!!! * Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe * !!!

by Matrix Guy on January 20, 2011, 06:10:53 AM
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!!! Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe !!!


Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He
Likhti He Dil Ki Baat Anamika, To Koyal Ki Apni Anokhi Ada He

Sach Basta He Mamta Ki Gajlo Me, Priya Ka Alag Hi Jajba He
Sheba Ke Bate Dil Me Utar Jaye, Parwaj Ka Jawab Sabse Juda He

Intjaar Ki Batoo Me Sab Kho Jate He, Bekarar Rah Rah Kar Deta Sada He
Khwaish Ki Kalam Ko Chum Lu, Nikhar Ke Har Lafj Me Basti Wafa He

Rahim Dil Me Utar Jata He, Abhi Per Meri Dhadkan Bhi Fida He
Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He

Nirala Ki Bato Me Masti He, KB Khushnuma Hasti He
Sahiil Likhta He Masti Me, Le Jati He Geet Sabko Ishq Ki Kashti Me

Naresh Dil Me Utar Jata He, Gul Ka Likha Khoob Lubhata He
Bundeli Dil Ko Tadpata He Rishi Dil Hatho Me Le Aata He

Manju Ki Mahfil Ka Kya Kahna, Shihab Ki Gajlo Me Dubee Rahna He
Har Ek Yoindia Ka Gahna He Humko Bas Ye Hi Kahna He

Shayari Aur Gajlo Ki Hoti Yaha Barsaat Rahe
Sajti U Hi Mahfile Din  Raat Rahe,
Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe



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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2011, 07:19:58 AM »
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wah wah Matrix ji kya khoob likha Usual Smile
mast hai bilkul .
bas bhai aap hi likh sakte ho aisa.
bahut khub
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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2011, 07:57:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause :clap:wah wah bahut khoobji bada hi matrix andaz hai ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2011, 08:02:33 AM »
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ehehhehe...

bahut badhiya....

akhir jalwa dikha diya...

hazaron daad~ bhaiii...

kuchh bat to he teri kalam me pyaare,
yunhi nah is dil se wah wah nikalti hai~
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2011, 09:45:18 AM »
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ek baat bataiye ji.....aapne sab k bare me to likh diya lekin khud ka kahin koi atapata nahin...aisa kyun ji......

chaliye hum batate hain k aapki kya khubiyan hain

jab bhi likhte ho ek junun sa chha jata hai
dil k uthte toofaan ko sukkun sa mil jata hai

har dard ko har tadap ko wo darsha jata hai
kisi bhi vishay pe wo bas yunhi likh jata hai

tareef kare kisiki to use gururr sa ho jata hai
apni anokhi shayri se sabka dil wo jeet jata hai

kya kahun main k mujhe kitna wo pagal kar jata hai
jab MATRIX GUY shayri se mehfil koi saja jata hai...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2011, 09:56:14 AM »
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!!! Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe !!!


Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He
Likhti He Dil Ki Baat Anamika, To Koyal Ki Apni Anokhi Ada He

Sach Basta He Mamta Ki Gajlo Me, Priya Ka Alag Hi Jajba He
Sheba Ke Bate Dil Me Utar Jaye, Parwaj Ka Jawab Sabse Juda He

Intjaar Ki Batoo Me Sab Kho Jate He, Bekarar Rah Rah Kar Deta Sada He
Khwaish Ki Kalam Ko Chum Lu, Nikhar Ke Har Lafj Me Basti Wafa He

Rahim Dil Me Utar Jata He, Abhi Per Meri Dhadkan Bhi Fida He
Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He

Nirala Ki Bato Me Masti He, KB Khushnuma Hasti He
Sahiil Likhta He Masti Me, Le Jati He Geet Sabko Ishq Ki Kashti Me

Naresh Dil Me Utar Jata He, Gul Ka Likha Khoob Lubhata He
Bundeli Dil Ko Tadpata He Rishi Dil Hatho Me Le Aata He

Manju Ki Mahfil Ka Kya Kahna, Shihab Ki Gajlo Me Dubee Rahna He
Har Ek Yoindia Ka Gahna He Humko Bas Ye Hi Kahna He

Shayari Aur Gajlo Ki Hoti Yaha Barsaat Rahe
Sajti U Hi Mahfile Din  Raat Rahe,
Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe





Bahut Hi Pyaari Aur Dil Ko Lubha Jaane Wali Kavita Likhi Hai Aapne Uthkarsh ji..bahut Hi Khoobsurti Se Aapne Apni Baat kahi..

bahut Bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.

Aur Teh Dil Se Shukriya Jo Aapne Mera Naam Bhi Darj kiya iss kavita Mein.. icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2011, 09:58:05 AM »
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ek baat bataiye ji.....aapne sab k bare me to likh diya lekin khud ka kahin koi atapata nahin...aisa kyun ji......

chaliye hum batate hain k aapki kya khubiyan hain

jab bhi likhte ho ek junun sa chha jata hai
dil k uthte toofaan ko sukkun sa mil jata hai

har dard ko har tadap ko wo darsha jata hai
kisi bhi vishay pe wo bas yunhi likh jata hai

tareef kare kisiki to use gururr sa ho jata hai
apni anokhi shayri se sabka dil wo jeet jata hai

kya kahun main k mujhe kitna wo pagal kar jata hai
jab MATRIX GUY shayri se mehfil koi saja jata hai...!!!

Bahut khoob Anuji..Aapne Uthkarshji Ke liye Bilkul sahi likha Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Uthkarshji, Aap vaakai bahut Acha Likhte Ho... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2011, 10:08:09 AM »
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shukriya khwaish ji aapne meri baat ko sehmati di....thnx ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2011, 10:17:39 AM »
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sahi hai Kasak --
bilkul sahi kaha.
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matrix ke shayri ke bhi kya kahne
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2011, 11:54:19 AM »
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wowwwwww Matrix ji aap belive nai karoge.
mene ek baar iss topic par socha tha kuch likhne ka lekin u knw mera mobile space jada nai deta.
512 leter ki bandish hai so kabhi try nhi kiya.
aapne wo ichha poori ki aur Kasam se kya Mast poori kar di.
lekin ye kya--aap khud hi gayab ho iss post me se sad5sad5
ye baat nai Jammu mujhe bilkul nahi jammu re sad5
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matrix teri ada bhi nirali hai
tere shayri pe meera bhi Deewani hai
   sabse nashila hai jadu tumara
   aur tumne apna hi naam is post se nikaala hai
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2011, 12:58:16 PM »
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Hum koi aap jaisi poem tou likh nahi sakte.....aapki taariff mai do lines likhne  ki gustaaki kar rahe hain maaff kijiyega aapko tariff kam lage tou........

kya kahun mein UTKARSH(MG) k kitni Utkarsh teri ye adaa hai....
  
jab bhi MATRIX GUY mehfil mai tu aata hai dilon ko chhu leta hai...!!!

!!! Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe !!!


Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He
Likhti He Dil Ki Baat Anamika, To Koyal Ki Apni Anokhi Ada He

Sach Basta He Mamta Ki Gajlo Me, Priya Ka Alag Hi Jajba He
Sheba Ke Bate Dil Me Utar Jaye, Parwaj Ka Jawab Sabse Juda He

Intjaar Ki Batoo Me Sab Kho Jate He, Bekarar Rah Rah Kar Deta Sada He
Khwaish Ki Kalam Ko Chum Lu, Nikhar Ke Har Lafj Me Basti Wafa He

Rahim Dil Me Utar Jata He, Abhi Per Meri Dhadkan Bhi Fida He
Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He

Nirala Ki Bato Me Masti He, KB Khushnuma Hasti He
Sahiil Likhta He Masti Me, Le Jati He Geet Sabko Ishq Ki Kashti Me

Naresh Dil Me Utar Jata He, Gul Ka Likha Khoob Lubhata He
Bundeli Dil Ko Tadpata He Rishi Dil Hatho Me Le Aata He

Manju Ki Mahfil Ka Kya Kahna, Shihab Ki Gajlo Me Dubee Rahna He
Har Ek Yoindia Ka Gahna He Humko Bas Ye Hi Kahna He

Shayari Aur Gajlo Ki Hoti Yaha Barsaat Rahe
Sajti U Hi Mahfile Din  Raat Rahe,
Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe

 
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2011, 01:01:56 PM »
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Thx u all members for liking it and appreciating it………….well likhte huey jane ktine hi members ko bhul gaya……jese kash ji, sajid ghayel ji………mann ji……..rajesh ji…….aur bhi jane kitne naam he ………..sach kahu to ye jo naam he unme se adhe bhi nahi yaad rakh paya…..……jinki post padta hu  aur yakin maniye sab ek se badkar ek……..jese sacche motiyo ki mala he yoindia pe…..but fir bhi bhul gaya…..sorry for that to all those members……umiid he sabhi muje maaf kar denge………..and once again thx for ur encouragement
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2011, 04:29:50 PM »
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!!! Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe !!!


Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He
Likhti He Dil Ki Baat Anamika, To Koyal Ki Apni Anokhi Ada He

Sach Basta He Mamta Ki Gajlo Me, Priya Ka Alag Hi Jajba He
Sheba Ke Bate Dil Me Utar Jaye, Parwaj Ka Jawab Sabse Juda He

Intjaar Ki Batoo Me Sab Kho Jate He, Bekarar Rah Rah Kar Deta Sada He
Khwaish Ki Kalam Ko Chum Lu, Nikhar Ke Har Lafj Me Basti Wafa He

Rahim Dil Me Utar Jata He, Abhi Per Meri Dhadkan Bhi Fida He
Har Shaqs Ki Apni Ada He, Hum To  Sab Par Fida He

Nirala Ki Bato Me Masti He, KB Khushnuma Hasti He
Sahiil Likhta He Masti Me, Le Jati He Geet Sabko Ishq Ki Kashti Me

Naresh Dil Me Utar Jata He, Gul Ka Likha Khoob Lubhata He
Bundeli Dil Ko Tadpata He Rishi Dil Hatho Me Le Aata He

Manju Ki Mahfil Ka Kya Kahna, Shihab Ki Gajlo Me Dubee Rahna He
Har Ek Yoindia Ka Gahna He Humko Bas Ye Hi Kahna He

Shayari Aur Gajlo Ki Hoti Yaha Barsaat Rahe
Sajti U Hi Mahfile Din  Raat Rahe,
Yoindia U Hi Abaad Rahe





Utakrsh ji behad khubsurat aur nirale andazz mein likha hai apne sach kahu dil ko chhu gyi apki kavita...bahut bahut shukriya apne lafzo mein shaamil karne k liye aur itna sam'maan dene k liye..shukriya ji...
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2011, 06:21:11 PM »
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Thx u all members for liking it and appreciating it………….well likhte huey jane ktine hi members ko bhul gaya……jese kash ji, sajid ghayel ji………mann ji……..rajesh ji…….aur bhi jane kitne naam he ………..sach kahu to ye jo naam he unme se adhe bhi nahi yaad rakh paya…..……jinki post padta hu  aur yakin maniye sab ek se badkar ek……..jese sacche motiyo ki mala he yoindia pe…..but fir bhi bhul gaya…..sorry for that to all those members……umiid he sabhi muje maaf kar denge………..and once again thx for ur encouragement

koi baat nahin rajajai..ek post aur ho jaye un sabke naam jinhe aap bhulgaye hain...kya bolte ho ji...
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2011, 07:16:01 AM »
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mene jiska bhi naam include kiya he wo deserve karta he .........aap sabhi apne aap me shyari ki misal he ......sirf ek baar sabhi ki ek sath dil se tarif karna chahta tha bas ye hi choti si koshish ki he aur kuch nahi........
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