zajbaat na tha,

by jeet jainam on July 26, 2014, 06:52:53 PM
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mayoos they hum akser koi sath na tha,
uske dil me mere liye koi zajbaat na tha,

pachatye bohut hum apni hi galti ke kaaran,
mohhobat ka jo humne usey izhaar kiya na tha,

ek pal mein woh chale gaye humse dur is kader,
may taras gaya ke jee bhar deedar kiya na tha,

hum hi pagal they jo sochte rah woh mere hai,
asal mein woh kisi or ka pyaar tha mera na tha,



 
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2014, 11:25:52 PM »
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 Applause :clap:bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2014, 05:33:33 AM »
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shukriya saini sir ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2014, 01:26:04 PM »
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mayoos they hum akser koi sath na tha,
uske dil me mere liye koi jazba na tha, if you write jazbaat then you will have to write the and not tha and before can't be used koi because jazbaat is plural

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bohut hum apni hi galti ke kaaran,
mohhobat ka jo humne usey izhaar kiya na tha,

ek pal mein woh chale gaye humse dur is kader,
may taras gaya ke jee bhar deedar kiya na tha,

hum hi pagal they jo sochte rahe woh mere hain,
asal mein woh kisi or ka pyaar tha mera na tha,



 

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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2014, 04:38:31 PM »
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shukriya marhoom ji mene to dhiyaan hi nhi diya tha apni galti per,apne bata thanku so much
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2014, 09:10:10 PM »
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