Zakhmon Ke Nishan Na gaye

by riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 05:19:19 PM
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             GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye                (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye

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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 06:10:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Riyaz ji...!!! Bahut pyari ghazal hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 06:16:43 PM »
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Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Kapil ji. Pasand farmane ke liye aapka mashkoor hun.
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 06:10:15 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai Riyaz ji...!!! Bahut pyari ghazal hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 07:23:28 PM »
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naaaaaaaaaaaaaaice composition riyaz sb Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 08:05:16 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 05:19:19 PM
             GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye                (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye

Riyaz Ashna

Bahut khoob!! Riyaz Sahab, Wah!! Wah!! behtareen ghazal, aaghaz se anjaam tak purkashish...khumar-e-ishq bhi aur jadeed kaifiyat bhi...

Tujhko ham dhoondne kahan-kahan na gaye,
Dashto-sahra to gaye kooye-qualba.n na gaye.
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 08:32:15 PM »
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bhoot khoob janab ..kya khoob kaha
Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 05:19:19 PM
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Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2010, 08:55:23 PM »
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Wah Riyaz bhai bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne,Pandey ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha,lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2010, 10:28:15 PM »
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Vry vll said bhut hi acha likha hai Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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             GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye                (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2010, 05:48:57 AM »
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Aapko dili shukriya Khamosh ji. Zarranawazi hai aapki ke meri ye koshish aapko pasand aai.
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on March 31, 2010, 07:23:28 PM
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaice composition riyaz sb Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2010, 09:35:45 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achche Riyaz Bhai,.

Bohat Dino Baad Kuch Achcha Pardhne Ko Milaa,.

Nice Work


Ab Ke Kuch Yun In Zakhmon Se Dosti Ki Hai Maine,.
Ke Zakhm Na Bhi Mile, To Puraane Zakhmo Ko Hare Rakhte Hain,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Mein Jab Ghar Jalaa Liya Apna,.
Us Din Se Hum  Apni Nigaahon Mein Andhere Rakhte Hain,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2010, 10:17:29 AM »
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Pandey ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapko meri ye koshish pasand aai. Aapne jo hausla afzaai ki uska bhi shukriya.
Quote from: drpandey on March 31, 2010, 08:05:16 PM
Bahut khoob!! Riyaz Sahab, Wah!! Wah!! behtareen ghazal, aaghaz se anjaam tak purkashish...khumar-e-ishq bhi aur jadeed kaifiyat bhi...

Tujhko ham dhoondne kahan-kahan na gaye,
Dashto-sahra to gaye kooye-qualba.n na gaye.
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2010, 11:09:16 AM »
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Ghouri Sb. aapne meri ghazal ko pasand farmaya, aapka bahut bahut shukriya.
Quote from: nazar ghouri on March 31, 2010, 08:32:15 PM
bhoot khoob janab ..kya khoob kaha
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Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2010, 03:01:53 PM »
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Madhu didi aapka bahut bahut dil se shukria.
Quote from: madhuwesh on March 31, 2010, 08:55:23 PM
Wah Riyaz bhai bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne,Pandey ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha,lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2010, 06:59:01 PM »
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Tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji ke aapko meri ye koshish achhi lagi.
Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 10:28:15 PM
Vry vll said bhut hi acha likha hai Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2010, 06:41:13 AM »
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Aapka behad shukriya Azeem bhai. Aapne meri ye ghazal pasand ki aapki zarranawazi hai.
Quote from: Azeem on April 01, 2010, 09:35:45 AM
Mashallah Bohat Achche Riyaz Bhai,.
Bohat Dino Baad Kuch Achcha Pardhne Ko Milaa,.
Nice Work

Ab Ke Kuch Yun In Zakhmon Se Dosti Ki Hai Maine,.
Ke Zakhm Na Bhi Mile, To Puraane Zakhmo Ko Hare Rakhte Hain,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Mein Jab Ghar Jalaa Liya Apna,.
Us Din Se Hum  Apni Nigaahon Mein Andhere Rakhte Hain,.

-Azeem-
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