Yoindia - Beete palo ki dastan yaad aa gai

by deepika_divya on July 09, 2009, 11:14:12 AM
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Aaj achanak hi beete Palo ki Dastan yaad aa gai
Woh haste Khelte , Mehfil ki Waah waahi yaad aa gai

Jahan sab apne yaar the, Na koi paraya hua tha
Hass kar saath dete sabi, Woh baat yaad aa gai

Jahan apno se jayada Pyaar aur Dulaar mila tha
Unn Dosto ka saath, Unse Hui Judaai yaad aa gai

Jahan Samaye ki na Garwalo ki daant ki parwaa thi
Uss Yoindia k Monitors ki pyaari Daant yaad aa gai

Jahan Kisi k Dil ko dukne nahi dete the Mere yaar
uss Sundar aur Pyaare se Pariwaar ki yaad aa gai


__DIVYA__

Green color isliye kyunki Yoindia ka rang pehle yahi tha...
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 11:18:46 AM »
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Wah Sophi.... Kya Sucche Ehasaas Likhe hain dear.. aur Is Khubsoorat Yaad Ko aapne Lafzon Me dhaal kar likha.. waqai Qaabil-e-Taareef Hai... Really Great Work Yaaaaar.. Applause Applause


Waqai Is RAchna Ko Padh kar Beete dino ki.. Puraane doston ki yaad aagai...!! Jinke sath Bahut baar Mehfil sajaai Hai.. bahut Miss karta hoon wo din...  Crying Crying!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2009, 11:23:47 AM »
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divya di sach me wo bite dino ki yaad aa gayi...bahut hain aise jo ab nahi aa rahe..sab kitne masti karte the mil ke...
bahut khoob likha aap ne...
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2009, 11:37:51 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Divs..behad achche ehsasat hain.....Nice creation  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 11:38:58 AM »
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Wah wah Sophi ji,kamaal ke likhi aapne dosto ke liye,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 04:52:41 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 09, 2009, 11:18:46 AM
Wah Sophi.... Kya Sucche Ehasaas Likhe hain dear.. aur Is Khubsoorat Yaad Ko aapne Lafzon Me dhaal kar likha.. waqai Qaabil-e-Taareef Hai... Really Great Work Yaaaaar.. Applause Applause


Waqai Is RAchna Ko Padh kar Beete dino ki.. Puraane doston ki yaad aagai...!! Jinke sath Bahut baar Mehfil sajaai Hai.. bahut Miss karta hoon wo din...  Crying Crying!!!


**~** Mann **~**

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaan Vikas... sach mea badi yaad aa rahi hai.. vikas.. kaas koi jaadu aata mujhe sab ko fir se wahin puraane dino mea le chalti...
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 04:53:57 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 09, 2009, 11:23:47 AM
divya di sach me wo bite dino ki yaad aa gayi...bahut hain aise jo ab nahi aa rahe..sab kitne masti karte the mil ke...
bahut khoob likha aap ne...

Thank you so much Punam.. really missing the old days
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 04:55:45 PM »
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Really very beautiful Sophi. ye padhke sach mein yaad aa gayi un beete dino ki. Jahan sab jagah bas apna pan tha, kahin kisi ke dil mein koi khalish nahi...

Kya pata wo din aayenge ya nahi wapas...
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 04:56:03 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 09, 2009, 11:14:12 AM
Aaj achanak hi beete Palo ki Dastan yaad aa gai
Woh haste Khelte , Mehfil ki Waah waahi yaad aa gai

Jahan sab apne yaar the, Na koi paraya hua tha
Hass kar saath dete sabi, Woh baat yaad aa gai

Jahan apno se jayada Pyaar aur Dulaar mila tha
Unn Dosto ka saath, Unse Hui Judaai yaad aa gai

Jahan Samaye ki na Garwalo ki daant ki parwaa thi
Uss Yoindia k Monitors ki pyaari Daant yaad aa gai

Jahan Kisi k Dil ko dukne nahi dete the Mere yaar
uss Sundar aur Pyaare se Pariwaar ki yaad aa gai


__DIVYA__

Green color isliye kyunki Yoindia ka rang pehle yahi tha...

Wah kya din they....  sad5 sad5 ............... Haan Green color tha tab.
But kahan gaye wo din  sad5
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 05:02:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoooob sophi.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoobsurti se Aapne Apne Iss Ehsaas Ko lafzo mein Utaara..

Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2009, 10:33:03 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 11:37:51 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Divs..behad achche ehsasat hain.....Nice creation  icon_thumleft

Thank yo Di... Thank you so much ...
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2009, 10:33:47 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 09, 2009, 11:38:58 AM
Wah wah Sophi ji,kamaal ke likhi aapne dosto ke liye,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Sukhriyaan Madhu ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 10:35:42 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on July 09, 2009, 04:55:45 PM

Really very beautiful Sophi. ye padhke sach mein yaad aa gayi un beete dino ki. Jahan sab jagah bas apna pan tha, kahin kisi ke dil mein koi khalish nahi...

Kya pata wo din aayenge ya nahi wapas...

Thank you so much Sweetz... hope so fir se mehfile saje... fir  se baahaar aaye...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 10:36:39 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 09, 2009, 04:56:03 PM

Wah kya din they....  sad5 sad5 ............... Haan Green color tha tab.
But kahan gaye wo din  sad5

Haan sach me bahoot pyaare din the.. sab kitna mast hua karta tha... missing na...
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:37:17 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 09, 2009, 05:02:43 PM
Bahut bahut Khoooob sophi.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoobsurti se Aapne Apne Iss Ehsaas Ko lafzo mein Utaara..

Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaan Khwaish ji.. Thank you
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