अपना बना लेता है वो bekarar

by bekarar on February 06, 2011, 05:26:54 AM
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तकलीफ़ों मे भी जब मुस्करा देता है वो,
मुसीबतों को जैसे हरा देता है वो,

माँ के आँसुओं का सबब पूछता है,
खुद के दर्द को भुला देता है वो,

बैचेनियाँ बढ़ती है तो पहलू बदल-कर,
मेरे सीने मे खुद को, छुपा लेता है वो,

कहानियों मे बहकर, लोरियों मे घुलकर,
पलकों मे नींद को बुला लेता है वो,
 
कृष्णा, छोटा भीम और डोरेमान को बुलाकर,
सपनो की महफ़िल सज़ा लेता है वो,

इक हसरत है के उससे ये हुनर सीखू,
कैसे हर एक को अपना बना लेता है वो
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2011, 05:34:41 AM »
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bht pyaar se prince k likhi hui ye kavita me aapka pura pyaar aur itne din uske sath gazare lamhe nazar aarahe hain sanjeev ji......
bachchon ki hasi se badi koi khushi nahin maa baap k liye...
bhagwan se dua hai prince k hothon pe ye hasi yunhi kayam rahe aur aap sabko himmat bandhati rahe......
bt pyari kavita k liye dheron badhaiyan aur usse zyada prince k saamne khudko iss tarah sambhale rakhen k liye ji.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2011, 09:04:15 AM »
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Dil se nikle huye ye shabd......dil tak pahunch gaye Sajeevji........mast poem.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Dard bhulaa kay bhi hass leta hai wo
Nat-khat Mujhe dilaasaa deta hai wo

Jis se milta hai apna bana leta hai wo
Kabhi batana kaise ye kar leta hai wo
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2011, 11:32:42 AM »
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Bahut Khub Bekrar Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2011, 04:17:25 AM »
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bahoot shukriya..kasak ji, koyal ji, bhai shihab aur rishi ji...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2011, 05:57:59 AM »
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wahhhh wahhh wahhhhh


bahut hi sundar..

lakhon daad~


2nd wala to ultimate hai..

jaise ek baap apnme bete ke liye keh raha ho..door se use apni maa ke anchal ki chhaon me dekh kar uske liye khush hote huye to kabhi uski fikra me khote huye..


bahut badhiya sanjeev bhaii..

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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 07:45:41 AM »
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तकलीफ़ों मे भी जब मुस्करा देता है वो,
मुसीबतों को जैसे हरा देता है वो,

माँ के आँसुओं का सबब पूछता है,
खुद के दर्द को भुला देता है वो,

बैचेनियाँ बढ़ती है तो पहलू बदल-कर,
मेरे सीने मे खुद को, छुपा लेता है वो,

कहानियों मे बहकर, लोरियों मे घुलकर,
पलकों मे नींद को बुला लेता है वो,
 
कृष्णा, छोटा भीम और डोरेमान को बुलाकर,
सपनो की महफ़िल सज़ा लेता है वो,

इक हसरत है के उससे ये हुनर सीखू,
कैसे हर एक को अपना बना लेता है वो
,

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..Aisi Poetry Jo dil se nikalti hai uska koi mol nahi hota..aapne apne bete ke liye jo likha hai, sach kahoon to Padhte-padhte Aankhein Nam ho gayi..bahut hi khooooooooobsurat Jazbaat Mere Bhai..bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2011, 05:42:32 PM »
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abhi bhai,
dil se shukriya aapka..bahoot..aabhar

hmmmmmm bahoot shukriya..bhai khwaish....jazbaaton ko bakhoobi samjha aapne
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