Zindagi ka jo haq hai ada mai karu

by suman59 on November 28, 2012, 03:57:36 AM
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Zindagi ka jo haq hai ada mai karu
Har kisi ke liye hii dua mai karu

Ye andhera mitane, diya mai banu
Kaam aksar hii aise khuda mai karu

Kaam ho jaye maksad hamara yahi
Tu agar kar na paye bata mai karu

Bhooka-pyasa na hove padosii mera
Roj khane se pehle pata mai karu

Uskii fithrat mujhe ab pata chal gayii
Vo kare hai jafa to wafa mai karu

Jo yahan gir pade, mai utau unhe
Aadmi hu agar yeh sada mai karu

Pyar karna hamesha lage hai saja
Kintu yehii fir khata mai karu




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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2012, 04:45:21 AM »
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Kyaa baat hai Aunty jee. Kyaa khoob shayaarii ki hai.
Saare sher dil ko chu gaye.
Maza aa gayaa.
++1 for u my dear Aunty Jee
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2012, 05:33:11 AM »
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wah kya baat hai suman ji ...imotional kar diya aapne ,,,kya khoob jazbaat piroye hain dil karta hai ki lakho daad pesh-e-khidmat karoon ...bahut hi sunder kalam raha ,,,likhte rahein aur roshni kayam rakhen ,,shukriya
 
Quote from: suman59 on November 28, 2012, 03:57:36 AM
Zindagi ka jo haq hai ada mai karu
Har kisi ke liye hii dua mai karu

Ye andhera mitane, diya mai banu
Kaam aksar hii aise khuda mai karu

Kaam ho jaye maksad hamara yahi
Tu agar kar na paye bata mai karu

Bhooka-pyasa na hove padosii mera
Roj khane se pehle pata mai karu

Uskii fithrat mujhe ab pata chal gayii
Vo kare hai jafa to wafa mai karu

Jo yahan gir pade, mai utau unhe
Aadmi hu agar yeh sada mai karu

Pyar karna hamesha lage hai saja
Kintu yehii fir khata mai karu





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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2012, 05:53:15 AM »
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Beautiful,suman ji. bahut achhe jazbaat hain,
bahut  khuburat  adayegi  hai  .dheron  daad.
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2012, 06:12:14 AM »
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Bhooka-pyasa na hove padosii mera
Roj khane se pehle pata mai karu

very very touching..
poori ghazal hi..apne aap me anokhi hai.
fantastic Applause

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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2012, 07:24:56 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on November 28, 2012, 03:57:36 AM
Zindagi ka jo haq hai ada mai karu
Har kisi ke liye hii dua mai karu

Ye andhera mitane, diya mai banu
Kaam aksar hii aise khuda mai karu

Kaam ho jaye maksad hamara yahi
Tu agar kar na paye bata mai karu

Bhooka-pyasa na hove padosii mera
Roj khane se pehle pata mai karu

Uskii fithrat mujhe ab pata chal gayii
Vo kare hai jafa to wafa mai karu

Jo yahan gir pade, mai utau unhe
Aadmi hu agar yeh sada mai karu

Pyar karna hamesha lage hai saja
Kintu yehii fir khata mai karu






zabardast suman ji Applause ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2012, 07:45:41 AM »
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wah bahut ahche, kaash ki har insaan ki fitrat aisi hi ho jaaye, kaam jo gar tujhse na ho paaye, bata main karuN...  bahut hi umda suman ji, maza aaya padh kar, bas yuNHi apni qalam ki rangeeniyaan bikherti rahiye... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2012, 08:19:40 AM »
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wah wah wah
wah wah wah wah wah wah
wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah
kya khoob soch aap ki.....Usual Smile
sach dil khus hogaya aap ki soch se, chalo koi toh ye ehsaas rakhta hai...aap ke liye dil se ek rau, please kabool karein....
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2012, 10:18:17 AM »
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wah lajavab
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2012, 10:51:51 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah suman jee bahut khoo likha hai aapne hamari taraf se ek chota sa nazrana rau qubool kijiye
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2012, 10:54:09 AM »
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Fantastic Suman ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Suman ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2012, 06:18:34 AM »
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Just superb suman ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2012, 07:22:51 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 28, 2012, 04:45:21 AM
Kyaa baat hai Aunty jee. Kyaa khoob shayaarii ki hai.
Saare sher dil ko chu gaye.
Maza aa gayaa.
++1 for u my dear Aunty Jee

thank you beta aur aapka ++ ka bi.
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«Reply #14 on: November 29, 2012, 07:23:21 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 28, 2012, 05:33:11 AM
wah kya baat hai suman ji ...imotional kar diya aapne ,,,kya khoob jazbaat piroye hain dil karta hai ki lakho daad pesh-e-khidmat karoon ...bahut hi sunder kalam raha ,,,likhte rahein aur roshni kayam rakhen ,,shukriya
 

aapka bahut bahut shukriya jee
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