अब माथे पर एक शिकन सी होती हे................

by pawan16 on March 05, 2012, 05:33:26 PM
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अब माथे पर एक शिकन सी होती हे,
की ये मोहब्ब्त कम क्यो नही होती हे,

ये खुदा की कार-गुजारी केसी हे दोस्त ,
जिसमे हर पल उलफन सी होती हे,

खुदा की कायनात सराखो पर,
पर इस मोहब्ब्त मे बहुत उलझन होती हे,

हर पल जीते हे सब ,
पर इस मोहब्ब्त मे तडपन बहुत होती हे,

जिंदगी मे दो पल चलते नंही,
हर पल एक अडचन होती हे,

जितने को कोई जंहा जीत ले,
पर जो मोहब्ब्त जीत ले,
उसके आगे  सर झुकना  मजबूरी होती हे....
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2012, 06:25:31 PM »
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beautiful Creation pawan ! Very Beautiful !!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2012, 06:58:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob kaha pawan ji
अब माथे पर एक शिकन सी होती हे,
की ये मोहब्ब्त कम क्यो नही होती हे,

ये खुदा की कार-गुजारी केसी हे दोस्त ,
जिसमे हर पल उलफन सी होती हे,

खुदा की कायनात सराखो पर,
पर इस मोहब्ब्त मे बहुत उलझन होती हे,

हर पल जीते हे सब ,
पर इस मोहब्ब्त मे तडपन बहुत होती हे,

जिंदगी मे दो पल चलते नंही,
हर पल एक अडचन होती हे,

जितने को कोई जंहा जीत ले,
पर जो मोहब्ब्त जीत ले,
उसके आगे  सर झुकना  मजबूरी होती हे....
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 07:57:05 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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sukriya naysha ji...........
sukriya amit sir......
sukriya thohid sir........
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2012, 06:56:00 AM »
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pawan16 ji,

Good....nice thoughts..

Keep on writing...all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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thanks sainiji......
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sukriya bhut bhhut satish sir......bas apka hu hi saath chaiyie.....
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