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«Reply #15 on: April 02, 2010, 11:32:28 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai 
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«Reply #16 on: April 02, 2010, 08:51:40 PM » |
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U r vry WC ji Tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji ke aapko meri ye koshish achhi lagi.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: April 02, 2010, 08:58:02 PM » |
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GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye
Riyaz Ashna
Bahut umda ghazal hai Riyaz Ji |
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«Reply #19 on: April 03, 2010, 04:11:52 AM » |
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ARFAN HAIDER
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«Reply #20 on: April 03, 2010, 07:34:39 AM » |
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 MERE HATHON SE US KA HATH FAQT IS LIYE CHOOTA 'dost' wo anmol itna tha k main us ki qeemat ada na kar saka.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #21 on: April 03, 2010, 08:29:37 AM » |
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Neel ji thanks again. I wish you for all happiness.U r vry WC ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #22 on: April 03, 2010, 05:55:08 PM » |
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Aapka behad shukriya Rajesh ji. Aapki zarranawazi hai ke aapne ye ghazal pasand farmai. Bahut umda ghazal hai Riyaz Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #23 on: April 04, 2010, 03:06:06 AM » |
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Wah Irfan ji bahut achha sher aapne post kiya hai. Thanks. MERE HATHON SE US KA HATH FAQT IS LIYE CHOOTA 'dost' wo anmol itna tha k main us ki qeemat ada na kar saka.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #24 on: April 05, 2010, 06:37:25 AM » |
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Bahut bahaut shukriya Kaash Ji ke aapko meri ye koshish pasand aai. Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.bahut khoob,badhia likha hai Riyaaz ji
ek sher arz kar rahe hain daad ke taur par
zakhmon ki inayat hai aisi zakhm bhi inayat hain
khushi ke maayne insaan ko zakhm kha ke hi milte hain
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«Reply #25 on: April 05, 2010, 12:46:17 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu didi.
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #26 on: April 05, 2010, 12:52:57 PM » |
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wah wah bahut khoob.Riyaz ji.  GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye
Riyaz Ashna
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riyaz106
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«Reply #27 on: April 06, 2010, 04:23:31 AM » |
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Aapka behad shukria Suresh ji ke aapko ghazal pasand aai.
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Tasleem ahmad Tasleem
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«Reply #28 on: April 06, 2010, 05:14:29 AM » |
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riyaz sahab behad khoobsoorat likha he aapne wah wah
isi zameen ka ek matla arz he
Wo mayoos-e-tamnna kyon na su-e-aasman dekhe
jo manzil ba manzil apni mehnat ray-e-gaan dekhe
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«Reply #29 on: April 14, 2010, 11:14:09 AM » |
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GHAZAL
Wo jagah kaun si jahan na gaye
Hum tujhe dhoondne kahan na gaye
Kar ke laalach yun phans gaye panchhi
Phir kabhi soo-e-aasman na gaye (soo-e-aasman=aasman ki taraf)
Zakhm to bhar gaye mere lekin
Aaj tak zakhmon ke nishaan na gaye
Khwab mein bhi na paayenge manzil
Leke rehbar jo kaarwan na gaye
Riyaz Ashna
Bohot khoobsurat....Bohot khoob Riyaz Ji |
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