Zakham dil ke

by saahill on July 11, 2015, 04:01:25 AM
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Kahan ho tum ke mera dil aaj bhi tumein yaad karta hai
        yahan bhi raho khush raho yehi faryaad karta hai

zakham dil ki deewaron se nazar aane lage hain mere
        pal pal dard e judaai ka ab itna tadpaaya karta hai.

naam labhon se kabhi.bhi hat ta hi nahin yeh sach hai
         ho zikar mohabbat ka to zubaan par aa jaya karta hai

kash aisa ho ke tum aao meri zindagi mein phir se
          khayaal bas yehi din raat sataaya karta hai.

hota jo bas mein to judha hone ma deta khud se tumko
          likha kismat mein ho jo usko kaun mitaaya karta hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2015, 04:58:20 AM »
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Kahan ho tum ke mera dil aaj bhi tumein yaad karta hai
        yahan bhi raho khush raho yehi faryaad karta hai

zakham dil ki deewaron se nazar aane lage hain mere
        pal pal dard e judaai ka ab itna tadpaaya karta hai.

naam labhon se kabhi.bhi hat ta hi nahin yeh sach hai
         ho zikar mohabbat ka to zubaan par aa jaya karta hai

kash aisa ho ke tum aao meri zindagi mein phir se
          khayaal bas yehi din raat sataaya karta hai.

hota jo bas mein to judha hone ma deta khud se tumko
          likha kismat mein ho jo usko kaun mitaaya karta hai


Achchha hai ....likhte rahen .... shubhkaamnaayen ..... Raqeeb
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2015, 06:55:51 AM »
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खूब कहा.....कुछ सुझाव है.....गौर कीजियेगा....

Kahan ho tum ke mera dil aaj bhi tumein yaad karta hai
        yahan bhi raho khush raho yehi faryaad karta hai
jahan bhi raho khush raho yehi faryaad karta hai

zakham dil ki deewaron se nazar aane lage hain mere
        pal pal dard e judaai ka ab itna tadpaaya karta hai.
pal pal dard  judaai ka or dard e judaai ab itna tadpaaya karta hai.


hota jo bas mein to judha hone ma deta khud se tumko
hota jo bas mein to judha hone na deta khud se tumko
          likha kismat mein ho jo usko kaun mitaaya karta hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2015, 10:16:21 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2015, 05:31:12 PM »
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Thx amit ji and thx for correction
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2015, 10:45:16 PM »
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Kahan ho tum ke mera dil aaj bhi tumein yaad karta hai
        yahan bhi raho khush raho yehi faryaad karta hai

zakham dil ki deewaron se nazar aane lage hain mere
        pal pal dard e judaai ka ab itna tadpaaya karta hai.

naam labhon se kabhi.bhi hat ta hi nahin yeh sach hai
         ho zikar mohabbat ka to zubaan par aa jaya karta hai

kash aisa ho ke tum aao meri zindagi mein phir se
          khayaal bas yehi din raat sataaya karta hai.

hota jo bas mein to judha hone ma deta khud se tumko
          likha kismat mein ho jo usko kaun mitaaya karta hai
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Thx saini sir.
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