"अतृप्ति" ------सृष्टिराज चिंतक

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कैसा अजीब है ये मन
सुख की चाह करता है
मगर खाली ही रहता है
कभी ना ये भरता  है
है बेचैनी है अतृप्ति
ना जाने प्यास कैसी है
तवे पर बूंद गर्मी से
खुश्की में बदलती है
यही है जिंदगी अपनी
यही है फलसफा अपना
मिलन के बाद भी मिलने को
ये पागल दिल तड़पता है.
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2014, 11:05:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2014, 11:23:21 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2014, 12:32:09 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2014, 08:14:30 PM »
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कैसा अजीब है ये मन
सुख की चाह करता है
मगर खाली ही रहता है
कभी ना ये भरता  है
है बेचैनी है अतृप्ति
ना जाने प्यास कैसी है
तवे पर बूंद गर्मी से
खुश्की में बदलती है
यही है जिंदगी अपनी
यही है फलसफा अपना
मिलन के बाद भी मिलने को
ये पागल दिल तड़पता है.



So nice.
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2014, 11:00:54 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai. Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2014, 07:57:33 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2014, 12:39:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
So many thanks Jeet jainam ji
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wah wah Applause Applause
So many thanks jnyana91 ji.
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Applause Applause Applause
So many thanks Saini ji.
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So nice.
So many thanks Sagar ji.
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai. Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
So many thanks Surindarn ji.
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Applause Applause Applause
So many thanks Meet ji.
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