ZINDAGI-O-BANDAGI (Ghazal)... "MohaN"

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ZINDAGI-O-BANDAGI

Sikhaa de jo nafrat bhi aadmi ko
Humaari bandagi aisi bandagi ko

Kis tarikii mein kho chalaa hoon
Nigaahen doondti hain roshni ko

Yeh kaisii bandagi abb hai aajkal
Ke zindagi doodti hai bekhudi ko

Dil hai meraa ke lagtaa hee nahin
Naa chain hai dil ko naa dilagi ko

Khuda kahan hai koi bataa de sahi
Sunaa hai detaa hai rozi aadmi ko

Bekaari iss qadar bharhh chali hai
Majaal miley pet bhar roti kisii ko

Dosti naa rahi dushmani huee hai
Khuda raa miley koi rahhbarhi ko

MohaN rahbhar bhi to ho rahbhar
Khuda saa to naa mile koi kisii ko

Surindar. N             "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2016, 04:50:34 AM »
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Bahot hi khubsurat surindarji
Sahi kaha hai aapne ....
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2016, 04:57:25 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mohan sir ghazal post ki hai aaj.. Waah bahut khoob zazbaat...
Bas aap pahla matla likhna bhool gaye...  Pahle sher me dono misron me kafiya hota hai...  Baaki aapne bahut khoob likha hai...

Dhero daad mubaarakbaad... Sir....  RAU pending raha...  Next time matla bhi mujhe kuch sikhaane wala hona chahiye....
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2016, 06:22:13 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2016, 06:26:09 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on June 28, 2016, 04:45:14 AM
ZINDAGI-O-BANDAGI

itnaa shaffaf naa kar zindagi ko...,
le  chal saath  kuch  gandagi ko...,


Sikhaa de jo nafrat bhi bashar ko
Humaari bandagi aisi bandagi ko

Kis tarikii mein kho chalaa hoon
Nigaahen doondti hain roshni ko

Yeh kaisii bandagi abb hai aajkal
Ke zindagi doodti hai bekhudi ko

Dil hai meraa ke lagtaa hee nahin
  naa chain dil ko naa dillagi ko
Abb dil kee lagi bhi bani hai dilagi  ye misra fit nahin hotaa yahaan

Khuda kahan hai koi bataa de sahi
Sunaa hai detaa hai rozi aadmi ko

Bekaari iss qadar bharhh chali hai
Majaal miley pet bhar roti kisii ko

Dosti naa rahi dushmani huee hai
Khuda raa miley koi rahhbarhi ko

MohaN rahbhar bhi to ho rahbhar
Khuda saa to naa mile koi kisii ko

Surindar. N             "MohaN"



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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2016, 08:15:28 AM »
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Kya baat hai, bahot khoob, waaaah waaaah aur waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2016, 01:10:45 PM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on June 28, 2016, 04:50:34 AM
Bahot hi khubsurat surindarji
Sahi kaha hai aapne ....
bahut shukria Shikha Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2016, 02:25:03 AM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on June 28, 2016, 04:50:34 AM
Bahot hi khubsurat surindarji
Sahi kaha hai aapne ....
bahut shukria Shikhaa Jee.
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2016, 04:59:38 AM »
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bahut bahut khuub Surindar ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2016, 07:49:23 PM »
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Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on June 28, 2016, 04:57:25 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mohan sir ghazal post ki hai aaj.. Waah bahut khoob zazbaat...
Bas aap pahla matla likhna bhool gaye...  Pahle sher me dono misron me kafiya hota hai...  Baaki aapne bahut khoob likha hai...

Dhero daad mubaarakbaad... Sir....  RAU pending raha...  Next time matla bhi mujhe kuch sikhaane wala hona chahiye....
bahut bahut shukria Arjun Jee daad aur pending Rau ke liye.
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2016, 07:33:30 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on June 28, 2016, 04:45:14 AM
ZINDAGI-O-BANDAGI

Sikhaa de jo nafrat bhi aadmi ko
Humaari bandagi aisi bandagi ko

main nahin samjhi iss sher kaa matlab naaf karnaa icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch!


Kis tarikii mein kho chalaa hoon
Nigaahen doondti hain roshni ko

wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Yeh kaisii bandagi abb hai aajkal
Ke zindagi doodti hai bekhudi ko

iss sher kaa koi matlab hai kyaa meri samjh se pare hai ji icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch!

Dil hai meraa ke lagtaa hee nahin
Naa chain hai dil ko naa dilagi ko

good icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Khuda kahan hai koi bataa de sahi
Sunaa hai detaa hai rozi aadmi ko

ye to yaqeen ki baat hai .hawaa hai aap mehsoos karte ho per dekh nahin sakte  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Bekaari iss qadar bharhh chali hai
Majaal miley pet bhar roti kisii ko

afsos hai ji sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5!

Dosti naa rahi dushmani huee hai
Khuda raa miley koi rahhbarhi ko

sahi hai  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

MohaN rahbhar bhi to ho rahbhar
Khuda saa to naa mile koi kisii ko

bahut khoob bahut acha icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Surindar. N             "MohaN"
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2016, 04:08:33 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on June 28, 2016, 06:22:13 AM
bahut khoob
bahut shukria Prashad Jee.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 28, 2016, 06:26:09 AM

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Bahut bahut shukria Adil Sahib, Aap ke mashware ke liye aur shukria. Main na sab theek kar diyaa hai.
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 28, 2016, 08:15:28 AM
Kya baat hai, bahot khoob, waaaah waaaah aur waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
                hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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