अकड़ पल भर की ------ सृष्टिराज चिंतक

by srishti raj chintak on December 09, 2013, 07:10:08 PM
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वो जा रहा था निडर
दीन-दुनिया से बेखबर
सीना फुलाये, बाँहें फैलाये
टाँगें चौडाये, गरदन अकडाये

ना इधर देखता था
ना उधर देखता था
बाज़ू चढ़ी थी ऊपर
ऊपर-ऊपर देखता था

राह में उसकी मामूली सा
कंकड़ आ गया
किया नजर अंदाज़ उसने, पर
गच्चा खा गया

गिरा धडाम से नीचे
सिर घूमा, दिमाग चकरा गया
साथ में डॉक्टर चल रहा था, वो
फौरन आ गया

किया मुआयना उसका और घबरा गया
कहने लगा, ये तो मर गया, पर
एक बात मैंने नही समझी
इसकी तो रीड गायब है

फिर इसमें इतनी
"अकड़ क्यों कर थी" ?


 



 
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Thanks to every one, regards.
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