YOINDIA...apnepan ka sailaab hai ye...

by @kaash on February 24, 2009, 02:26:48 PM
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apnepan ka sailaab hai ye
har vaqt sabhi ke lie khaas hai ye
iske daman me hamesha sukoon hai
sabhi par roshni lutaye aisa mehtaab hai ye


isme sachhe ehsaas palte hain
isse sabhi apnepan se kaam lete hain
iske dil me sabhi ke lie izzat hai
yahan sab ek doosre se seekha karte hain


 
kitni pawan iski saba me khushbu hai
kavita shayri ikhlaaq yahan har su hai
zindagi me gham to sabhi ke hain magar
sabhi ke kalam ko qaraar deti iski rooh hai


jo likhe use bhi jo na likhe use bhi dosti milti hai
aur jo sirf padhe uske dil ko bhi isse thhandak milti hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2009, 02:28:27 PM »
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Waah...Bohot hi khoobsurat...Bohot achcha likha hi Kaash Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2009, 02:32:22 PM »
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nice words... but yo could be better, agar yahaan sub ek dusre se ladrna band kardaen tho... waise tho ye milan kar wanay waalee sight hai, kisi ko sukoon se, kisi ko dost se, kisi ko muhabbat se...
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2009, 02:42:59 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 02:41:33 PM

shukriya bhai...thanks u liked it...aur bahot acha aur
sahi likha hai aapne ye jagah sabhi ko sukoon deti hai..



yun to zindagi me dost bhi apas me ladte jhagate hain
par sachhe dost kabhi dil se khafa nahi hote hain
sabhi ke paas gham hain,zindagi bhi chaar din ki hai
ek duje ki rachnaaon ko padhke hi ashq banta shabnam hai




kya baat hai!!! Allah subko aap k jaisee soch dey... Ameen!

aur bhai nahi, bahen kahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2009, 03:26:39 PM »
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  Applause Well done, @kaash ji!
I also feel that a strange fraternity is growing, courtesy 'yoindia', and, this is a welcome sign in this world of divisive forces, which are bent upon destroying the uniting fabric of human faith and mutual understanding!
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 04:17:02 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 04:04:09 PM

shukriya...thanks Abd ji..bahut hi sahi likha aapne..

everyone is stranger in himself
everyone makes a friend who earlier was a stranger to himself
Strangers are the friends we have not met yet..

har shakhs ka jahan me saya hota hai
par har shaks apne saye ka bhi to saya hota hai
duaen aisi raunaken hain jo bina mile hi asar karti hain
ye un jagahon me hai jahan begaanepan ka nahi thikana hota hai

Your thoughts are positive! Go ahead and discover the lost horizons of human relationships, towards creating a better life around the globe!
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 04:23:30 PM »
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Really a beautiful thought @kash..
jhagde sab gharon me hote hia, bas wo apne upar hai ke hamare liye jhagde important hai ya relation. Yoindia is a virtual family. Its our responsibility to keep its prestige and let the spirit of YOINDIA grow and grow always without any personal grievances affecting "YOINDIA FAMILY"
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2009, 04:31:51 PM »
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Thanks Akash... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2009, 04:36:32 PM »
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okkk Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2009, 04:40:27 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 02:26:48 PM



apnepan ka sailaab hai ye
har vaqt sabhi ke lie khaas hai ye
iske daman me hamesha sukoon hai
sabhi par roshni lutaye aisa mehtaab hai ye


isme sachhe ehsaas palte hain
isse sabhi apnepan se kaam lete hain
iske dil me sabhi ke lie izzat hai
yahan sab ek doosre se seekha karte hain


 
kitni pawan iski saba me khushbu hai
kavita shayri ikhlaaq yahan har su hai
zindagi me gham to sabhi ke hain magar
sabhi ke kalam ko qaraar deti iski rooh hai


jo likhe use bhi jo na likhe use bhi dosti milti hai
aur jo sirf padhe uske dil ko bhi isse thhandak milti hai





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Waah waah kaash bohat sunder likha hai aapne .. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2009, 05:39:24 PM »
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Waaah wah kaash ji.. Kamal ka likha hai aapne  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 05:23:25 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 04:27:45 PM
thanks Abd ji....thank u so much...

You're welcome! May be you're like my son! I'm happy!
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 05:49:20 AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai.. bahoot khoob.
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2009, 06:32:47 AM »
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Well said Kaash ji... lyk Huzena sis said... V should not give any un necessary comments which ll efect anybody persnaly....as it ll inturn effect the YOINDIA family. YOINDIA is a heaven of poetry. v all r here to learn n enjoy d new colors of lyf..... I just wish people ll understand it thru ur Poetry Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2009, 09:18:17 AM »
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Kaash ji bohot acha likha hai Usual Smile
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