Yu lagta hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on April 19, 2011, 06:15:53 AM
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Yu lagta hai jaise terre dil ki awaz bulati hai,
terri har bekrari har tadap mujhe batati hai,

har lafz mujhe terre kareeb le aata hai,
ye dhun terri madhoshi ka ehsas dilati hai,

dard bhi hota hai aur tadpan bhi hoti hai,
mujhpe terri har baat kuch aesa asar dikhati hai,

haal merra kaafi bechain hi rehta hai,
terri yad mujhe pal pal rulati hai,

sulgta hai merra har din terre bin,
neend bhi mujjhe ab kam hi aati hai,

besudh hi kabhi rute badalne lagti hai,
mausamo ki shokhi bhi nayi hasarate jagati hai,

yu lagta hai jaise terre dil ki awaz bulati hai,
terri har bekrari har tadap mujhe batati hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 06:59:41 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 19, 2011, 06:15:53 AM


Yu lagta hai jaise terre dil ki awaz bulati hai,
terri har bekrari har tadap mujhe batati hai,

har lafz mujhe terre kareeb le aata hai,
ye dhun terri madhoshi ka ehsas dilati hai,

dard bhi hota hai aur tadpan bhi hoti hai hai,
mujhpe terri har baat kuch aesa asar dikhati hai,

haal merra kaafi bechain hi rehta hai,
terri yad mujhe pal pal rulati hai,

sulgta hai merra har din terre bin,
neend bhi mujjhe ab kam hi aati hai,

besudh hi kabhi rute badalne lagti hai,
mausamo ki shokhi bhi nayi hasarate jagati hai,

yu lagta hai jaise terre dil ki awaz bulati hai,
terri har bekrari har tadap mujhe batati hai.........


gud one BBL
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 07:02:42 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 19, 2011, 06:59:41 AM
gud one BBL

Thnx khamosh ji..
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2011, 07:25:41 AM »
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Bahut shukriya shihabji..
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2011, 07:56:28 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji...

F.b Te Padheya Si unn Yoindia Te Vi Padh leya tongue3

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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 08:24:52 AM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji,lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 09:58:00 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 20, 2011, 07:56:28 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji...

F.b Te Padheya Si unn Yoindia Te Vi Padh leya tongue3

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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 09:58:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji,lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

Bahut shukriya madhu ji..
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 11:26:28 AM »
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Bahaut khoob di..!
Khush rahiye!
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 20, 2011, 11:26:28 AM
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Bahaut khoob di..!
Khush rahiye!

Shukriya rahim..
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2011, 10:49:23 AM »
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GEET JI EKDUM MAST ....VERY GOOD.
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GEET JI EKDUM MAST ....VERY GOOD.
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2011, 11:32:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob geet ji... bahut hi pyaara likha hai....!!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 29, 2011, 11:32:28 PM
Bahut bahut khoob geet ji... bahut hi pyaara likha hai....!!!

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Bahut shukriya kapil ji...
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