waah tabassum aaj pehliibaar tumeh paRha bahoot hi achha likhti hi.....Ek Genral verse ko free hand se iss tara dena......achha lagta hai how the pen bleeds one can see.....its an art....
gar tum hote aaj yahaaN per
Naye musafir panap gaye haiN
Dil ki bateiN apne is yo par
likhte likhte pakde gaye haiN
nayii soch ke naye tarane
aaker dekho Goonj rahe haiN
Tere musalsal shabdoN se jo
Nikle ahsaas ab tol rahe haiN.
Rishta itna hi tha tera kya
Tere shabd ab bol rahe haiN
nayi umer ki nayi fasal ko
apni kalam se tol rahe haiN.
hmmmm yahaan sabko yoindia ke baare me likhna hai
bole to aapko kaisa lagta hai kya rishta hai isase .........main likhti hun
sabse pahle apun ko bole to prose likhna mushkil padta hai to asusual verse hi likhungi ......................
*******YoInDiA********
phir ik din aisa aayega
jab naam yahaan ke badalenge
kuchh naye naam muskaaenge
tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge
nai soch ki nai si baaten
naye tarane goonjenge
nai dosti naye se shikve
naye bahane hans denge
phir koi kisi ke likhe ko
ik naye se dhang se sarahegaa
aur koi likha kisi ka bas
kisi ka saath nibhayega
tab naam aaj jo hain saare
un naye naamo par muskaenge
yaadon ki dhund me kuchh chehare
khwaabon se hasin muskaaenge
hai ek nasha ye saath yahaan
jo aur badha jab likh daala
ise jab hai padha ye sar pe chadha
jab bhoolna chaaaha rog bana
ye dil se yun vaabsta sa
ab isase juda na soch koi
jab yahaan likha dil khush hai hua
jab nahi likha dil afsurda
ye saath bhi hai aur saath nahi
ye dil me hai aawaaz nahi
jab dil se maine kabhi poochha
kya rishta hai isase tera
dil hans ke mujhse kahta hai
main dil tera ye dil mera........
on eTI community..
