zindagi, bottle ? (by vb)

by vb on September 30, 2011, 05:35:44 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 990 times)
vb
Guest
Reply with quote


Dard teri haseen yaadon say behel jaatay hain
Shaam hotay he kahin door nikal jaatay hain
Zindagi bhe isi bottle ka naam ho jaisay
Larkharaatay hen, kabhi gir k sambhal jaatay hen

*---------------*
Logged
sarfira
Guest
«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2011, 06:13:27 PM »
Reply with quote
kya gazabb ki shayri ki hai aapne sirji--
bilkul haqeeqat


Dard teri haseen yaadon say behel jaatay hain
Shaam hotay he kahin door nikal jaatay hain
Zindagi bhe isi bottle ka naam ho jaisay
Larkharaatay hen, kabhi gir k sambhal jaatay hen

*---------------*

Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2011, 08:06:57 AM »
Reply with quote


Dard teri haseen yaadon say behel jaatay hain
Shaam hotay he kahin door nikal jaatay hain
Zindagi bhe isi bottle ka naam ho jaisay
Larkharaatay hen, kabhi gir k sambhal jaatay hen

*---------------*


sheshe ki bottle gir ke aksar toote bhi jaati hai
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2011, 11:25:33 AM »
Reply with quote
VB Jee Aadaab

Janab kia kahne bahut khoob.. Aisa ahsaas pesh kiya
hai aapne ke jaise humare bare meiN likha ho..

Bahut khoob janab.. bahut umdaa daad daad daad..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.



Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2011, 09:53:24 AM »
Reply with quote
sarfira jee! buhat shukriya...
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2011, 09:55:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Sheba jee! sahi kaha aap ne... aap ki baat kuchh aagay barhain tu... peenay walay bhe kabhi pi kar aisay girtay hen k phir kabhi nahi uthetay... lekin donon sooraton men.. bottle aur peenay walay ka naataa toot he jaata hay......
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2011, 09:56:24 AM »
Reply with quote
ParwaaZ jee! buhat shukriya pasand karnay ka...
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2011, 09:58:18 AM »
Reply with quote
Sheba jee! sahi kaha aap ne... aap ki baat kuchh aagay barhain tu... peenay walay bhe kabhi pi kar aisay girtay hen k phir kabhi nahi uthetay... lekin donon sooraton men.. bottle aur peenay walay ka naataa toot he jaata hay......


 ji sahi hai.!sawaal ye hai ki phir kyon pee jaaye aur bottle todi jaaye...!!


rishta toadne ka nahin jodne ka bane to maza aaye hai naa...!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
vb
Guest
«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2011, 10:07:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Sheba jee! ab sawal peenay ya na peenay ka nahi.... ab tu bottle khali ho chuki hay... aur khali bottle akser tore he di jaati hay....
ab tu tamsha dekhna hay... k peenay wala khud bottle tore deta hay, larkhara kar sambhalta hay, ....gir kar utheta hay.... ya....... ya bus gir he jaata hay...
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:37:53 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.116 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer