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by ~Aatish~ on April 24, 2012, 07:14:56 PM
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sab muzse khafa kyu hai
sab muzse juda kyu hai
Doly maasi bhi nai puche
Punam ji ko bura laga kyu hai
Babaji ab puchte nai
ustadji chup bhala kyu hai
Saini bhai kuch kahe to
sab se achca kyu hai
Sky ki tear kyu silent
kohinoor kahi gaya kyu hai
kyun nai karti sheba ji tarif
bura itna mene lika kyu hai
Nisha ji khahish ji parbaz ji
muze batao ye rista kyu hai
khusi se khleti thi pari
Punam sikhai thi antakshri
sayri mei game me ehan
itna maja kyu hai
roz sochta hai ~aatish~
YOindia muze mila kyu hai...... sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2012, 07:36:56 PM »
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Very Nice.
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2012, 03:53:43 AM »
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Etni sikayate.
Bhai aesa kya kar diya sabne ki aapko sabse sikayate ho rahi h.
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2012, 05:42:48 AM »
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arrrrrrr lo ji janaab gayab rhte hain....:)hero aaoge to poochenge ye kb se khayal aa gayaaa.....??patakhaji.....cm soon...ya:)
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2012, 07:56:11 AM »
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bhai main to sabko reply detaa hoon aap bahut achhaaa kahte hain aaj kaa bhee byaan aapkaa khoob rahaa leejiye daad aur rau dono hazair hain
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2012, 07:01:02 AM »
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thank u ifteqar ji, masum ji, doly maasi, saini bhai thank u very much.
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 07:10:50 AM »
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thnku nai....aaya karo yahan....:)frequently....
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2012, 07:58:52 AM »
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hahhahahah Atish tumhari ye post dekh sab yaad aagaye yo india ke members .... lovely poem dear
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2012, 03:45:45 AM »
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thank u kasak ji.
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2012, 06:31:09 AM »
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thnku nai....aaya karo yahan....:)frequently....

maasi jii mai aa gaya aap kethe ho  wave wave
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2012, 06:32:14 AM »
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hahhahahah Atish tumhari ye post dekh sab yaad aagaye yo india ke members .... lovely poem dear

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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2012, 06:04:21 AM »
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
aaap aaoge itnaa kam kam
to taarifen bhi hongi na kam
aate rahoge, likhte rahoge
tabhi to wah waahi paaoge tum...

aaj kitne din baad aaye hain aap yahaan?Huh?? aate rahiye likhte rahiye... Usual Smile

take care...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2012, 06:25:24 AM »
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hriday ji thanku jii thanku.
mai roj nai aa skta.
isliye itte din bad aaya.
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2013, 02:33:36 PM »
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 sad11 sad11 sad11


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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2013, 02:57:14 PM »
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sab muzse khafa kyu hai
sab muzse juda kyu hai
Doly maasi bhi nai puche
Punam ji ko bura laga kyu hai
Babaji ab puchte nai
ustadji chup bhala kyu hai
Saini bhai kuch kahe to
sab se achca kyu hai
Sky ki tear kyu silent
kohinoor kahi gaya kyu hai
kyun nai karti sheba ji tarif
bura itna mene lika kyu hai
Nisha ji khahish ji parbaz ji
muze batao ye rista kyu hai
khusi se khleti thi pari
Punam sikhai thi antakshri
sayri mei game me ehan
itna maja kyu hai
roz sochta hai ~aatish~
YOindia muze mila kyu hai...... sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5


likho boss !!!!!!!!!! i will appreciate but mind your word too during writing

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