~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

dead heart

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Kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...

Zindagi ek khubsoorat dokha hai,
Jannat pane ka ek awal moka hai…

Jab phenkta hai Allah kamyabi ka full toss,
Toh lagta khushion ka choka hai…

Jab pata hai mushkilon ka bouncer musafir,
Toh insaan apne naseeb ko khoob kosta hai…

Mara jaye ek dinn dange ya blast main ‘Khamosh’,
Kya issi dinn kay liye apne ap ko tu palta hai…

Nafraton se bhari duniya main kya jeena yaaron,
Wakei dil kehta hai ‘zindagi ek haseen sa dokha hai…’

~Rahim~


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Ghulam Haider

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2010, 10:58:13 PM »

Likhte rahiye Rahim bhai, bohot achchhi koshish ki hai aap ne.
Apna khayaal rakheN
Haider


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KOYAL46

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2010, 10:04:22 AM »

Wah kitna Khoobsurat Dhokha hai Zindagi.....Rahim-bhai....? Applause

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 07, 2010, 04:28:21 PM

Kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...

Zindagi ek khubsoorat dokha hai,
Jannat pane ka ek awal moka hai…

Jab phenkta hai Allah kamyabi ka full toss,
Toh lagta khushion ka choka hai…

Jab pata hai mushkilon ka bouncer musafir,
Toh insaan Allah ko khoob kosta hai…

Mara jaye ek dinn dange ya blast main ‘Khamosh’,
Kya issi dinn kay liye apne ap ko tu palta hai…

Nafraton se bhari duniya main kya jeena yaaron,
Wakei dil kehta hai ‘zindagi ek haseen sa dokha hai…’

~Rahim~


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dead heart

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2010, 10:35:46 AM »

Quote from: Ghulam Haider on July 07, 2010, 10:58:13 PM

Likhte rahiye Rahim bhai, bohot achchhi koshish ki hai aap ne.
Apna khayaal rakheN
Haider

shukriya..Likte rahunga mager shayad agey se yahan share nahin karunga...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 08, 2010, 10:04:22 AM

Wah kitna Khoobsurat Dhokha hai Zindagi.....Rahim-bhai....? Applause

Shukriya di..haan itna khubsoorat dokha hai zindagi...


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Ghulam Haider

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2010, 10:42:03 AM »

Quote from: .adeeb on July 08, 2010, 09:04:25 AM

Janab apne waqai bilkul hi alag dhang se likha hai aur aisa likha ke padhkar afsos hua. Allah ko kosne (NA UZU BILLA HI MIN ZALIK) se apka kya matlab hai aur kosna kise kahte hain. Zara wazahat kar de to mehrbani hogi. Takleef aane log Allah se shikayaten karte hain ye to suna tha lekin kosna pahli bar apse suna.

Har insaan ki apni salaahiyyat hoti hai. Apni baat kehne ka tareeqa hota hai. Agar nazar musbat ho to baat ziyzdatar saahib e kalaam ke hi haq meN jaati hai, lekin agar tanqeedi-manfi- ho to phir zara 2 si baat samjhne meN mushkil hoti hai. Kisi par tanqeed karne se pehle us ks ksalaam ke mea'yaar ko samajh lena achha hota hai. Us se ya andaza ho jata hai ke kalaam par kis tarah ka comment diya jana chahiye. Aur kabhi 2 saahib e kalaam ko haosla afzaayi ki zuroorat hoti hai. Sab ke saath aik jaisi fikr rakhna durust nahiN. Is se kabhi 2 kisi ki dil shikani ho jaati hai. MaiN to yehi chahoNga ke Guests ki baatoN ka rahim bhai bura na maaneNge aur koi is se bhi behtar kalaam pesh karke dikhayeNge. Jis se hameN ye pata chalega ke waaqayi woh naa raaz nahiN haiN. Sab khush raheiye
Haider


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qazgani

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2010, 10:58:12 AM »

boht hi khoob


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dead heart

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2010, 12:53:38 PM »

Shukriya Haider jee...shayad agey se share nahin kar paunga...InshAllah dekhenge...

Shukriya Qazgani jee


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Aghaaz

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2010, 01:14:56 PM »

kuch logo ki aadat hoti hai unhe koi bhi cheez me buraai nikaalna rehta hai. koi kya likh raha hai usse matlab nahi. aajayenge uski kamiyaa nikaalne. bahut achcha likha hai aapne Rahim ji. aur sahi muh tod jawab diya hai. Sach kaha aapne kisi ko ye haq nahi hai ki wo aake aapko batayein ki aapko kya likhna chahiye kya nahi. Aap khud apni marzi ke maalik hain.

Aur inki badtameezi ke liye mai sabhi guests ki taraf se maafi maangta hoon. Kuch aise badtameez guests ke kaaran sabhi guests badnaam hote hain. Maaf kar dijiyega Rahim ji.

bahut achcha likhte hain aap. Umid hai aapka likha hume padhne ka mauka milta rahega. Please post karte rahiyega.


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brokenbyluv

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2010, 03:31:34 PM »

Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji..alag tarike se zindgi ka sach pesh kiya hai apne...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2010, 03:38:03 PM »

Mujhe ye dekhkar bahut bura laga ki yahan koi bhi kisi ki kabiliyat pe ungli uthaye chahe vo guests ho ya members yahan har kism k jazbaat pe shayari likhne ka haq hai basharte members ki post mein kuch vulgure ya abusive naa ho...kisi bhi insan ko koi haq nhi hai ki vo dusre shakhs ki intention jane bina uske kaam ko kose...jaisa ki adeeb ne being a guests yahan rahiim ji ki post mein likha hai agar adeeb chahte tou apni baat ko sahi dhang se bhi likh sakte the per khair logo ka apna apna nazariya hota hai..main rahiim ji se itna kahungi ki unhone apni galti sudhar di hai aur unhe guests ki baato ka bura manna ki koi zarurat nhi hai...being a monitor maine vo sab post yahan se delete kar di hai aur chahungi ki iss baat ko ab yahiin khatam kar de..Main sabhi guest se bhi request karti hu ki vo iss kism k comments na post kre per phir bhi aage kabhi koi guests iss tarah k comments kare tou plzz members unhe nazarandaz kar de...

Rahiim ji keep posting u doing great work...

YOINDIA MONITOR...

Thnx...


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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2010, 04:18:14 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!!!

Aapne Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aur Ek Baat Kehna Chahunga Aapse..

Mirza Galib saheb Ne Arz Kiya Tha...

"Galib" Bura Naa Maan Vayaaz Bura Kahe,
Aisa Bhi koi Hai Jo Sirf Acha Kahe..."


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dead heart

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2010, 06:20:45 PM »

Quote from: Aghaaz on July 08, 2010, 01:14:56 PM

Aghaaz jee shukriya teh dil se..waqt diya aur sahi andaaz main samjha apne..


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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2010, 06:21:54 PM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 08, 2010, 03:31:34 PM

Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji..alag tarike se zindgi ka sach pesh kiya hai apne...

Shukriya Geet di..

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 08, 2010, 03:38:03 PM

Shukriya again saath ka...


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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2010, 06:22:58 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 08, 2010, 04:18:14 PM

Shukriya Mere Dost..bahaut kuch kehgaye aap...


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tamanna.pt

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Re: ~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2010, 02:03:32 AM »

Nice n different one Rahim ji. Aur Plz likhte rahein.


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