gaya ki mai kuch jhakash sa likh nai sakta--isslie ab mai yahan par Har woh reply,comnt aur short shayries share karunga jo mujhe YO par kisi post me YoIndians dwara likha gaya ho Usual Smile
aur bhi log aisa kar sakte hain--
Parwaaz ji ka ek reply-
!
mujhko dekha na to mujhse kuch kaha
unke dil me hai kya mai sochta rah gaya

saamne hi mere kah gaye jhuth woh
unki aankho me main jhankta rah gaya

aarzoo dil ki dil me hi dabee rah gayee
usse kya puchhta, puchhna rah gaya
!
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2011, 07:19:17 PM »
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bahut khoob Parwaaz sahab... Usual Smile

 love9 dil bagh bagh ho gaya... love9
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2011, 03:39:26 AM »
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kya baat kya baat Parwaaz sahab--

mai to masti me jhoom gaya aapka poora post parh ke Usual Smile

aur han sukriya janaab ki aapne meri bhi tarif kar di Usual Smile
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