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charchchit32

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अगर कुछ जीत लेते हैं बहुत कुछ हार जाते हैं

GALAT BAATON PE JO ADTE
BAHUT PACHHATAATE HAIN AKSAR
AGAR KUCHH JEET LETE HAIN
BAHUT KUCHH HAAR JAATE HAIN

- VISHAAL CHARCHHIT


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Re: अगर कुछ जीत लेते हैं बहुत कुछ हार जाते हैं

«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2016, 10:38:55 PM »

Quote from: charchchit32 on January 10, 2016, 06:14:55 PM

bahut khoob charchchit Sahib, I have changed the word aksar to red colour because I feel the use as last word in the line is inappropriate. This means sometime one may repent and sometime one may not repent. If you say Aksar bahut pachhtaate hain then the meaning becomes Zaroor hee bahut pachhtaate hain.


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charchchit32

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Re: अगर कुछ जीत लेते हैं बहुत कुछ हार जाते हैं

«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2016, 03:44:20 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on January 10, 2016, 10:38:55 PM

THANK U SO MUCH JI, 'AKSAR' WORD SE MERA MATLAB HAI KI 'KAI BAAR AISA HOTA HAI'... LEKIN 'HAMESHA NAHI'...MEANS ZARURI NAHI KI HAR CASE ME AISA HO... PAR AKSAR AISA HI DEKHA JATA HAI... THAT'S WHY I USED THE WORD 'AKSAR'